Transformers: Retribution

StarFire_MK2 · 07-09-2008, 12:10 AM

Inspired by Coolhand’s incomparable Out of the Dead Land and a need to justify my TF collection in my small house, I bring you the first installment of a new serial:
“The results of what happens when a sleep-deprived grad student takes time away from his work to play with his toys”. But since that title is lame, I’ve subtitled it...

Transformers: Retribution

I hope you enjoy it! Special guest appearance by Dark Awakening Zombie Optimus Prime courtesy of TheTransTorture.

Download Retribution chapter PDF's here:

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Retribution Ch1 Retribution Ch2 Retribution Ch3 Retribution Ch4 Retribution Ch5

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Retribution Ch6 Retribution Ch7 Retribution Ch8, part I Retribution Ch8, part II

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Retribution Ch9 Retribution Ch 10

GladiatorPrime · 07-09-2008, 12:20 AM

Otispq · 07-09-2008, 01:53 AM

Those last two panels, good stuff! but you need to post the pics, not thumbnails, too long to read the comic.

Coolhand · 07-09-2008, 07:41 AM

Wall-E cannon fodder!

How awesome would that be? “Waaaall-eeee kkaaamaakaaaziiiii”

And Megaton learns why you need to be VERY careful when you make requests of workmen…

All in all, a very nice start, and a nice FX shot of Thundercracker. Since your sig shows some awesome custom MP seekers, I can’t help but wonder if we’ll be seeing a certain orange fanatic show up at some point….

I think Otispq has a point though, it would be easier to read if each panel was posted directly to the thread.

All in all, bring on more!

ShadowDragon · 07-09-2008, 08:00 AM

Nice start!

StarFire_MK2 · 07-09-2008, 01:09 PM

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Originally Posted by Otispq

you need to post the pics, not thumbnails, too long to read the comic.

I've fixed that now, cheers.

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Originally Posted by Coolhand

: Since your sig shows some awesome custom MP seekers, I can’t help but wonder if we’ll be seeing a certain orange fanatic show up at some point….

I've got a few custom bots who will be in this strip, and yes, the orange fanatic will eventually make an appearance.

Thanks for the feedback guys!

Fez Findie · 07-09-2008, 01:28 PM

This is havin' quite an interestin' point of view; With the Decepticons at a disadvantage and... Wall-E!? XD

Autovolt 127 · 07-09-2008, 03:44 PM

Very nice.

Dropshot · 07-09-2008, 07:39 PM

Wall-e in the decepticons files is really good.

But what caught my eye was the Thundercracker flying pic it's probable the best transformer flying pic I've seen ever. Nice job

Otispq · 07-09-2008, 09:29 PM

Ah, yes, much more enjoyable reading it thru the second time with all the pics full size. Now all we need is more!

07-09-2008, 01:53 AM	#3
Otispq Elocution Onymous Join Date: Jul 2007 Posts: 6,098 Location: N. America Collection Count: 500+ (does that mean 501 or 599?) News Credits: 9	Those last two panels, good stuff! but you need to post the pics, not thumbnails, too long to read the comic. The OOO is waiting for Yooo! The OOO, updated 5-29

07-09-2008, 07:41 AM	#4
Coolhand Spiff's Stunt Double Join Date: Feb 2008 Posts: 3,942 Location: Somewhere in the UK... Collection Count: Most of the Alts and MP's, with a few choice Classics and Movie-Formers thrown in for spice.	Wall-E cannon fodder! How awesome would that be? “Waaaall-eeee kkaaamaakaaaziiiii” And Megaton learns why you need to be VERY careful when you make requests of workmen… All in all, a very nice start, and a nice FX shot of Thundercracker. Since your sig shows some awesome custom MP seekers, I can’t help but wonder if we’ll be seeing a certain orange fanatic show up at some point…. I think Otispq has a point though, it would be easier to read if each panel was posted directly to the thread. All in all, bring on more! Out Of The Dead Land-An Alternators Photocomic. Updated 28/03/2013 Follow Grimlock on twitter! MeGrimlock_KING! Follow Out Of the Dead Land on Facebook. Extra content and collected Media!

07-09-2008, 08:00 AM	#5
ShadowDragon R to the D to the D yo. Join Date: Jul 2007 Posts: 7,806 Location: Charlotte NC Collection Count: Lots, I give up trying to count them. News Credits: 1	Nice start! Episode 146: The battle to end all battles. 04/01/2011 [ www.BusouShinkiWorld.com \| TFW2005 Shinki Cult Member ] My TF Collection Thread

07-09-2008, 01:28 PM	#7
Fez Findie Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2006 Posts: 10,079 Location: Espoo, Finland	This is havin' quite an interestin' point of view; With the Decepticons at a disadvantage and... Wall-E!? XD Half-Randomly. Updated 17.5.2012 http://www.tfw2005.com/boards/transformers-funnies/165099-half-randomness-just-fun-fez.html My DA page: http://fezfindie44.deviantart.com/

07-09-2008, 09:29 PM	#10
Otispq Elocution Onymous Join Date: Jul 2007 Posts: 6,098 Location: N. America Collection Count: 500+ (does that mean 501 or 599?) News Credits: 9	Ah, yes, much more enjoyable reading it thru the second time with all the pics full size. Now all we need is more! The OOO is waiting for Yooo! The OOO, updated 5-29

07-09-2008, 12:20 AM	#2
GladiatorPrime working on Rampage P2-V2 Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 1,983 Location: Enjoying Married Life! Collection Count: almost 300 and counting

07-09-2008, 07:39 PM	#9
Dropshot Transform your destiny Join Date: Aug 2007 Posts: 2,750 Location: Mexico Collection Count: 3... Until you find out where my collection is News Credits: 4	Wall-e in the decepticons files is really good. But what caught my eye was the Thundercracker flying pic it's probable the best transformer flying pic I've seen ever. Nice job