Whoa, on the very first strip, we get treated to one helluva fight scene. Some nice mess there. Unfortunately for me (emphasis on me), I find the story quite a mess to follow as well so far... The small text is one thing, but there is perhaps...TOO many things going on and too many characters in a single panel. My mind just kinda gets tired trying to keep track of everything. But that's most likely just me, as I visit the Funnies forum after nearly 12 hours of work some nights. I'm pooped. @_@
Now I've had a hell of a week. I live in jamaica on a farm (I come into the 'city' to use the internet) and earlier this week my labtop was stolen. Now the cops out here don't really do ANYTHING but luckly I knew who did the stealing (thats the best part of living in a small town, you kinda know who does what and when) So between the the culprit's honest brother, my aunt, and myself I managed to reclaim my property. Hence my small update. truth be told D. I have my entire story arc shot already, I just need to add text and effects, so on my end the story is already told. The confusion is to be ironed out as I go along so I hope you'll stay with me. However if everyone feels this way I can revamp my telling style (as it is I sticking with Now/Then process) anyway feedback is always a plus so thanks guys.
Ramjet and Skywarp sneak up on blitzwing (who is flattened under Ramjet's feet) and tank Megatron (he's not Megatron btw, just a lackie)