Basement Wars: Episode III Revenge of the Fallen starts here!: http://www.tfw2005.com/boards/trans...t-wars-episode-ii-second-basement-war-21.html Victory! Three years had passed since the re-colonization of The Basement. The Batmen were finally home, and peace ruled for nearly three years. But then came The Great War. Ra's al Ghul: Diseased maniac, stormed the Bat shelves in a lightning storm. Out of approximately four hundred Batmen and Robins, 92 fell. This was one of the gravest incidents to plague the Batman community. Al Ghul attacked with Batclones, Zords, Borohk, and even made Nocturn enter the fray. In the meantime, the Transformers waged a war of their own in a distant section of The Basement, however the Autobots and the Decepticons reached a ceasefire that was to last while the war between the Batmen and Ra's al Ghul went on. Eventually, Ra's al Ghul's forces were annihilated by an onslaught of vintage vehicles as Ra's al Ghul prepared to detonate the entire Bat shelfs, Transformer shelves, and even the entire dinosaur population to turn The Basement into a barren land for re-colonization and to restore The Basement's natural form. Ra's al Ghul fled on Serpentera, but Bruce Wayne/Batman caught up to him, defeated him and left him to die as Serpentera was destroyed by the Aerial Fleet. "Are you finally prepared to take a life, Detective"? "I won't kill you, but I don't have to save you. Good bye, Ra's!" "What?! Detective?! DETECTIVE! YOU CANNOT LEAVE ME HERE LIKE THIS! Oh no..." "FIRE AT WILL!" "At last, the war is over..." However, in the coming weeks, a new threat emerged...
Um, forgive me for saying so, but... how exactly is this a comic? It feels more like a fanfic with pictures.
"WHY ARE THEY MAKING US WAIT SO LONG?! WHYYYY!" Said Dramole "Baaaaaa patience baaaa" said Robogoat. Most of the baddies, criminals and resented folks of The Basement were convocated for a meeting at Mr. Freeze's fortress. The invitation was sent through facebook, and most baddies chose to attend. Many of them were simply hopefuls in line to gain some experience from the professionals, while some of them were former Batmen who were dumped for various reasons. But one baddie, one who wanted revenge for a mishap with the Batmen four years ago, was most eager to get inside. "Don't worry folks, we will enter the fortress soon. A big destiny awaits us!" Max Shreck responded in a thick East Coast accent "Lex, business partner, one-man conglomerate. I wish I had seen you sooner. You may be asking yourself what's a poor shmuck like myself doing here" "Maximillian Shreck, is that really you? what's a poor shmuck like yourself referring to someone such as myself as if we had known each other for more than five minutes?" Responded Lex in a higher than thou attitude. "There's no such thing as too much powa, Lex. You're going to need the bills to make war with an army of men in underoos" calmly said Shreck "I thought you had better fish to fry. Or was it better cats to fry? I don't remember, nor do I care. Get out of my sight, I have some business to attend to" said Lex, parting Shreck aside. "I AM our business, Mister Luthor. My experience is bigger than the both of us. This Legion of Doom was co-founded by me since I had my face chewed on sixteen years ago. Maybe you just don't want to be a part of it. Maybe you're just bored, y'know, since there is no Supermen here. Consida this a blessing, Mister Luthor." responded Shreck "By the end of the day, you will be dead, and I will have taken your place, Mr 'Shmuck' or however you say it. Hahaha" whispered Lex into Shreck's ear as the gates opened. "Welcome to The Legion of Doom, gentlemen" announced Shreck. All the baddies poured inside, squeezing one another. The biggest ones got front seats. Lex promptly climbed the podium and stood there as if he were an actual member. But nobody stopped him. His presence was more intimidating than the ugliest of evil space aliens. His nicely pressed shirt, his tie, and his Kryptonite boots made most of the common baddies gasp in awe. "Awghm" "SETTLE DOWN EVERYBODY, SETTLE DOWN. YOU HAVVE BEEN CONVOCAITED TO THIES MEETING AS WE NAOW FAYSE AN EMERGENCY AND A POSSIBLE MASS EXODUS. LET ME INTROUDUCE MYSELF. I AM MISTAH FREEZE, AND DIS IS AWR FORTRESS. I AM CURRENT GOVERNATOR OF THIS LEGIOWN. MEMBERS INTRODUCE YOURSELF" "I am The Scarecrow. Founding member. Been here since '92." "What's green, wears sexy spandex and smarter AND holier than all of you? Me of course! Just answer the question Hhhehehahihihheh" Said a strange man wearing sexy green tights. "DEEZE ARE MY ASSOCIATES MISTA BANE AND POISON IVY" "I am Clock King. Make a comment about my lack of hair and I will subtract sixty seconds from your life" "I am Inque. I chose to be a part of this because...I don't know." "PING PONG" Mr Freeze hit a gavel repeatedly. "FIRST ORDER OF BEEZNESS WHY ARE WE HIER? MY ENORMUSS INTELLECT IS NOT ENUF TO ANSWER THESE AND MANY QUESHIONS, BUT I WUULD LIEK TO KNU MORE ABOUT JOO, AND DISCUSS FUTURE PLAANS, STARTING WITH JOO SEXY LOOKIN BOY BAND MEMBERS" "Uh, we're lookin to get into the big time since our careers died once N'SynC took over, and...you can use us as hired guns, sure" I'm Magnus, Formerly Magna. Here and ShadowBorg here have had a tough time dealing with those Batman Beyond thugs. We are starting a small operation