What is this? Where am I? What am I doing? You know when you have this insane idea that you just can't get out of your head and just have to act upon it? Yeah. ...yeah. I have this idea for a borderline serious/funny Transformers story, and decided, hey, I'm already writing three stories and have about five projects on my list, let's draw a comic! So I really don't know whether I'll even finish this, let alone draw a second page but if people are interested then I guess I'll see what I can do. Episode 1: Here! Episode 2 + Recap page and marginally better art: http://www.tfw2005.com/boards/trans...transformers-spacefarers-23.html#post11726015
Holy CRAP. The art here... it's just phenomenal. Ditto with the writing. Please keep drawing these, because I really want to know where this goes.
Page 2 So yeah this took a week instead of half of one as I originally intended... My reasoning for this is because, well, this is my first go at making a comic digitally, and really I've used this page to determine how much I can do in what period of time. Other than that I think I'll be able to speed things up in the future, might use less detail to save time. Also sometimes editing programs just confuse me. Just some quick banter to start things off, I promise that the next page will have some more context though. Also I'm sorry for the balloons in the first panel. They read from the lower left up and I know it looks weird, I tried changing it in any way I could, but eventually I was too far gone to go back.
I can't tell if Optimus is supposed to be a dick here or not, because frankly I can sympathize with him. I'd get irritable too if I had to listen to Prowl rant about a report for five hours all the freaking time. On a side note, I love the poses you've given the characters, particularly the slouch Optimus has in the first panel. I like the choice of colors, too-- kind of washed out, like MTMTE. I really hope you keep working on this, because this is awesome.
I'm really digging this so far. I can sympathize with Optimus here a bit because who would want to have Prowl of all people rant at you?
Yes, he reminds me a lot of someone else's Prime. >w> Which is a good thing, we need more Primes like that.