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Old 03-01-2013, 11:41 PM   #1
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Transformers Matrix.

At long last people here is the start of my very own TF universe inspired by talented people such as Stonecrusher and Zombiebot has finally arrived! I should say however that I'm still finaling the designs of the major Autobots and Decepticons right now so I won't do daily updates right away. When I do get them together then it'll be daily I promise.

So here's the start of the pilot arc. Feel free to offer advices and other forms of criticisms. I'm all ears.




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Old 03-01-2013, 11:53 PM   #2
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Very good start, Kaijuguy! I honestly think you've done a much better job at setting a stage of scenery than either I or Stonecrusher have. The planets and comets are simple, but help out tons with making the world feel alive. If I have to criticize, I'd just say get a scanner or something, because that way you'd be able to get the entire page instead of having to photgraph every panel, but I can still read it just fine so it's more a nitpick than anything else. In any case, I love the start and I'm definitely looking forward to more! Keep up the good work!
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Old 03-01-2013, 11:58 PM   #3
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Interesting start. I'll echo the scanner comment and add that maybe you should use a program to add in the dialogue so it's a bit easier to read.

Also, very nice Starscream design.

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Old 03-02-2013, 01:03 AM   #4
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Very good start, Kaijuguy! I honestly think you've done a much better job at setting a stage of scenery than either I or Stonecrusher have. The planets and comets are simple, but help out tons with making the world feel alive. If I have to criticize, I'd just say get a scanner or something, because that way you'd be able to get the entire page instead of having to photgraph every panel, but I can still read it just fine so it's more a nitpick than anything else. In any case, I love the start and I'm definitely looking forward to more! Keep up the good work!
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Interesting start. I'll echo the scanner comment and add that maybe you should use a program to add in the dialogue so it's a bit easier to read.

Also, very nice Starscream design.
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Old 03-02-2013, 01:31 AM   #5
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A very good start so far. Starscream looks pretty interesting and I am eager to check this story out and its future updates.
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Old 03-02-2013, 01:33 AM   #6
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Guys a scanner while would help is hard to come by I should know I hardly ever get too use mines.........it's complicated

Nice start hope too see........MORE!!!
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Old 03-02-2013, 02:15 AM   #7
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Guys a scanner while would help is hard to come by I should know I hardly ever get too use mines.........it's complicated

Nice start hope too see........MORE!!!
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Old 03-02-2013, 03:20 AM   #8
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Oh god, If you just got a scanner for this, I think the only real complaint I have about this comic would be gone. ^^

Great start and impressive animation!
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Old 03-02-2013, 05:49 AM   #9
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Very nice start. I'm looking forward to more.

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This... Is looking pretty epic. I'll definately be following this.
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