WIP: Cover of Fall of Cybertron's "Humbling River"

Hey everybody! How are you all doing?
I thought I might share an upcoming cover I'm making, as you've clearly seen on the title of this thread. What you will hear is a sample of what is being made.
The purpose of this cover is to celebrate in high anticipation the upcoming Transformers game. Having already enjoyed the previous one, I wanted to make High Moon studios a present, which will become this cover.
By no means do I plan to surpass Puscifier, because they are too awesome. They also have nigh unlimited ressources of professional material, while I have to resort to amateur music program (Garage Band) and (this is embarassing) pots, pans and chopsticks to do drums.
Despite that, I really want to make a good cover, because I think the people at High Moon studios deserve every appraisal they can get.
Below, you'll find a sample/preview of the cover. It's not much, but tell me what you think and what I should improve.

Great start.

Hey everybody. I have officially finished the cover of "Humbling River"... But I won't upload it till July 28th. Anybody know what kind of special day that is?

That sounds awesome! Love the WIP.
And what day...
Your birthday?

Thanks for your comment! And no, it won't be my birthday (mine's on the 19th, lol). It's someone VERY KNOWN in the Transformers franchise. In my opinion, if someone else had taken his role, I believe we wouldn't be as emotionally attached to the leader of the Autobots as we are now.
Now can you guess who I'm talking about?

Gee, I wonder who that may be...

I almost forgot it was his birthday that day. Which is odd, because it's a day after mine!

Wow, really? Yes, it does raise some questions as to how you could forget such a birthday... Maybe it's because you're thinking too much about what you want to get for your own birthday...? XP

Well, I'll accept the complete version of this song as my gift.
You'll still be a day late though

Well, I've completed the cover. So, here it is! While it is dedicated to High Moon Studios for their fantastic work on Transformers: War for Cybertron and its promising sequel, this cover is also acts as my Birthday gift to Peter Cullen, who just turned 71 today.


Once again, thank you, High Moon Studios, for the fun gaming experience, and Happy Birthday, Mr Cullen. ^^ May you inspire many more to come.

For some one who used pots and pans, you did a marvelous job of this and you sang beautifully! Well done! I hope Mr. Cullen had a wonderful birthday.