Transformers Matrix.

Discussion in 'Transformers Funnies' started by kaijuguy19, Mar 1, 2013.

  1. kaijuguy19

    kaijuguy19 Keyblade Wielder

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    At long last people here is the start of my very own TF universe inspired by talented people such as Stonecrusher and Zombiebot has finally arrived! :D  I should say however that I'm still finaling the designs of the major Autobots and Decepticons right now so I won't do daily updates right away. When I do get them together then it'll be daily I promise.

    So here's the start of the pilot arc. Feel free to offer advices and other forms of criticisms. I'm all ears.

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  2. Necromaster

    Necromaster FEAR ME MORTALS

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    Very good start, Kaijuguy! I honestly think you've done a much better job at setting a stage of scenery than either I or Stonecrusher have. The planets and comets are simple, but help out tons with making the world feel alive. If I have to criticize, I'd just say get a scanner or something, because that way you'd be able to get the entire page instead of having to photgraph every panel, but I can still read it just fine so it's more a nitpick than anything else. In any case, I love the start and I'm definitely looking forward to more! Keep up the good work!
     
  3. Crystal Convoy

    Crystal Convoy Huh? TFW2005 Supporter

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    Interesting start. I'll echo the scanner comment and add that maybe you should use a program to add in the dialogue so it's a bit easier to read.

    Also, very nice Starscream design.
     
  4. Stonecrusher

    Stonecrusher Just another Edgelord

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    Thirded with the scanner idea.
     
  5. GuardianAngel87

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    A very good start so far. Starscream looks pretty interesting and I am eager to check this story out and its future updates. :popcorn 
     
  6. Ømnidrive

    Ømnidrive Stop.....think......fart.....and keep on going

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    Guys a scanner while would help is hard to come by I should know I hardly ever get too use mines.........it's complicated

    Nice start hope too see........MORE!!! :D 
     
  7. Stonecrusher

    Stonecrusher Just another Edgelord

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    I'm sure you can find some on the internet... somewhere...
     
  8. GingaMagnus

    GingaMagnus Designated Toku Nerd

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    Oh god, If you just got a scanner for this, I think the only real complaint I have about this comic would be gone. ^^

    Great start and impressive animation!
     
  9. Wars

    Wars I ate the WHOLE plate

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    Very nice start. I'm looking forward to more.
     
  10. LegoTFGuy

    LegoTFGuy aka BrickBotGuy

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    This... Is looking pretty epic. I'll definately be following this. :thumb 
     
  11. Ømnidrive

    Ømnidrive Stop.....think......fart.....and keep on going

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  12. Noise Maker

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    Nice start! The backgrounds look great, and Starscream's facial expressions are very well done.

    We've only seen a bit of it so far, but I'm really liking this Starscream's personality. Can't wait for more. :D 
     
  13. Autovolt 127

    Autovolt 127 Get In The Titan, Prime!

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    Cool seeing your using your original designs for a comic.

    My only complaint is that you had to take pictures of it. otherwise nice start. :popcorn 
     
  14. Rewind Eject

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    Great start Kaiju. You did a very good job hooking us into your universe already. Starscream seems like quite the interesting character. That said, I still don't like the white stripes behind/on his head. Just a small aesthetic distaste. It doesn't really affect the comic any.

    Also, I loved the little homage of your Starscream doubting the G1 Starscream's original motto. I'm waiting eagerly for the next update.
     
  15. Jaller8240

    Jaller8240 Refuses to Believe

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    That is the best design for a Starscream I have ever seen! Imagine if it appeared in any official TF fiction!
     
  16. Kylehudson14

    Kylehudson14 On when I'm on

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    Hmm, interested to see where this road will lead. :)  Good to see Starscream isnt an arrogant ass right from the start
     
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    Ezilla82 Total Randomness Personified

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    Interesting.
     
  18. Stonecrusher

    Stonecrusher Just another Edgelord

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    ...*Tumbleweed*

    Huh.
     
  19. kaijuguy19

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    Thanks guys and trust me I'm still trying to get my scanner thing worked out.

    Thanks. :) 

    That's true.

    Aw thanks dude. :) 

    Thanks guys! :thumb 

    You'll love more of him later one. :) 

    Yeah I know.

    Which you'll be seeing right now. :) 

    Indeed. :D 

    Truse me he's actually a nice guy once you know him better.

    Yeah sorry about the long wait guys but now that I've gotten all my designs figured out it's back to the show! However my scanner thing isn't worked out still but I've tried a different technique with the camera which hopefully will come off better. I'm also not promising that updates will appear every day at least for now but updates will come out regulary. The earliest would be around every 2 days at least.

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  20. Stonecrusher

    Stonecrusher Just another Edgelord

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    Yay, he back!