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03-05-2011, 11:20 PM
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| Give me your Face(meat)!  Join Date: Feb 2010 Posts: 855 Collection Count: I lost count. It's somewhere in the 200's. | Transformers: Brave New World Hello all,
Read my new dramatic comic serial, Transformers: Brave New World:The last time I tried to do fan fiction... it basically went nowhere, so I decided to do something a little different this time around. This new comic serial is also home to a brand new continuity, that will mix new elements with past and present Transformers lore, as well as a healthy dose of Star Trek influence. Please note that this is not meant to be humorous, but rather a dramatic comic. Oh, and since there's no indication in the comic, here's a rough translation of the time measurements used in the series: Micro-Cycle = 1 Minute : Mini-Cycle = 1 Hour : Cycle = 1 Day : Mega-Cycle = 1 Month : Macro-Cycle = 1 Year Hope you all enjoy it. As always, comments and critiques are welcome. (BTW, don't worry, more characters will be seen in the second strip.  )              Official Website TFW2005 Thread |
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03-05-2011, 11:42 PM
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| Herald of Unicron  Join Date: Feb 2009 Posts: 3,257 | Wow, good start! I'm keeping my eye on this The New and IMPROVED (I think) version/But I Don't Wanna Catch Them All! A Pokemon Comic/Pony Rider Quote:
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03-05-2011, 11:52 PM
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| Radicon of Obliticons  Join Date: Sep 2005 Posts: 10,086 Location: AMARILLO TX Collection Count: unsure at the moment still bashing some   | nice start. maybe a little more action rather than basic same shot but great start. http://www.tfw2005.com/boards/items-...ead-sales.htmlhttp://www.tfw2005.com/boards/wanted...nt-update.html http://thepostapocalypsereport.com/ |
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03-06-2011, 12:12 AM
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| Look, A distraction!  Join Date: Feb 2010 Posts: 3,036 Location: That's classified. Collection Count: Not nearly enough. | Excellent. this comic has fair quality, And it does already look promising.... Keep up the good work.  Quote:
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03-06-2011, 01:33 AM
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| Doing the unmentionables  Join Date: Jul 2010 Posts: 1,209 Location: dont stalk me Collection Count: It got better, no It got worse | I dont mind repetitive shots, but those chairs look comfy. Sig pictures are to be no larger than 40KB in file size and should be no larger than 300 pixels in height and 500 pixels wide - 2005 Staff |
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03-06-2011, 01:59 AM
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| D Witwicky biographer   Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 1,366 | Nice look to this, off to a good start! Updated 1/27/12  |
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03-06-2011, 04:11 AM
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| Magnificent Pagan Beast  Join Date: Jun 2009 Posts: 6,627 Location: Orange County, CA Collection Count: 165+ News Credits: 5 | I really like how you've started this out.  |
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03-06-2011, 04:27 AM
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| DementedDino1  Join Date: Jan 2007 Posts: 3,858 Location: Burien, Washington Collection Count: lost some, got more.....i dont keep count anyway  | like everyone else said, great start   *Updated 06/06/13* Season 2 Episode 1 Part 2 The Hero's Journey Part 1. ripclaws new funnies (maybe) *Updated 06/10/13* New Arrival. |
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03-06-2011, 08:37 AM
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| Decepticon Mistress  Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 24,137 Location: Michigan Collection Count: Lost count... again | Very interesting...  Quote:
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03-06-2011, 11:17 AM
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| Herald of Unicron   Join Date: Dec 2006 Posts: 4,275 Location: Southern New Jersey, where new releases take forever Collection Count: 200 (and counting), 50+MU, 100+GI Joe, 2 Monster arts, several Shinkis, most of the MOTUC, and WWE | interesting, I wonder where this is going |
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