Vengeance of Bumblebee

My new comic since TFs in the House was a bust. Enjoy. (This is the sequel btw)


























Transformers in the House had a very small (and very awesome) audience but it was supposed to be funny but failed at it. So this will be a serious (as you can see) and hopefully epic comic.

I am part of the FFC, the Federation for Funnies Creators and we want to be a faction like the Radicons so spread the word and join!

This comic is, oddly enough, set 10 years after the events of Transformers in the House (what was posted of it anyway). I will be writing the rest of that story, but in Fan Fic form. Check that forum soon for that because it will be sort of prequel-ish to this and important things happen there that will affect the comic. TFs in the House fans might remember silly little Yellow Jacket and whether you hated or loved him: he's back.

Please post comments if you like or don't like it... I won't get offended. All criticism will be accepted. And please enjoy this comic (hopefully more than the first lol).

Hmmm seems like an interesting start.

I concur with Mini-Bot. A very good start.

Looking forward to reading more.

Thanks SmokescreenGT for making this sig!
The TC and Wildfrost Story

Transformers Toy Battles
Updated 11-12-09

a good start indeed now mini pass the popcorn

oooh I like it! Great start! plus I like the camera shots in this one, alot brighter and less dark.

nice man !!

Interesting. Can't wait to read more!

Originally Posted by Optimus Prime You'll never stop at one... I'll take you all on!

A nice strong start there. Sets up the background of the world and establishes some early plot points, such as Prime missing on his quest, Bumblebee's obvious rage about how things have turned out. Also some nice, emotive poses from Bee there, such as the raised, clenched fist in the last panel. You've also used different camera angles well, and they really add to the mood and visual interest of the strip.
Good stuff.

Time for a CCC! (Coolhand constructive criticism.) I've noticed that some of the shots are a little blurred or a little dark and speckly (I think the proper term is "noise", it's more noticeable on the dark areas of the photographs, that speckled, grainy effect.) I know that sometimes there's not a lot that can be done about this due to camera limitations, but here are some things you might want to try. If you camera has a macro or super macro setting for taking in focus close-ups, this can really help getting nice sharp images of TFs. Also, if your camera has a setting to increase the exposure time of the shot, this helps to get lighter looking photographs in an environment with limited light. Fiddling with ISO settings on the camera can also help in this regard.

Also, shining a torch or a cheap LCD spotlight into the shot can work wonders for lighting. I know it's a lot of effort and fiddling, but the improving quality of the basic photographs in a comic can really help to suck people into the story.

Just my
Looking forward to the next update.

Thanks Coolhand.

I got kind of frustrated actually because when I started taking pictures for this (I ended up cutting these scenes because they just didnt fit the tone and introduced a few characters a bit too early...) were perfect and clear and just so awesome but these just suck quality wise.

I am going to ask my dad if I can use his good camera for future panels but for now please bear with me and my crap camera

Btw, Im a fan of Out of the Dead Land