Grimlock need anger management...

dkr7 · 02-23-2012, 10:48 AM

Had a lot of free time waiting for a driver to collect a return so decided to make a sorta comic/episode story. C&C's more than welcome.

Grimlock overhears Jazz telling Optimus "the Dinobots aren't smart enough to handle that mission, you know that, send me instead"
Grimlock gets angry and charges in, Optimus orders Jazz to "transform" and both do and roll out. Grimlock starts chasing down Optimus and Jazz

Optimus orders Jazz to split up and says "we need to calm him down"

Grimlock decides to go after Jazz first shouting "Dinobots no smart, i'll show you who's no smart for making me Grimlock angry!"

Grimlock closing in on Jazz gets blindsided as Optimus returns to help Jazz, knocking Grimlock off his feet, Optimus tries to calm Grimlock down saying "Jazz didn't mean it Grimlock, you know he talks before he thinks. Calm down and we can talk"

Grimlock -"No! Me Grimlock gonna show stupid car bot who's no smart!" Optimus takes his chance to get away while Grimlocks still down, hoping Grimlock will calm down eventually

Grimlock annoyed and dizzy gets to his feet slowly, even angrier than before "Me Grimlock gonna teach stupid bot a lesson, Grrrrr!"

Grimlock spots Optimus and Jazz in the distance and continues the chase this time solely after Optimus. Grimlock - "Roaarrr!!!"

Grimlock's chase continues

Megatron and Starscream have been watching in the distance and Megatron orders Devastator to destroy Optimus Prime. "Devastator smash Optimus!"

"Me Grimlock smash Optimus no you"

Grimlock attacks Devastator

But eats a left hook for his trouble

"No-one can match the might of Devastator"

"Jazz go get help, i'll distract Devastator"

"Stand down Devastator!"

"Hah, call that a weapon?"

"This is a weapon!"

"I brought Wheeljack Prime, he said he's got a new invention that'll stop Devastator"

"Just give me a astro second to set it up Prime"

"Me Grimlock madder now!!!"

"Out of way little bot"

"Wheeeljack you okay?"

"I'm fine Prime, just need to reset my stabilizers"

"Let's get you back to Ratchet to make sure. Jazz, cover Grimlock, i'll send backup"

"Me Grimlock break your stupid gun"

"I don't need a gun to beat you stupid Dinobot"

"Me Grimlock gonna smash you now!"

"Come get some then stupid Dinobot!"

"Arggghhh!!!"

"Me Grimlock am strongest of them all!!"

"Calmed down yet buddy?"

"Starscream to Megatron, Devastator is down, what an ingenious plan of yours! Lord Megatron"
"Starscream, go down and assist Devastator until he gets up"
"But, but Megatron....."
"That's an order Starscream! Now do it before i put you offline myself!"
"Why of course Lord Megatron......."
Com line cuts
"......one of these days i'll show you Megatron and i will be the new leader of the Decepticons!!!"

The End...........for now.

The Ender · 02-23-2012, 10:52 AM

awsome, I envy your hercules.
What's next, devil arnval?

Thunder_Cracker · 02-23-2012, 12:00 PM

Me likey

The way the story is told is great, thumbs up for that

And yes, I envy your Hercules indeed ^_^

Would like to see more of the same in the future

Kryptokron · 02-23-2012, 12:23 PM

Thunder_Cracker · 02-23-2012, 12:39 PM

Think Sheeba has done it before as I remember in her comic

rxlthunder · 02-23-2012, 01:10 PM

Cool story bro. Show some more.

Thunder_Cracker · 02-23-2012, 02:27 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by dkr7

Wish i could, i can't advance the story further until i get other figs.

Quick question guys, if i do a crossover TF vs Marvel comic style story will it go in here or somewhere else?

Since some others (myself included) use figures other than TF, like Gundams, Shinkis, and even some use Marvel figures for our comics

I think it's safe to assume it will still be displayed here

G.I.EDDIE · 02-23-2012, 08:47 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by dkr7

Wish i could, i can't advance the story further until i get other figs.

Quick question guys, if i do a crossover TF vs Marvel comic style story will it go in here or somewhere else?

As long as there's a TF in the pics, I the yer safe

What scale marvels figs you plan to use?...those super tiny ones?...thatd be really cool!

G.I.EDDIE · 02-24-2012, 09:25 AM

if you could find the mini ones, that would be really cool!...it would make Herc look huge and you could still use other TFs w/o them looking completely ridiculous next to the figures...

though, do the mini ones have any articulation?

