Warring at Play

AutobotMaverick · 07-21-2009, 09:33 AM

So...that's why Murmeltier opted to join the 'Cons, huh? Talk about your drama.

Still, this DOES explain the eyepatch. MAN, I need that Shinki!

Caterwaul · 07-21-2009, 09:34 AM

Well, if they get another body that's never been activated, they could use it for parts. It'd help with self repair, anyways. I'm surprised Strarf or Euk havent thought about being temporary donors, actually. At least until Arnval's self repair routines can shoulder more of the damage.

lemonherb · 07-21-2009, 10:15 AM

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Originally Posted by Polenicus

I'm sorry it took so long to get this out! I'm adjusting to my new work schedule (12 hour shifts... ugh) and the warm, muggy weather doesn't help my energy levels any (Sleep? What's that?).

Wow, what an update. Glad to see you weathered that weekend storm. I saw some pictures of the CN tower, uprooted trees, and peeled roofs.

Polenicus · 07-21-2009, 10:22 AM

Ack. Must have burped when I was finishing it up. I'll fix it as soon as Photobucket actually lets me on the site.

(Edit: Fixed!)

E. C. R. Former · 07-21-2009, 11:32 AM

Almost every time I read a comic starring the Alt/BTs, Ratchet's absence from the line somehow always comes through. Good lord I hope Arnval will pull through.

I love the Decepticon political wrangling here. This is plain great! I love Megatron's characterization A LOT in particular.

halconfenix · 07-21-2009, 12:45 PM

1) this is by any means, NOT a short update
2) decepticon politics are really nasty
3) now i want wheeljack... *sigh*
4) Mur is not telling everything... yet
5) Arnval has to survive... really!

StarFire_MK2 · 07-21-2009, 03:00 PM

Wow, what a huge and informative update. I really liked your retconning of Prime's power-filter design.

Major · 07-21-2009, 04:02 PM

Incredible update! I like the monolog given by Wheeljack, and the way you’ve linked some plot threads together. I especially like the believability of the logic underlying Arnval’s gradually failing condition — how her repair systems are focusing on the damage caused by the respirator forcibly operating lungs which were damaged by superhot gas. It makes perfect sense that her self-repair systems would focus on respiration and such life-criticals first, before dealing with the repair of comparatively expendable parts (arms, &c.). It’s details such as these, plus compelling plots, which keep me coming back to your comic. Good stuff!

grimlock1972 · 07-21-2009, 04:46 PM

awesome update

loved the M*A*S*H reference even if you did not intend it as such "meatball surgery" was often used to describe the work they did in OR in the series and

@ Nazi Shinki and the autobots are gonna need to step it up big time and i hope somehow Arvnal pulls through as they are gonna need her help eventually, and Wheeljack's log was great

Autobus Prime · 07-21-2009, 06:41 PM

Whoof! Heavy stuff, and also really cool! Wheeljack is obviously going to keep right on doing what he says he can't do, and at least Arnie isn't dead yet. That's somewhat hopeful.

Lots of tension & drama all around here, and very well done.

Well, Megs can believe her story if he wants, but I doubt Mel has all the cards out. I see a rivalry with Megatron coming.