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Old 07-13-2011, 01:25 AM   #3741
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"Someone's killing Shockwave...why do we want to stop this?"

Great use of the RX-8's folding torso to simulate Grimlock ripping Shockwave apart to get at his spark chamber. That was a suitably visceral "Grimlock is annoyed" move, and a great way to use the toy's transformation sequence to sell some Dinobot brutality.

I could almost hear the deadly calm in Prime's voice when he said he needed to know there would be no problem, too. That was actually my favorite part of the update: we all knew Grimmy would kill Shockwave in some excessively brutal way, and I wanted to know how Prime would react to that. You didn't make me wait at all. Well done, sir.

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Old 07-13-2011, 01:30 AM   #3742
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Well, knew it was going to end this way. Shockwave was pretty much a goner the moment Big Grim showed up. Epic ending for ole' Cyclops here.
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Old 07-13-2011, 12:18 PM   #3743
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That was glorious. Tho it would have been cool to have Shockwave beg for mercy.
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Old 07-13-2011, 01:54 PM   #3744
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Looking at a lifeless Shockwave, I've got only one thing to say...



"That'll buff right out."
"T'is but a scratch!"

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Well, that was a foregone conclusion.

There wasn't any way that Grimlock was going to NOT kill Shockwave, though I did forget that he still have several accounts OTHER than Windcharger to settle. I suspect Optimus is disappointed... but not surprised.

That was probably also the nastiest way you could kill someone. Ripping out their spark and using it to obliterate their own head, before they've had a chance to go offline.
Beating someone to death with their own soul. It's Dinobot for "I don't like you."

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This also means Mirage is safe, as Grimlock considers that he died a good death, and his account is clear. However... Mirage won't know or udnerstand that. All he'll know is that Windcharger died, because of what Shockwave did to him, and Grimlock was there when he died.

And knowing Silverstreak, he'll have them sharing a cell. Just to make the bueblood sweat a little.
Hey now, would Silverstreak do that to Mir...y'know what, yeah, forget I said that.

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"Well, he's dead!"

May I say, Awesome Effects, Coolhand!

Huh, Grimlock's going to the stockade without a hassle...
It'll be interesting to hear his thoughts on the matter.

Does he acknowledged that what he did wasn't... Well... Kosher, for lack of a better word? And why does he care? Do they allow the prisoners to use twitter?

EDIT: Oh, yeah. Didn't fail to notice Grimmy getting his 'Movie Prime' on.
From Grimlock's point of view, killing Shockwave was totally kosher. In fact, he would have felt he'd betrayed Slag, Snarl, Swoop and Sludge had he NOT done it.
However, he is very much aware that Prime and a lot of the Autobots will certainly not see it that way. He's totally expecting to face some serious music for what he's just done, but for him that's just another occupational hazard for living by a code he swore his life to. It also worth pointing out that Grimlock in OOTDL has a deep, DEEP respect for Prime (backstory coming later down the line to shed a little light on Prime and Grimlock's past), which is why he'll go to the stockade on Prime's word, rather than just tell him to frag off.
Prowl, however, would have totally gotten told to frag off.

As for Twitter...Grimlock might well mention this incident at some point...
(Oh, and great DOTM reference!)

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That was brutal! Can Grimlck be any more badass?
Me Grimlock could, but it would result in universe exploding. Which would be awesome. But Me sort of like universe. All my stuff is there.

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"He's dead Grim."

I couldn't resist. A very nice conclusion, at least to Shockwave's part of the story. I imagine that Out of the Dead Land is far from over.

As Polencius pointed out, Ravage and that dew hickey are still out there somewhere, and the Autobots now have to go out and find them. And please remind me, are Dead End and Swindle dead? I know they fell, but I can't remember what/if anything happened to them afterwards.
Out Of The Dead Land still has some tale left to tell. We're in Season 3 and I reckon we'll be about 6-7 seasons for the whole thing.
I'm currently averaging about 1 season every two years....I need to speed this up!

As for Swindle and Dead End, they were indeed last seen plummeting off a cliff. We didn't actually see the impact or the bodies, but a fall like that must have killed them, right?


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Holy frag, Grimlock sure took out Shockwave in a total bad-aft manner...
Me Grimlock know no other way. And if there is other way, Me Grimlock really bad at learning it.

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Wow, GREAT UPDATE No doubt. Also, Does Grimlock have a spark collection?
Me Grimlock categorise them by colour, size and sparkley-ness. Sometimes Me use them as lamps, or glow-sticks for one of Blaster's rave-parties. It funny, people get really prissy when you start waving the souls of fallen foes around on the dance floor.

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I think I forsee a court-marshal in Grimlock's future...
I forsee you might well be right.

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Shockwave could have another body for him to download to.
Sort of Altered Carbon style? Or as Prime did in the IDW Furman run? That would be cool, actually. Science Fiction does certainly hold that out as a good escape option. However...
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That'd be impressive to see, considering he had his soul shoved into his face.
Which then exploded.
...yep. In this case, Shockwave is gone. Spark and mind, all gone.

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Sad...I simply feel sad. What a wasted life.

Prime can't be too hard on Grimlock, one less Con to guard, feed, give medical assistance. I wonder if Optimus might not feel a bit relieved that Grimlock took care of the Shockwave problem.
That's an interesting point, isn't it. It's probably not just Optimus as well. It's the kind of issue that might cause quite an argument between quite a number of the Autobots...

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Grimlock's revenge is complete.

He's a total badass in this.

Awesome!
Me Grimlock enjoy revenge. Hot? Cold? Me say it best served with total fear and shattering pain.
But then, Me something of a sentimental old thing.

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Awesome update.
Thanks AMG.

