Transformers: Ultra Comix

Discussion in 'Transformers Funnies' started by Acceleration, May 4, 2014.

  1. Acceleration, May 4, 2014
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    Pretty Much My First TF Comic.
    Arc One: Battle Over Foods
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    Leave Your Feedback. Expect Some Yellow In The future!
     
  2. Stonecrusher, May 4, 2014
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    Stonecrusher

    Stonecrusher Just another Edgelord

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    ...Okay, it's a first attempt, you're learning, but dude...

    Those word bubbles.

    That blurry camera.

    That stupid punchline.

    IT WAS ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT!
     
  3. Acceleration, May 4, 2014
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    It Was A Mobile Phone, And My Hands Can't ever Seem To Stay Still, plus i use windows 7 paint. I purposely put that fourth wall break in.
     
  4. Maroyasha, May 4, 2014
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    Maroyasha

    Maroyasha IOU A Title

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    4th Wall Break = My vote!
    Camera Work as bad as me = Count me as a reader
    Punchlines that are cheesy you chuckle = I am definitely coming back for more!

    Just a piece of advice, try putting a background for the word bubbles.
     
  5. nobleboivin, May 4, 2014
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    nobleboivin Well-Known Member

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    You have a reader
     
  6. Acceleration, May 5, 2014
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    This is What I Meant By Seeing yellow.
     
  7. Acceleration, May 7, 2014
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    has this comic been forgotten?
     
  8. Blazere, May 7, 2014
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    Nope.

    This is a problem I had when I started my comic, I didn't have much viewers, just about 2.

    Over time that kinda greaw, and now I have 5. :lol 

    But just keep posting, and viewers will start coming in.

    Now if only I had some time to UPDATE MY DAMN COMIC
     
  9. Ranger Silver 6, May 7, 2014
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    Ranger Silver 6

    Ranger Silver 6 Bang Bang

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    I just can't read any of the text.
     
  10. Acceleration, May 13, 2014
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    expect one of the leaders to appear in the next comic!
     
  11. UltimateOptimus, May 15, 2014
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    UltimateOptimus Long-time Hungarian Truck

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    Yeah, Acceleration - but preferably with readable text.
     
  12. Acceleration, May 15, 2014
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    Here Comes The [CROSSOUT]Spiderman![/CROSSOUT] Ultra Comix Strip 3!
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    By Leader I Meant Leader For About 5 Seconds.
     
  13. Coffee, May 15, 2014
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    Well that was... something.

    Why'd You Capitalize Each Word Like This?
     
  14. Acceleration, May 16, 2014
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    It's a habit I have.
     
  15. Acceleration, May 16, 2014
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    remember screamer's box of stuff? we'll get on to it next comic.
     
  16. Acceleration, Jun 14, 2014
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    next update coming in the time between a few minutes to one hour
     
  17. Acceleration, Jun 14, 2014
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    Oh Boy! Starscream's Box Of Stuff!
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  18. Acceleration, Jun 17, 2014
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    seriously how does this comic have no popularity
     
  19. Acceleration, Aug 18, 2014
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    and i just now notice, this exists still. don't worry the next strip is coming soon