02-23-2012, 10:48 AM	#1
dkr7 "Argh' Hexagonal Nuts!" Join Date: Oct 2010 Posts: 1,946 News Credits: 9	Grimlock need anger management... Had a lot of free time waiting for a driver to collect a return so decided to make a sorta comic/episode story. C&C's more than welcome. Grimlock overhears Jazz telling Optimus "the Dinobots aren't smart enough to handle that mission, you know that, send me instead" Grimlock gets angry and charges in, Optimus orders Jazz to "transform" and both do and roll out. Grimlock starts chasing down Optimus and Jazz Optimus orders Jazz to split up and says "we need to calm him down" Grimlock decides to go after Jazz first shouting "Dinobots no smart, i'll show you who's no smart for making me Grimlock angry!" Grimlock closing in on Jazz gets blindsided as Optimus returns to help Jazz, knocking Grimlock off his feet, Optimus tries to calm Grimlock down saying "Jazz didn't mean it Grimlock, you know he talks before he thinks. Calm down and we can talk" Grimlock -"No! Me Grimlock gonna show stupid car bot who's no smart!" Optimus takes his chance to get away while Grimlocks still down, hoping Grimlock will calm down eventually Grimlock annoyed and dizzy gets to his feet slowly, even angrier than before "Me Grimlock gonna teach stupid bot a lesson, Grrrrr!" Grimlock spots Optimus and Jazz in the distance and continues the chase this time solely after Optimus. Grimlock - "Roaarrr!!!" Grimlock's chase continues Megatron and Starscream have been watching in the distance and Megatron orders Devastator to destroy Optimus Prime. "Devastator smash Optimus!" "Me Grimlock smash Optimus no you" Grimlock attacks Devastator But eats a left hook for his trouble "No-one can match the might of Devastator" "Jazz go get help, i'll distract Devastator" "Stand down Devastator!" "Hah, call that a weapon?" "This is a weapon!" "I brought Wheeljack Prime, he said he's got a new invention that'll stop Devastator" "Just give me a astro second to set it up Prime" "Me Grimlock madder now!!!" "Out of way little bot" "Wheeeljack you okay?" "I'm fine Prime, just need to reset my stabilizers" "Let's get you back to Ratchet to make sure. Jazz, cover Grimlock, i'll send backup" "Me Grimlock break your stupid gun" "I don't need a gun to beat you stupid Dinobot" "Me Grimlock gonna smash you now!" "Come get some then stupid Dinobot!" "Arggghhh!!!" "Me Grimlock am strongest of them all!!" "Calmed down yet buddy?" "Starscream to Megatron, Devastator is down, what an ingenious plan of yours! Lord Megatron" "Starscream, go down and assist Devastator until he gets up" "But, but Megatron....." "That's an order Starscream! Now do it before i put you offline myself!" "Why of course Lord Megatron......." Com line cuts "......one of these days i'll show you Megatron and i will be the new leader of the Decepticons!!!" The End...........for now.

02-23-2012, 10:52 AM	#2
The Ender avid indoorsman Join Date: Aug 2011 Posts: 646 Location: I'm not my car Collection Count: alto, whoops, I mean a lot	awsome, I envy your hercules. What's next, devil arnval? also try http://www.tfw2005.com/boards/transf...565-war-4.html

02-23-2012, 12:00 PM	#3
Thunder_Cracker Friendship is Evil!! Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 2,395 Location: Somewhere around these parts Collection Count: Too few to count	Me likey The way the story is told is great, thumbs up for that And yes, I envy your Hercules indeed ^_^ Would like to see more of the same in the future Last updated: 24-04-2010:"Hero Prologue: Remnants of The Aftermath"* DA Page: Fluxwise

02-23-2012, 12:23 PM	#4
Kryptokron Spontaneous Ankylosaur Join Date: Nov 2008 Posts: 540 Location: Calgary, Alberta Collection Count: 'Hoarders', here I come... News Credits: 1	Thanks to Karhukjnsi for the sig!

02-23-2012, 12:39 PM	#5
Thunder_Cracker Friendship is Evil!! Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 2,395 Location: Somewhere around these parts Collection Count: Too few to count	Think Sheeba has done it before as I remember in her comic Last updated: 24-04-2010:"Hero Prologue: Remnants of The Aftermath"* DA Page: Fluxwise

02-23-2012, 01:10 PM	#6
rxlthunder Banned Join Date: Mar 2011 Posts: 7,614 News Credits: 5	Cool story bro. Show some more.

02-24-2012, 09:25 AM	#9
G.I.EDDIE 3rd Parties > Hasbro Join Date: Mar 2008 Posts: 3,893 Location: SE Michigan :( News Credits: 2	if you could find the mini ones, that would be really cool!...it would make Herc look huge and you could still use other TFs w/o them looking completely ridiculous next to the figures... though, do the mini ones have any articulation?