This Isn't A Take On Funnies, No Laughs Here. This Is All Serious! No doing , you're too strong for that. do instead. allowed too. without further ado, Accel Studios Presents... Transformers: Extreme Comix! -------------------------------------------------------------------------- EPISODE ONE
Pretty good start, but you got a lot to improve. Take it from me, change text colors and stuff. Fez has been on my case about it for weeks XD And also, arms/hands in pics = no no
Seconded. I can't even stand seeing my own fingers in a pic. It throws me off completly. As for blurry images I can't complain because my camera isn't the best
Um, where do I even begin? I have to agree with what some of the others have already said... the pics are too blurry, the colored text is very hard to read, and having arms/hands shown in the pics holding the characters as they fly and such in a serious comic is a really big no-no (you can only get away with that sort of thing if the comic is a funny comic about you, the toy owner, and your toys). Oh, and using Paint for FX? In my opinion, it looks very horribly done. I suggest using GIMP (which is like Photoshop only it's free software you can download off the internet) for FX instead, and oh yeah, make sure to take a look at some of the Funnies Tutorials for how to make certain FX using GIMP. And for this being a serious comic... I honestly have no real idea what in the world is going on. You just jumped right in the middle of some action without first establishing through narration as to what the story is all about. It just... makes me think that you didn't take a whole lot of time to consider fleshing things out, story-wise, before jumping right into making a comic. Sorry if I seem too harsh with my criticism here, but... it's the honest truth and quite frankly, if you are really serious about making a comic, I recommend taking more time to develop things before you give this comic another shot -- not to mention, if you haven't already done so, take the time to read some of the serious comics here in the Funnies to get a gist of how they're generally done. Just my two cents, you can take it or leave it.
Erm, I'm not Autovolt. Autovolt hasn't even posted a reply in this comic yet, so I don't know where you got the idea that I'm Autovolt even though you clearly quoted my post and it says original quote by TRANS+CRAZY.
Maybe Maro got you confused because you and Autovolt tend to give out good advice that is worth listening too.
I'm sorry, but I actually cringed. There's so many questions I have in regards to this. 1: Do you not have a flat surface to stand your figures on? 2: How is Starscream gunning down so many Autobots and getting away with it? 3: Dead bodies everywhere, a help beacon is sent out, and it's WHEELJACK AND SKIDS that go to save them. Is there not anyone else? 4: Hands. There's no reason why you can't pose your figures. This brings me back to the first question: There's the floor if you need a flat service. Why not use it? Better yet, how are you taking pictures with one hand when you're jumbling your figures around? 5: Wheeljack wins somehow. HOW? WHAT HAPPENED? 6: I saved this for last because this applies to others as well. Why colour code your characters text?! Is drawing a tail too hard? or can you not just give it a proper background colour so that it's visible? You know it's hard to read, what makes you think anyone else is going to do any better? Only one thing left to do.
I'm here now. Wow just wow....this is such a riveting compelling drama....The GOAT trainwreck of the year. I think it would benefit from being more self aware and learning how to use special effects...oh and stop showing your hand in all this.
