RiD dialogue rewrite!

Discussion in 'Transformers Funnies' started by Hired Goons, Aug 8, 2013.

  1. Hired Goons

    Hired Goons Gassy autobot.

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    I bought an inked page from one of the Robots In Disguise inkers. It was a page I really liked because in the previous issue, well, something happened to one of my favorite characters, and I thought he was DEAD! OH NO! This page made it better. And then I SAW THE PAGE for sale! And I bought it!

    And then I got ADD and decided to fill in my own dialogue. Several times over.

    Apologies to the comics creators.

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  2. Stonecrusher

    Stonecrusher Just another Edgelord

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    Hm.
     
  3. AgentAlabama113

    AgentAlabama113 Wily Old Buzzard

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    WTF is this? Its kinda interesting and weird at the same time.
     
  4. Jus09

    Jus09 Well-Known Member

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    The second attempt is probably the best out of the lot.
     
  5. Autovolt 127

    Autovolt 127 Get In The Titan, Prime!

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    This is a great idea. :lol 
     
  6. Hired Goons

    Hired Goons Gassy autobot.

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    Wow, I got...responses!

    "Interesting and weird" is fine with me.

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    Spelled "Autobots" wrong in BLITZWING's word balloon. (I said Astrotrain earlier.) Sorry! EDIT: FIXED IT! Whee!
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  7. AgentAlabama113

    AgentAlabama113 Wily Old Buzzard

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    :lol  better
     
  8. Hired Goons

    Hired Goons Gassy autobot.

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    Honest question: Why do people hate Regeneration 1?
     
  10. updatedude

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    Pretty darn witty, the lot of these.
     
  11. AgentAlabama113

    AgentAlabama113 Wily Old Buzzard

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    I dunno. I absolutely love it.
     
  12. Hired Goons

    Hired Goons Gassy autobot.

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    ...I just thought it'd be funny if Metalhawk's last line was to beg to not have a crossover with an unrelated title. I've only read a few issues of RegenOne, I'm not a fan, but HEY, I'm not a fan of the way Sideswipe is shown as just a dumb guard/thug in RiD.

    Why, the comic should be about HIM! "The Transformers Starring Sideswipe!" or "Sideswipe And These Other Transformers of Varying Importance" is a title I'D buy.

    Apologies to those who like Regeneration One is what I'm saying.

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  13. algo448

    algo448 Amateur Procrastinator

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    I agree: "This repeating page of gags should be the next cartoon" :lolol 

    Great stuff man.
     
  14. Hired Goons

    Hired Goons Gassy autobot.

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    :lol 
     
  16. Purple Heart

    Purple Heart Some other time..

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    HAHA Great stuff here!
     
  17. Hired Goons

    Hired Goons Gassy autobot.

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    I like the little tags at the end of the Marvel movies. But I was barraged with "make sure you sit through ALL the credits!" emails and FB posts. For crying out loud, how do you not know at this point to do that with these movies?

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  19. Purple Heart

    Purple Heart Some other time..

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    YES!
     
  20. gawddammit

    gawddammit Rocketchoochoo

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    Is that Sideswipe in the top right? :0