The Lonely Revelation

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  1. BooyakaDragon

    BooyakaDragon I Don't Even Know

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    #5

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    Prologue almost complete!
     
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    BooyakaDragon I Don't Even Know

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    #6

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    #7 and #8 are the last ones in the Prologue.
     
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    Dog reminds me of Girphant
     
  4. BooyakaDragon

    BooyakaDragon I Don't Even Know

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    Girphant from Hearts of Plastic? Yeah, I realized that too when I was snapping the photos lol.
     
  5. Autovolt 127

    Autovolt 127 Get In The Titan, Prime!

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    He then realized toys can't drink. :lol  :lol  :lol 
     
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    Girphant is in Out of the Box. Either way I like where this is going.
     
  7. BooyakaDragon

    BooyakaDragon I Don't Even Know

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    It's been a while since I read that one, so I'm not surprised I got that wrong.
     
  8. BooyakaDragon

    BooyakaDragon I Don't Even Know

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    #7

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  9. Autovolt 127

    Autovolt 127 Get In The Titan, Prime!

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    :popcorn 
     
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    That's okay. Either way Giraphant is cool

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    AgentAlabama113 Wily Old Buzzard

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    This is pretty good so far. :popcorn 
     
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    The End of the Prologue!

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    D'aww?
     
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    awww
     
  15. BooyakaDragon

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    Okay, now that I finished the Prologue, it's time to start working on the main plot. Here's what I can tell you for now.

    -Whether or not I'll even make seasons for this is unknown. I might just call them story arcs, but we'll see.

    -The script for the first 5 pages is done, but I plan on having this series have up to 50 at the maximum as I don't wanna drag stuff on or risk continuing something that shouldn't go longer than it should.

    -As you can tell, my writing is centered around seriousness/sadness with mixtures of humor and happiness every now and then. So don't expect too much comedy as I stated before. I'm not good at jokes lol.

    Any feedback is welcome.
     
  16. BooyakaDragon

    BooyakaDragon I Don't Even Know

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    Wow it's been a month huh? Well good news.

    1. The script is done
    2. I actually have free time to do it now.
    3. Season 1-ish will maybe start today.
     
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    Yay