Transformers: The Classics War

Discussion in 'Transformers Funnies' started by Zherbus, Nov 29, 2008.

  1. Coolhand

    Coolhand Spiff's Stunt Double

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    Cool, looks like Sunny and Swipe are rolling in to the rescue. Just like the Lambo twins to have "com-link" issues with an order from Prowl.:lol 

    I have a feeling that city's gonna get even more wrecked before this is over...
     
  2. Zherbus

    Zherbus In Shogo Hasui, we trust.

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    A brief interlude.

    Disclaimer: I am fine with The Transformers Movie. I just thought this was humorous.

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  3. Skylock

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    Awesome, I keep an eyes on this.
     
  4. Andersonh1

    Andersonh1 Man, I've been here a LONG time Veteran

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    And Bay thought he got away with it... :lol  :lol 
     
  5. megatronkicksas

    megatronkicksas Well-Known Member

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    I less than three this :thumb 
     
  6. Autovolt 127

    Autovolt 127 Get In The Titan, Prime!

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    :lol  if jazz ever comes back in TFTM series...he'll have a bone to pick with Bay.
     
  7. Zherbus

    Zherbus In Shogo Hasui, we trust.

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    Thanks!

    I hope to get an update finished tonight. Trying something new with the text bubbles. :) 
     
  8. E. C. R. Former

    E. C. R. Former Is probably insane...

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    Say, haven't I reviewed this yet? Well, I am now although it's nothing more than telling you it's a job well done and keep up the good work.
     
  9. Zherbus

    Zherbus In Shogo Hasui, we trust.

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    This is just a small update, I need to take some more pics to finish a few frames. Trying a new app out since I suck at homemade captions.

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  10. Zherbus

    Zherbus In Shogo Hasui, we trust.

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    Part 2 of this update:
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  11. Zherbus

    Zherbus In Shogo Hasui, we trust.

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    I re-did all of the previous updates for better looks and better story flow. :) 
     
  12. Zherbus

    Zherbus In Shogo Hasui, we trust.

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    Ok, here's the latest update. I'll wait to see if there's any interest to have me keep going before working up any more pages.

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  13. E. C. R. Former

    E. C. R. Former Is probably insane...

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    Suuuuuweeeeeeeeeet!!!!!!!!!!! :D 
     
  14. Draeck

    Draeck Tanks can bounce

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    Dude, I'm really diggin the look and vibe of your comic :thumbs2: 

    Just one tiny thing.. normally I'd say you should always avoid re-using a picture, but I can imagine it being harder to avoid since you use pics for backgrounds and stuff..

    Also.. don't know why, but sometimes it seems to me there is some open space in a text balloon, and I think that the text sometimes still is a tad bit too small, like in the last shot in the latest update.. (you can read it, but I for one have to squint to do so, don't know if it's just me..)

    Please take my comment als healthy critique (I'm guessing you will)
    Really like what you're doing here!
     
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  15. TCracker

    TCracker R.I.P., 5/2019 Veteran

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    Awesum use of the background......you just got yourself a subscriber
     
  16. Zherbus

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    @ E. C. R Former - Thanks :D 

    @ Draeck - Actually, having to reuse some of the images really bothered me. It's on my short list of things to correct. The backgrounds and transposing characters, then adding effects is fun and relaxing. It's just insanely time-consuming. Now that I've gotten my foot in the door, story-wise, I really want to take more time with the images. Before, I felt like I needed to get the storyline to a point of interest. I guess I'm impatient that way, but the repeat images really bother me so I'll have to force myself to concentrate on the images themselves more.

    Text is still too small? Ok, I'll have to use a larger font. No problem there.

    I really appreciate the feedback, it'll help this become much better.

    @TCracker - Thanks! I can only hope they get better.
     
  17. Zherbus

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    Another one, since I had the time.

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  18. Skylock

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    Oooooo I wanna see Powerglide against Onslaught, can't wait to see what happens. All of these are great by the way! :) 
     
  19. TCracker

    TCracker R.I.P., 5/2019 Veteran

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    NIce! I am game for a Powerglide / Onslaught tussle!
     
  20. E. C. R. Former

    E. C. R. Former Is probably insane...

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    "Ow, my foot!" :lolol 

    Well now I can't help but wonder how this is all going to turn out.