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10-31-2008, 08:20 AM
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#1 | | air warriors Join Date: Sep 2008 Posts: 164 Location: can't ,ull laugh Collection Count: 1 into Infinity Minus Gazilion raised to the of Gazzilion equavilient to the sum 80 upon 2, = 100 | W.a.r d.a.w.n  At the base,WITH NO LEADER |
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10-31-2008, 10:52 AM
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#2 | | Elocution Onymous Join Date: Jul 2007 Posts: 4,754 Location: N. America Collection Count: 500+ (does that mean 501 or 599?) News Credits: 4 | Cool beginning. just need to make the font a little bigger, it's kinda hard to read.
By the way, board rules specify 300 High x 500 wide x 40kb size on your signature pics. You might want to change yours before mods simply delete it and replace it with what I just said.
Happy Halloween! can't wait to see what's next! |
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10-31-2008, 06:56 PM
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#4 | | Herder of cats Join Date: Mar 2008 Posts: 235 Location: Perry Hall, MD Collection Count: Help! They're taking over my sewing room shelves! | Wow! Congrats on the great begining! You've rerally peaked my interest. Can't wait for the next instalment  |
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11-01-2008, 12:04 AM
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#5 | | 'Till All are One! Join Date: Jan 2004 Posts: 604 Location: BC, Canada Collection Count: Used to be 100's--now 23 (and counting!) | Quote:
Originally Posted by Dremare I agree with everything Otispq has said. But otherwise a good comic. | Yes. Can't wait to see more though. Retribution Chapter's 1 and 2 PDF's are available |
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11-01-2008, 09:31 AM
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#6 | | air warriors Join Date: Sep 2008 Posts: 164 Location: can't ,ull laugh Collection Count: 1 into Infinity Minus Gazilion raised to the of Gazzilion equavilient to the sum 80 upon 2, = 100 |  At the base,WITH NO LEADER |
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11-01-2008, 09:40 AM
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#7 | | Autobot Spoiler Join Date: Jun 2007 Posts: 1,416 Location: Ohio Collection Count: About 100+ | A lot better now that it has larger text. Couldn't really read it before hand. It is coming along nice. 
Click sig for comics!
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11-01-2008, 11:01 AM
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#8 | | I dare to be stupid! Join Date: Mar 2008 Posts: 700 Location: The Planet of Junk (Junkion) Collection Count: About 35+ News Credits: 10 | Pretty good. I like this one better than your first. Quote:
Originally Posted by Grimwing Grimlock looks like he's just waiting for his hot pockets to finish cooking. | Quote:
Originally Posted by Kickback It was 1am for 2 hours. I was so fu*king confused... | |
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11-01-2008, 12:22 PM
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#9 | | Elocution Onymous Join Date: Jul 2007 Posts: 4,754 Location: N. America Collection Count: 500+ (does that mean 501 or 599?) News Credits: 4 | Nice effects! I really like that trapezoidal(?) lens flare, that's cool. the negative effects are different also, but work well. You could use some more light, unless that's the look your going for, in which case its just fine.
Keep 'em coming! |
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11-02-2008, 05:01 AM
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#10 | | air warriors Join Date: Sep 2008 Posts: 164 Location: can't ,ull laugh Collection Count: 1 into Infinity Minus Gazilion raised to the of Gazzilion equavilient to the sum 80 upon 2, = 100 | Quote: |
Originally Posted by Otisq You could use some more light, unless that's the look your going for, in which case its just fine. | I wanted it to br dark  At the base,WITH NO LEADER |
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