A World of Our Own

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  1. Sp.Agt.Sparrow

    Sp.Agt.Sparrow Autocon/Deceptibot

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    Stay tuned. Next updates should be up by tomorrow or the next day.
     
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  5. Coolhand

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    :thumb 
    This is facinating stuff.
     
  6. Radioactive Ravage

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    I like it. Though I'm not sure if you should have revealed it so soon.

    Whatever. I like the way the story is going, and I really want to see more! MOAR! You don't get my undivided attention just yet, but you CAN have...

    MY BIG GAY DANCE!
     
  7. Otispq

    Otispq Elocution Onymous

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    Very nice, especially since the first page got fixed. So one big punch between Prime and Megatron created Earth? Yeah I'd like to know more about that.
     
  8. Z.U.D.O.N

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    Interesting storyline you have here :D 
     
  9. Sp.Agt.Sparrow

    Sp.Agt.Sparrow Autocon/Deceptibot

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    Sorry this is taking so long to update. I had to retake all the pictures I took because I got a new idea on how to start this. The updates should be flowing soon.
     
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    Editing the rest of the pictures now...should be up soon. Enjoy!
     
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    Oooooh!
    I like!
    My only qualm is that you introduced everything to quickly...

    'Waien de Brucei' HA!
     
  13. Sp.Agt.Sparrow

    Sp.Agt.Sparrow Autocon/Deceptibot

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    Surprisingly, I actually haven't introduced all that much. The gods and the world is like all I've introduced. This little update actually doesn't have that much to do with the overall story.
     
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    *laughs at the fist* wonder twin powers activate!
     
  15. Coolhand

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    Ah Clone troopers rock.:cool: 
    Nice camera angles as well, especially on the intro panels with the boot "stepping" through the shot.
     
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  18. Falldown

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    I'm a big fan of novels focussing on Clone Troopers, showing how their experiences've made them different people. Loved seeing different personalities coming through here as well. Good stuff. Looking forward to your next update :thumbs2: .
     
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    Agreed. Nice update. I'm looking forward to seeing how the Clones fare against the Cons. (BTW, I recognise Barricade, Blackout and Starscream, but who's the fourth con?)
     
  20. ShadowDragon

    ShadowDragon R to the D to the D yo.

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    looks like Meantime, the Real Gear wristwatch to me.