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Old 02-08-2012, 05:36 PM   #1
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Tracks And 'Jack's Fun Time Adventures

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Old 02-08-2012, 05:40 PM   #2
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Promising start when the seeds of a catastrophe are bein' planted right off, huh... WHOAH! You actually got that signature!? O_o Cool! ^^
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Old 02-08-2012, 05:42 PM   #3
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Great start. Can't wait to see more!

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Old 02-08-2012, 06:07 PM   #4
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I'm starting to like this!
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Old 02-08-2012, 06:19 PM   #5
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As a comic with two of my all time favorite autobots as the apparent stars, I'm already hooked

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Old 02-08-2012, 06:31 PM   #6
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Good start so far!

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Old 02-08-2012, 06:42 PM   #7
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Old 02-08-2012, 08:42 PM   #8
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Good start indeed. You have already hit several key factors for me: You are using voice bubbles (to make it easy to read), you are establishing 2 main characters first, then developing a supporting cast), and you understand comic flow pretty well.

I would suggest, as I do every new comic writer, that you select a max number of panels and stick to it (for example, my comic goes with 4 panels, as I feel that gives you the maximum payout of quick jokes with detailed story telling). Also, when in doubt, ask for help. I for one am always willing to hear out joke ideas (and as several writers will tell you, I give out jokes for use as well) and giving out pointers, so feel free to hit me up if you need help, and I am sure there are other people who would be willing to lend you an ear.

Again, good start.


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Old 02-09-2012, 06:13 AM   #9
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Wheeljack and Tracks as the main characters of a comic

Now that's something new and refreshing And you're off to a good start

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Old 02-09-2012, 06:35 AM   #10
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I foresee Dino-Pope putting in an appearance.

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