That is INSANELY good. I'll be looking forward to the next update.

 

Kick-ass.  

 

Whoa, on the very first strip, we get treated to one helluva fight scene. Some nice mess there.  

Unfortunately for me (emphasis on me), I find the story quite a mess to follow as well so far...

The small text is one thing, but there is perhaps...TOO many things going on and too many characters in a single panel. My mind just kinda gets tired trying to keep track of everything.

But that's most likely just me, as I visit the Funnies forum after nearly 12 hours of work some nights. I'm pooped. @_@

 

Good stuff so far, and I loved the fight sceen.

 

Now I've had a hell of a week. I live in jamaica on a farm (I come into the 'city' to use the internet) and earlier this week my labtop was stolen. Now the cops out here don't really do ANYTHING but luckly I knew who did the stealing (thats the best part of living in a small town, you kinda know who does what and when) So between the the culprit's honest brother, my aunt, and myself I managed to reclaim my property. Hence my small update.

truth be told D. I have my entire story arc shot already, I just need to add text and effects, so on my end the story is already told. The confusion is to be ironed out as I go along so I hope you'll stay with me. However if everyone feels this way I can revamp my telling style (as it is I sticking with Now/Then process) anyway feedback is always a plus so thanks guys.

 

K on with the story, we're still in 'THEN' mode

 

That is alot going in the strips, was that Skywarp sneaking behing Ramjet and tank Megatron?

 

Ramjet and Skywarp sneak up on blitzwing (who is flattened under Ramjet's feet) and tank Megatron (he's not Megatron btw, just a lackie)