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Old 03-08-2013, 07:48 PM   #1
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mandiprime97's Funnies (attempt)

Hey guys, after debating for a while, I've decided to start my own comic here on the Funnies forum. This is my first one, and I've never really done anything like this before, so constructive criticism is appreciated Also, due to my 11 hour shift at work on weekdays, most updates will take place on the weekend for now until I find the time. I'll get them to you ASAP. This will mostly contain (hopefully) funny/random strips, I can't ever keep up with storylines. For this first one, I'll be using one I posted in the Let's See Some Cool stuff 2013 thread recently. Instead of posting text bubbles, I'm just posting captions. So, enjoy my below average sense of humor!

Bumblebee Tries to Fly

"Bloop beep?" (Should I go for it?)

"Bleep boop!" (Yep, I'm going for it!)

"Beeeep!" (Jump)

"Bloop!" *thud*

"Beep!" *thud*

"Bleeoop!" *thud*

"Boop beep bloop.." (I'm a failure)

"Bumblebee sad? Me Grimlock here to cheer you up!" "Bleep?" (Really?)

*brofist*

"Although me Grimlock not so sure about this.." "Beep bloop!" (Yee haw!)


Sorry about bad lighting, last few were taken at the bottom of the stairs.
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Old 03-08-2013, 08:12 PM   #2
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Old 03-08-2013, 08:28 PM   #3
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Old 03-08-2013, 09:00 PM   #4
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Awww, it's very sweet of Grimlock to help out 'Bee at the end and Bumblebee is just so adorable all throughout.

Also, good first attempt at a photocomic.
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Old 03-08-2013, 10:19 PM   #5
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Like I said, my sense of humor isn't great
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Awww, it's very sweet of Grimlock to help out 'Bee at the end and Bumblebee.

Also, good first attempt at a photocomic.
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Old 03-08-2013, 10:52 PM   #6
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Quick word of advice, try to use speech bubbles. Try using an Image Manipulation program like GIMP or Photoshop

Other than that, this looks promising
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Old 03-09-2013, 12:22 AM   #7
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was good, but i recommend you to add speech bubbles on the pictures, just like argentonoboy said
Check the Transformers/Marvel Universe

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Old 03-09-2013, 07:59 AM   #8
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Quick word of advice, try to use speech bubbles. Try using an Image Manipulation program like GIMP or Photoshop

Other than that, this looks promising
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was good, but i recommend you to add speech bubbles on the pictures, just like argentonoboy said
Alright, I'll put speech bubbles in the next update.
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Old 03-09-2013, 09:35 AM   #9
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