Transformers: Epsilon!

This is a Paint drawing that could turn into a comic. *wink

Criticism is appreciated  

 

Hmmm....  now let's see where this goes.

 

Interesting. Too little presented here to provide any sort of feedback, but I am curious where this goes.

 

.......I see promise  

 

Thanks guys!

I really thought with my level of Paint I would get worse feedback.

Next comic will come Friday!

 

I apologize for the change in style, I had a lesson from a friend.

Tell me if you like the last 2 panels (with drawings, not text) that utilize the style or the old style.

 

Did everybody lose interest in me?

 

Well, you can't expect instant responses.

 

Stoner is right

Yet I wait for more

 

I'm sorry guys; my file got corrupted and I have to start over.

 

This isn't going well is it?

 

Not every comic gets a bunch of readers. Plus your title is nonsense.

 

He has a point it takes time and I don't get the title?

 

I'm sorry guys.

I meant it to be an abbreviation, but...

 

Transformers Epsilon

 

Okay then,

WELCOME,

TRANSFORMERS: EPSILON!

 

Good! Now you need a story.

 

The last two speech boxes weren't cleared when I uploaded them, sorry

 

It's okay.....but he's right you need a story