|04-01-2008, 02:13 PM||#11|
Join Date: Dec 2006
Location: Espoo, Finland
Whoah. I gotta say, I love the athmosphere from which this is startin' up from. A definition of "dead silence", where nothing's bad happening at the moment and war's over, but... its too silent. Kinda melancholic?
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|04-01-2008, 07:55 PM||#12|
Join Date: Aug 2002
Location: Greenville, SC
Collection Count: 320+
I really like the internal dialogue here. And you can't go wrong with Bluestreak (Silverstreak) as your lead character. Nice melancholy feel to the story too, and I really want to know who's creeping around, spooking 'Streak.
|04-01-2008, 11:22 PM||#13|
Join Date: May 2004
Location: Database Error
Changed his name, but he still talks a blue streak.
|04-01-2008, 11:35 PM||#14|
Join Date: Jul 2007
Location: N. America
Collection Count: Breaking the 1K threshold in 3-2-1...
News Credits: 9
very good beginning, nice effects, and great story so far, and most interested in seeing what's next.
The OOO is waiting for Yooo!
The OOO, updated 5-29
|04-02-2008, 12:14 AM||#15|
Join Date: Aug 2005
|04-02-2008, 12:17 AM||#16|
Join Date: Jan 2007
Location: Burien, Washington
Collection Count: lost some, got more.....i dont keep count anyway
**takes deep breath**
**attemps to stay calm**
POST MORE NOW!!!!!!!
i phailed at staying calm
*Updated 06/06/13* Season 2 Episode 1 Part 2 The Hero's Journey Part 1.
ripclaws new funnies (maybe) *Updated 10/8/15* The End Part 3.
|04-02-2008, 06:46 AM||#17|
Spiff's Stunt Double
Join Date: Feb 2008
Location: Somewhere in the UK...
Collection Count: Most of the Alts and MP's, with a few choice Classics and Movie-Formers thrown in for spice.
Thanks again for everyone's positive feedback.
Okay, due to a combination of everyone's encouraging words, me wanting to build some momentum for the strip, and also having built up a nice buffer of finished strips to fill the next few updates, here we have the next bit of Part One...
In which we find out who was spooking the Streak…
|04-02-2008, 07:12 AM||#18|
Join Date: Aug 2006
Collection Count: 12...no wait, 13
News Credits: 1
Oh wow, I'm feeling nothing but a complete loathing for Mirage right now as well. Excellent job on that.
And on top of the awesome writing, shots and FX, are the awesome poses. Seriously, must've been quite difficult to get two Alternators to physically interact with each other so convincingly.
|04-02-2008, 07:25 AM||#19|
PENIS GOES WHERE?!!
Join Date: Jul 2003
Location: KL, MY
News Credits: 2
mirage = jerk
|04-02-2008, 08:25 AM||#20|
Join Date: Jun 2007
Location: Taylors S.C.
Collection Count: Incalcuable but Increaseing
News Credits: 3
before everyone starts bashing mirage. That's entirely accurate to his g1 toy bio. It was played down in the series as just a tracker that's homesick for Cybertron.
But really he is a ruthless sniper and was among the royal lineage in Iacon making him a bit snobbish and condescending to the weak. Mirage isn't a nice guy, but early on provided the diaclone type cars with some fast ranged artillery.
anyway before I get to carried away on mirage (I think I already have) I just want to say kudos and good job for getting to the true mirage's character.
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