and adding members as we go, such as these Splicers" "Baaa Weee are noooot Spliiicers, Weee are Aaaaalienzz, baaa" "My bad, sorry. We are in the process of adding a new, powerful ally to destroy the remaining hmm...what is it fifteen? twenty?" "HAI GAIZ! AM I LATE?" said a near naked man who glowed hot. "I'm not too late hah, guys? Shreck? Inque, love?" "Don't touch me, Derek, I could melt" said Inque "Sweetheart, you know it's not you who is too hot for me, but the other way around, b!tch" "Yes Mista Blight, you are quite late, meeting has started, and quite honestly, we thought you were fried" Snapped Shreck "Fried? That what you heard? Silly man, I used to be richer than you. I still am. Let me show you...my bank account" "EEEEEEEYAAAAAAAAAAAAAGGGHH!!!" screamed Shreck "DO YOU SEE ALL THE GREEN NOW?" yelled Blight Ninja Robin intervened, despite his heavy sweating, and checked on Shreck as he dropped on the floor. "He's still alive!" claimed Ninja Robin "Enough of this nonsense, Victor don't you have device that 'negates' radioactivity?" exclaimed Lex "OF COURSE I DOO I EVEN HAVE A CYURE FOR THIS POOAR BASTARD" "YEAHH My powers?! I'm not hot anymore? But I'm still transparent. HOW DID YOU DO THAT?" Blight asked "TRADE SECRET. YOU'RE IN THE KLUB, HOWEVER, PLEASE DO NOT HARM ANY MORE GUESTS IN HERE OR OUTSIDE, OR I MAIGHT HAVE TO CYOOR YOU BUT NOT WITH ICE. I HAVE FAILSAIFS FOR ALL OF YOU, CONSIDER THEES A DEPOWERIZATION CHAYMBER" "Point made, Freeze. Enough of this. We are wasting precious time as it is. On behalf of the Legion of Doom, you are all welcomed." Said Clock King. As the meeting concluded, two very sneaky and familiar characters watched, and listened from a safe position... To Be Continued...
Point made. Next installment is currently undergoing transformation. With bubbles and everything. This is kind of just an intro. I have big big plans.
So long as it has pics to go w/ the text, the rules say he's fine. Not everyone is good w/ writing w/in confined spaces, like speech bubbles. It doesn't say anything about 'shopping the text into the pics. As to the comic, as it were, this is an ...interesting comic, so far... but the way the text has been done, to this point, does make it hard to read... & it looks like the character count may be too high for my head injury to keep track of... If I was more familiar w/ all the different DC characters/ toys/ variations, I might be able to follow it better...
Chapter 2. The Green Hunter As Green Hunter rested, a dark figured watched from the rooftops of Porcelain City, the City of Porcelain. He had not heard the exchange between ShadowBorg and Green Hunter, but this dark warrior, though sure of himself, was equally as misguided, and he was ready to fight this Green Hunter/Daisaku/Edward Cullen. He shone so much, it became suspicious, so therefore, whatever his intention was, it was probably evil... To Be continued...
Chapter 3. The War of The TRANSFORMERS What has gone before. The Dinobots were trying to live in peace in the Book and Music world, but they saw themselves threatened by a ghost of the past... To deal with this Phantom Menace, The Dinobots contacted the leader of the Maximals: Air Hammer, who swept to their rescue only to find Angalmois infected ZOMBIE TRANSFORMERS FROM GENERATIONS PAST! Predacon killer Drancon followed, sparking the Beast Wars once again! Guys, bear with me. I got a new camera. Courtesy of my sister's room. *snicker* Best Camera I have ever worked with.
The Maximals race against time to stop Unicron from uncovering a weapon that could destroy EVERYTHING! And even if the Maximals succeed, the weapon could always find its way to Decepticon hands...or worse yet...THE LEGION OF DOOM!
Heeeha. He's been dead for a while. And it was my buddy Elliot who did it. I would never severely beat and rape a Transmetal. He just handed me a buncha broken TF's, including Optimal Optimus.
Meanwhile, in Gotham City, aka the rest of the basement AKA the populated area, the Autobots and the Decepticons are at war once again.
That actually does sound like Megatron! Good job on his Dialog. Though, your Bludgeon doesn't fit his design, previously established TF history, & seemed out of place here...
Yeah hahah. This IS Transformers Funnies, so I'll take a lot of liberties. Obviously I am having a hard time developing characters since there are so many. Megatron is good ol' Megs, Unicron is still traumatized because his destiny was destroyed, Bludgeon is kinda like the hippie from Family Guy just a lot more direct, and so on. The Twins are also a lot smarter and useful than their movie counterparts, but they retain the same personality, and are cowardly as you shall see.
I know developing personalities is hard. It's also the most important part of the development process for a comic... That's why I didn't bother & just went w/ straight show personalities (for those I could). I'm not [normally] a very creative or humorus person, so I didn't think I'd be able to create my own characterizations... You're doing fairly good. I've also been told my current arc if further flushing out the characters.
Sorry for the double post. I posted a terrible chapter that shouldn't ever be posted since it features the twins. Not to mention it's a scene that comes later, and it's got terrible grammar. I was intoxicated as I wrote it.
