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Grimlock need anger management...

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Old 02-23-2012, 10:48 AM   #1
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Grimlock need anger management...

Had a lot of free time waiting for a driver to collect a return so decided to make a sorta comic/episode story. C&C's more than welcome.

Grimlock overhears Jazz telling Optimus "the Dinobots aren't smart enough to handle that mission, you know that, send me instead"
Grimlock gets angry and charges in, Optimus orders Jazz to "transform" and both do and roll out. Grimlock starts chasing down Optimus and Jazz


Optimus orders Jazz to split up and says "we need to calm him down"

Grimlock decides to go after Jazz first shouting "Dinobots no smart, i'll show you who's no smart for making me Grimlock angry!"


Grimlock closing in on Jazz gets blindsided as Optimus returns to help Jazz, knocking Grimlock off his feet, Optimus tries to calm Grimlock down saying "Jazz didn't mean it Grimlock, you know he talks before he thinks. Calm down and we can talk"


Grimlock -"No! Me Grimlock gonna show stupid car bot who's no smart!" Optimus takes his chance to get away while Grimlocks still down, hoping Grimlock will calm down eventually


Grimlock annoyed and dizzy gets to his feet slowly, even angrier than before "Me Grimlock gonna teach stupid bot a lesson, Grrrrr!"


Grimlock spots Optimus and Jazz in the distance and continues the chase this time solely after Optimus. Grimlock - "Roaarrr!!!"

Grimlock's chase continues


Megatron and Starscream have been watching in the distance and Megatron orders Devastator to destroy Optimus Prime. "Devastator smash Optimus!"




"Me Grimlock smash Optimus no you"

Grimlock attacks Devastator


But eats a left hook for his trouble

"No-one can match the might of Devastator"

"Jazz go get help, i'll distract Devastator"




"Stand down Devastator!"




"Hah, call that a weapon?"

"This is a weapon!"


"I brought Wheeljack Prime, he said he's got a new invention that'll stop Devastator"



"Just give me a astro second to set it up Prime"

"Me Grimlock madder now!!!"

"Out of way little bot"

"Wheeeljack you okay?"

"I'm fine Prime, just need to reset my stabilizers"

"Let's get you back to Ratchet to make sure. Jazz, cover Grimlock, i'll send backup"

"Me Grimlock break your stupid gun"

"I don't need a gun to beat you stupid Dinobot"







"Me Grimlock gonna smash you now!"

"Come get some then stupid Dinobot!"


"Arggghhh!!!"


"Me Grimlock am strongest of them all!!"

"Calmed down yet buddy?"

"Starscream to Megatron, Devastator is down, what an ingenious plan of yours! Lord Megatron"
"Starscream, go down and assist Devastator until he gets up"
"But, but Megatron....."
"That's an order Starscream! Now do it before i put you offline myself!"
"Why of course Lord Megatron......."
Com line cuts
"......one of these days i'll show you Megatron and i will be the new leader of the Decepticons!!!"


The End...........for now.
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Old 02-23-2012, 10:52 AM   #2
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awsome, I envy your hercules.
What's next, devil arnval?

also try http://www.tfw2005.com/boards/transf...565-war-4.html
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Old 02-23-2012, 12:00 PM   #3
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Me likey

The way the story is told is great, thumbs up for that
And yes, I envy your Hercules indeed ^_^

Would like to see more of the same in the future

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Old 02-23-2012, 12:23 PM   #4
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Old 02-23-2012, 12:39 PM   #5
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Think Sheeba has done it before as I remember in her comic

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Old 02-23-2012, 01:10 PM   #6
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Cool story bro. Show some more.
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Old 02-23-2012, 02:27 PM   #7
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Wish i could, i can't advance the story further until i get other figs.

Quick question guys, if i do a crossover TF vs Marvel comic style story will it go in here or somewhere else?

Since some others (myself included) use figures other than TF, like Gundams, Shinkis, and even some use Marvel figures for our comics

I think it's safe to assume it will still be displayed here

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Old 02-23-2012, 08:47 PM   #8
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Wish i could, i can't advance the story further until i get other figs.

Quick question guys, if i do a crossover TF vs Marvel comic style story will it go in here or somewhere else?
As long as there's a TF in the pics, I the yer safe

What scale marvels figs you plan to use?...those super tiny ones?...thatd be really cool!
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Old 02-24-2012, 09:25 AM   #9
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if you could find the mini ones, that would be really cool!...it would make Herc look huge and you could still use other TFs w/o them looking completely ridiculous next to the figures...

though, do the mini ones have any articulation?
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