Ahh- Big pictures and readable text. NOW you have my attention. Looks good- loved the comment Shinken Red left lol One question though, not trying to be rude but: why does Roll have disturbingly blank eyes in the first and last pics? :s
I use those as shocked, oh yea, and scared eyes. Depanding on how she is wrtten in the story, but you will see more of those eyes as part of her character.
Pretty good for starting up I reccomend keeping it at PG-13 levels though so if you're gonna curse just simply censor it like f##k or something that and maybe flat out saying masturbation probably isn't that great of an idea either simply hinting at it with ratchet catching optimus's drift would be find, this is so that you avoid trouble but otherwise pretty funny stuff man.
I don't wish censor myself due to the fact, that censorship leads to the end of free speech. If your worried about kids swearing, they already do that anyways. Thanks for the comment though!
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