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Old 12-21-2012, 04:34 PM   #1
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Transformers: Battle for Earth

Yea repost here you go!!!





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Old 12-21-2012, 05:12 PM   #2
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This is actually a pretty good start. The introductory bit works pretty well at establishing the setting, and the characters are plenty expressive. One thing I'd reccomend, though, is to be easy on the language later on. The mods get pretty agitated when there's nonstop F-bombs.

Regardless, this is a decent start, and the characters look to be enjoyable. Looking forward to more!


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Old 12-21-2012, 06:55 PM   #3
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Not bad. Not bad at all.

I recommend photobucket, though.
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Old 12-21-2012, 07:00 PM   #4
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Good start so far. Though it could use some color to help break things up.

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Old 12-22-2012, 08:57 AM   #5
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Good start so far. Though it could use some color to help break things up.
I thought about color so every blue-moon I'll color some stuff in!!!

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Old 12-22-2012, 11:03 AM   #6
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Oh, Soundwave...
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Old 12-23-2012, 07:26 AM   #7
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Good start. Though you should really find a way to imbed the images in the post- all I got is a bunch of little error boxes, so I have to open up the attachments.
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Old 12-31-2012, 10:38 AM   #8
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These pic where taken from my I-Pod sorry for the late updates grandparents scanner was down so........yea anyway enjoy!!!





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Old 12-31-2012, 10:41 AM   #9
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Old 12-31-2012, 10:43 AM   #10
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They Just keep coming!!!!




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Thats the last of them for now anyway lighting was terrible sorry.......Just found out that the scanner was fixed.......YAY FOR ME..............OH also if you can't understand or read what it says let me know and I'll help you!!!
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