Transformers: Battle for Earth

Discussion in 'Transformers Funnies' started by Ømnidrive, Dec 21, 2012.

  1. Ømnidrive

    Ømnidrive Stop.....think......fart.....and keep on going

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    Yea repost here you go!!!

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  2. Necromaster

    Necromaster FEAR ME MORTALS

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    This is actually a pretty good start. The introductory bit works pretty well at establishing the setting, and the characters are plenty expressive. One thing I'd reccomend, though, is to be easy on the language later on. The mods get pretty agitated when there's nonstop F-bombs.

    Regardless, this is a decent start, and the characters look to be enjoyable. Looking forward to more!
     
  3. Stonecrusher

    Stonecrusher Just another Edgelord

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    Not bad. Not bad at all.

    I recommend photobucket, though.
     
  4. kaijuguy19

    kaijuguy19 Keyblade Wielder

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    Good start so far. :thumb  Though it could use some color to help break things up.
     
  5. Ømnidrive

    Ømnidrive Stop.....think......fart.....and keep on going

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    I thought about color so every blue-moon I'll color some stuff in!!!

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  6. Stonecrusher

    Stonecrusher Just another Edgelord

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    Oh, Soundwave... :lolol 
     
  7. LegoTFGuy

    LegoTFGuy aka BrickBotGuy

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    :lol  Good start. Though you should really find a way to imbed the images in the post- all I got is a bunch of little error boxes, so I have to open up the attachments.
     
  8. Ømnidrive

    Ømnidrive Stop.....think......fart.....and keep on going

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    These pic where taken from my I-Pod sorry for the late updates grandparents scanner was down so........yea anyway enjoy!!!

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    Ømnidrive Stop.....think......fart.....and keep on going

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    MORE UPDATES.........yay

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  10. Ømnidrive

    Ømnidrive Stop.....think......fart.....and keep on going

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    They Just keep coming!!!!

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    Thats the last of them for now anyway lighting was terrible sorry.......Just found out that the scanner was fixed.......YAY FOR ME..............OH also if you can't understand or read what it says let me know and I'll help you!!!
     
  11. Stonecrusher

    Stonecrusher Just another Edgelord

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    QUARTZIA?! Wat r u doing? Y U doing things here?

    Stahp.
     
  12. kaijuguy19

    kaijuguy19 Keyblade Wielder

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    What a lot of updates! :lol 
     
  13. Ømnidrive

    Ømnidrive Stop.....think......fart.....and keep on going

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    You said I could use it side Quartz is gonna help jackie out!!! :D ............................................DAMN IT SPOILED IT AGAIN................................(Takes deep-breath).........WHY GOD......WHHHHHHHHHHHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY?!!!!
     
  14. Purple Heart

    Purple Heart Some other time..

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    annnnnn done!
     
  15. Ømnidrive

    Ømnidrive Stop.....think......fart.....and keep on going

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    ..................................You enjoy me making accidental spoilers huh? ):/
     
  16. Stonecrusher

    Stonecrusher Just another Edgelord

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    Perhaps.

    u mad?
     
  17. Ømnidrive

    Ømnidrive Stop.....think......fart.....and keep on going

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    Update!!!

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  18. Stonecrusher

    Stonecrusher Just another Edgelord

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    Prowl:...You look weird in that art style.

    Jazz: At least I showed up.

    Prowl: touche.
     
  19. Ømnidrive

    Ømnidrive Stop.....think......fart.....and keep on going

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    Oh Prowl...........you'll get your turn :ev:  *MWUHAHAHAHAHA* :ev:  !!!!

    UPDATE!!!
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  20. Gunnisberg

    Gunnisberg Give us your best shot!

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    The quartz must be the nether equivalent of TFW.

    Scan them if you can plz.