Transformers: Retribution

Discussion in 'Transformers Funnies' started by StarFire_MK2, Jul 9, 2008.

  1. ShadowDragon

    ShadowDragon R to the D to the D yo.

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    No, he's the Abominable Snow Din... er... Mustang.
     
  2. Coolhand

    Coolhand Spiff's Stunt Double

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    That shot is beautiful. That needs to go in the Cool Stuff thread. Seriously!
     
  3. Dremare

    Dremare It's pronounced "dreh-mare"

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    Been a while since I check this comic out. I think Prowl isn't a good leader.....
     
  4. iwasherenotyou

    iwasherenotyou Medical Officer

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    just caught up with the comic. wow this is gettin good
     
  5. StarFire_MK2

    StarFire_MK2 'Till All are One!

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    I've finally got the next chapter shot and hope to start posting before month's end.
     
  6. StarFire_MK2

    StarFire_MK2 'Till All are One!

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    My first update of 2009, introducing my own version of Incomplete Skywarp! :D 

    This was actually the very first scene I started to write last April, and I just finished writing it in December. I'm sorry it's taken so long to start updating, but this is a long chapter, and key to the evolution of the story, so I couldn't rush it. I still have some material to shoot to finish it off, but I've actually finished shooting and editing 3 weeks worth of the chapter which follows, so I'm hoping to keep up with weekly updates for the next few months.

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  7. E. C. R. Former

    E. C. R. Former Is probably insane...

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    So.... you ever going to get Skywarp repaired? Or release Sunstorm?
     
  8. Coolhand

    Coolhand Spiff's Stunt Double

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    Ouch! Warpie's looking a bit worse for wear.
    Nice to see there's a sense of comraderie between the Seekers, and that custom Sunstorm is :drool: . I like the way you're taking your time to introduce Mr DX-01 to the Cons, it's giving a nice sense of depth to the cast, and it's fun to see the Decepticons away from the battlefield, just chillin' out.
     
  9. Sage o' G-fruit

    Sage o' G-fruit Critics gonna critique

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    I read all the comics out now, and I really like them. Sweet job with the alts and Masterpieces. :thumb 

    Seems like everyone (including me) has a bone to pick with that guy. :lol 
     
  10. Fez Findie

    Fez Findie Well-Known Member

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    I take it he's less than impressed... at least less than I am with the repair bay effects :) 
     
  11. Otispq

    Otispq Elocution Onymous

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    nice scattering of the schematics field when skywarp stood up into it. Sunny's speech font fits well too.
     
  12. StarFire_MK2

    StarFire_MK2 'Till All are One!

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    Yes, to both your questions.

    Cheers, I'm glad Sunstorm's text works. I was worried it might be a little difficult to read, but I liked the idea of it standing out in a unique way.
     
  13. Anodythe

    Anodythe Well-Known Member

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    Ooo, very nice! I agree, the font for Sunstorm is great. From the looks of your sig, it appears that he has been or will be released.
     
  14. StarFire_MK2

    StarFire_MK2 'Till All are One!

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    Actually, my sig was made before I started this strip, so it has nothing to do with the story. It's just a pic I thought was cool that showcased my Seeker armada :)  But we will definitely see more of Sunstorm.:Gouki: 
     
  15. StarFire_MK2

    StarFire_MK2 'Till All are One!

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    Updated Jan 17/09

    I meant to ask with the last update, but are these pics too big for anyone?

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  16. Fez Findie

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    So much faith even TC's got... :lol 
     
  17. Otispq

    Otispq Elocution Onymous

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    hehehe. Megatron...personally???

    The pic size is ok by me, but they do look a bit less sharp than something 800x600.
     
  18. DilaZirK

    DilaZirK Is bullheaded.

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    This is what I get for not being active enough in the Funnies, I overlook gems like this comic here.

    I absolutely heart this comic! It's got everything I want: a good story, intense action, serious drama, witty comedy, and wacky characters! :thumb  My favourite being of course the character dynamic between TC and MR-DX01. :D 

    This is one comic I'll be adding to my list of faves.

    Although I've one comment about the size of your recent strips: I certainly enjoy the higher resolution, but at over 700KB per panel, it's taking forever for me and my poor excuse for an internet connection to load em. >_<;; I don't suppose they could be slightly more compress?

    P.S. - Oh, and your customs are also very awesome.
     
  19. E. C. R. Former

    E. C. R. Former Is probably insane...

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    Megatron personally...

    You know something Skywarp? I don't think it's exactly your sanity chip that's melting, I think it's Megatron's.

    The high resolution does take awhile to load. I'm generally fine with it since I have a fast connection but I don't know about the others.
     
  20. StarFire_MK2

    StarFire_MK2 'Till All are One!

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    Thanks for that! I'm glad you're enjoying it :) 

    The lack of sharpness is due to poor lighting (I think). My outdoor scenes (from an upcoming segment) seem ok to me, but what do you think?

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    If the size is a problem for more readers, I'll go back to 800x600 once this chapter is done. I'll also look into a better compression; I found I can reduce these a few kb each more, but that's probably not enough.