This is actually a pretty good start. The introductory bit works pretty well at establishing the setting, and the characters are plenty expressive. One thing I'd reccomend, though, is to be easy on the language later on. The mods get pretty agitated when there's nonstop F-bombs. Regardless, this is a decent start, and the characters look to be enjoyable. Looking forward to more!
Good start. Though you should really find a way to imbed the images in the post- all I got is a bunch of little error boxes, so I have to open up the attachments.
These pic where taken from my I-Pod sorry for the late updates grandparents scanner was down so........yea anyway enjoy!!!
They Just keep coming!!!! --------------- Thats the last of them for now anyway lighting was terrible sorry.......Just found out that the scanner was fixed.......YAY FOR ME..............OH also if you can't understand or read what it says let me know and I'll help you!!!
You said I could use it side Quartz is gonna help jackie out!!! ............................................DAMN IT SPOILED IT AGAIN................................(Takes deep-breath).........WHY GOD......WHHHHHHHHHHHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY?!!!!