Comic 10 The mini fig in the middle is suppose to be Diana and the legless person is my character's son wearing a shirt of my character.
The First Task part 1 Also I am planning on replacing the three Gurren Lagann copies with you readers. There will be at the most 5 readers for now, so comment for one of these colors (red, blue, green/silver, yellow/grey, or white) and first come first serve.
My only suggestion, which you seem to be already moving towards, is to be careful with panel counts. You get too many panels and you end up bogging the readers down. Sometimes it is better to split strips up into two shorter ones than to have one long one. Otherwise, a good start.
Of course. The rule of thumb, for me personally, is 4 panels for your standard strip, no more than 10, and even then it NEEDS to be worth it. Every panel should be trim and without fat...that is how you ensure your comic can be read with ease. Of course, that is purely my opinion...feel free to ignore or pay attention to it.
Sorry for this one being a little late. The First Task Part 2 Also I am trying out the eye glow effect for only the Unicons and any bionicle/herofactory built character
comic 11 PS. on panel 6 it should be Experimental Exosuit Oh and guys don't forget that there are still 2 more reader spots left for you guys to be (yellow/grey and white)