Valandar's War Of Steel

Discussion in 'Transformers Funnies' started by Valandar, Mar 9, 2007.

  1. Andersonh1

    Andersonh1 Man, I've been here a LONG time Veteran

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    Training time. Cool. And very nice use of Grimlock... I love the idea that he's been studying Earth fighting styles. Must have move past that "weak humans = worthless" stage.

    Good to see your story resuming. :thumb 
     
  2. emo_transformer

    emo_transformer Well-Known Member

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    omfg that is so cool!!
     
  3. emo_transformer

    emo_transformer Well-Known Member

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    omg that is so cool!!
     
  4. Valandar

    Valandar Dilettante and Dabbler

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    As I mentioned in the character list, he feels he horribly failed his fellow Dinobots, as well as a few other Autobots, when he wasn't fast enough to stop a catastrophe in a battle in the mid 2020's or so. After that, he became dedicated to doing anything he could to make sure it never happened again. Part of it was the reformat into a more modern image of a T-Rex, and part was learning Earth styles and incorporating them into his fighting style. :D 
     
  5. The621

    The621 Fuck you, that's why!

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    Nice. :thumb  I'm liking it.
     
  6. DilaZirK

    DilaZirK Is bullheaded.

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    Very nice take on Grimlock and the whole idea behind the training session. I'm eager to see how Prime's first class goes. :thumb 
     
  7. Valandar

    Valandar Dilettante and Dabbler

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    It'd actually be boring. Like Grimlock said, they're just going to be going over the forms of Pit Fighting until he gets the cybertronian equivalent of "muscle memory" for them, since he already has them in the Matrix.

    And by the time they get to Akido, who knows what will be happening.
     
  8. Pun-3X

    Pun-3X Well-Known Member

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    "I know Akido."

    "Then show Grimlock."

    WOHPAH! :D 

    Seriously not what's going to happen, in any way. I do like the descriptive writing. And yes, new font is much better--easier to read. (not just because it's a tad larger, but being spaced a little more helps lots)
     
  9. GladiatorPrime

    GladiatorPrime working on Rampage P2-V2

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    Nice! :thumb 
     
  10. Eric

    Eric VOTE.

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    Nice how Grimlock's a martial arts instructor. :lol 
     
  11. Seawing

    Seawing Lurker of the depths Moderator

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    the font looks great. much easier to read. looking forward for more comix
     
  12. Valandar

    Valandar Dilettante and Dabbler

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    Sorry, guys, I just don't have the time anymore to edit the pictures, render the backgrounds, and such.

    So, I'm turning it into a fanfic, which picks up where the webcomic left off. As soon as I start the fanfic thread, I'll post a link in here.


    Edit: Fanfic link: http://www.tfw2005.com/boards/showthread.php?t=143410
     
  13. DilaZirK

    DilaZirK Is bullheaded.

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    Ahh, that explains the fanfic thread. Sorry to hear that, twas such an awesome comic strip, but at least there's some continuity with the fanfic.
     
  14. Andersonh1

    Andersonh1 Man, I've been here a LONG time Veteran

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    I'll miss the comics, but I know how much time setting up the pics can be. At least we can still follow the story. :thumb 
     
  15. Razorclaw

    Razorclaw Are ya gonna draw pistols

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    Wow, great comics. I can't wait for the next installment. Please hurry up!!
     
  16. ambroseya

    ambroseya Well-Known Member

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    Great ! story so interest! and very like that 3D background!
     
  17. Gears

    Gears buh-buh-body ya Veteran

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    I was wondering where this thread went...Need pics! :cry 
     
  18. Lord Megatron

    Lord Megatron FFFF

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    Lrn2Read
     
  19. Gears

    Gears buh-buh-body ya Veteran

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    Lrn some manners. I know what he said, I want him to start making photo-comics again.