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Go Big Grim! Wonder how the Autobots will deal with him once things cool off?

And what a way to off Shockwave. Amazing.
How the Autobots deal with Grimlock is going to be something of a story point going forward. It will have implications...

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Great storytelling! Been reading through again from scratch, nicely done!
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Good. Eat a dick, Shockwave.
But Shockwave doesn't known anyone called Richard....

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"Give me your SPARK".

Always got to one-up Prime, don't you, Grimlock?
Me Grimlock say: It not so much one-upping as trying to teach by example. Movie Prime still too fluffy and cute for my liking, Me trying to teach him bloodlust.

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But now it's over - Shockwave's deader than disco, Grimlock's oil-lust is appeased,
and they all lived happily ever after, except Prowl with his rulebook, and Shockwave with his being dead.

...right?
Pretty much. The next season is all about getting the My Little Ponies invited around for a tea party. Rainbow Dash, Fluttershy and Twilight Sparkle have been SO looking forward to it, and apparently Wheeljack has found a way to distill energon into cake and sweets, so everyone can have a great time!

Wheeljack assures me that there is no truth to the rumour that energon cakes have the same effect on ponies as concentrated LSD. None at all.

Sunstreaker assures me that if Wheeljack is wrong, he's got more than enough softcore antipersonnel rounds the armoury to cope. Can't have powerful magical wildlife trippin' balls in the Autobot base. No way. Ain't right.

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(Quite a feat, Grim, cramming Shockwave's own spark down the throat he doesn't actually have! )


(Re. Grim vs. Blaster, it was Marvel Comic Blaster, who is basically giant robot Batman. )

Me Grimlock always like to set new challenges for creative maiming. Me once set myself goal of beating Starscream to death with his own spine. But Me look, and look, and could never find the damn thing...

Also, Me Grimlock say

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GOOD.


About sums it up for me. This was definitely one that needed to die. Considering Prime likely wanted him for information (and that this prime isn't the type to execute would-be prisoners) I don't feel the Autobots are the type to do the kind of interrogation required to get ANYTHING out of Shockwave that would be useful. All that would have come from it would have been that possibility of Shockwave being rescued and brought back to what's left of the Decepticons, because he was still alive.

So, this was good. To me, there's no loss for not having him alive back at Autobot base. Grimlock is a badass. I'm quite happy.
Me Grimlock like you. You have firm grasp of reality. Prime his own worst enemy sometimes, but Me Grimlock tell him time and again and he never listen. Sometimes, better to not let him make the mistakes he might regret, hmm?

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"Someone's killing Shockwave...why do we want to stop this?"

Great use of the RX-8's folding torso to simulate Grimlock ripping Shockwave apart to get at his spark chamber. That was a suitably visceral "Grimlock is annoyed" move, and a great way to use the toy's transformation sequence to sell some Dinobot brutality.

I could almost hear the deadly calm in Prime's voice when he said he needed to know there would be no problem, too. That was actually my favorite part of the update: we all knew Grimmy would kill Shockwave in some excessively brutal way, and I wanted to know how Prime would react to that. You didn't make me wait at all. Well done, sir.

Oh, and welcome back to the boards! Life is treating you better, I hope.
Thanks dude. Life is up and down right now, got my new job and my new home, which is cool. Also got a family member in hospital, which isn't cool, but they appear to be over the worst and have started on the road to recovery, which IS cool. It's one of the reasons why the update was a little delayed.

There's also ANOTHER reason for the delay, which could be SUPERCOOL but also might amount to nothing, but if anything ever develops on that front I'll post about it in more detail. For now, I don't want to jinx it.

I'm really glad the RX-8 has an opening chest, it saved me a ton of FX work. One of the nice things about Transformers having TF schemes and pop-off limbs and kibble is that your GIMP time can be carefully cut down if you plan your injuries well. Laziness drives everything I do

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Well, knew it was going to end this way. Shockwave was pretty much a goner the moment Big Grim showed up. Epic ending for ole' Cyclops here.
Yep. One damaged and disarmed Shockwave, one undamaged, armed and furious Grimlock. It was pretty much always going to go this way.

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That was glorious. Tho it would have been cool to have Shockwave beg for mercy.
I did consider something like that, but in the end I decided that Shockwave wouldn't do it. He knows, logically, that he's finished, and that nothing he can say can stop Grimlock, so he decided to hang on to his dignity and face death without pleading. (Well, hang onto as much dignity as you can whilst being force-fed your own soul.) He's made of stern stuff, Shockwave.

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Old 07-13-2011, 11:57 PM   #3745
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Well, as they say: "Revenge is a dish best served cold."

That was cold. XD

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Old 07-14-2011, 04:12 AM   #3746
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Amazing storytelling, good shots and posing. And hell, I've read through 3 years of awesome story telling!

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The more I read, the more I feel for Windcharger and Grimlock. This is fragging good!

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Old 07-14-2011, 04:38 AM   #3747
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You know, shockwave COULD have switched bodies (to a cybertronian all surface dragster maybe?) and that was a "clone" with a modified spark, maybe a corrupted old autobot spark?


...nah.



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Old 07-14-2011, 05:44 PM   #3748
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HOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY SLAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAG.

Ripped his spark out and fed it back to him. Nice.
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Old 07-15-2011, 04:20 PM   #3749
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There's just no luck for Shockwave this year
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Old 07-15-2011, 04:37 PM   #3750
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XD As if in piercin' someone with the ribs you tore out of'em...

But yeah, this is one of those times when someone actually just effin' takes out the villain who's had it coming for a long time. Usually very satisfying, even if Shockwave was a cool rather than just simply despicable villain.
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