Okay, so I stole the whole alliteration thing from Renidragon. Hey, imitation is the best form of compliment. Anyway, I'm kinda knew here, and after reading comedic jems such as Shane's Comics, Renidragons Rediculous Randomness, Grimlock_13's Attempt at Funnies, Onesock's....um....*Insert title here*, Byran's Wacky Transcomics, and more (many, many more), I decided to try my hand at this whole photocomic business. Feel free to criticize, and enjoy!!!

It Begins

 

Great first try! Better than some of the newer comics around here!

 

Thanks man, it means a lot to me  

 

Great start! Keep it up I want to see more from you!

 

Just a suggestion, you may want to change your images to 800x600. It's under upload options in Photobucket.

 

Yeah, the writing looks kinda screwy.

 

Thanks, I'll give it a shot. Hold on, let me redo it.

 

Any better???

 

Yes. Much better.

 

Grimlock's questions are pretty funny, but what really makes it funny is seeing Unicron on that blue bedcover.  

 

Grimlock has no fear  

 

u forgot someone's comickry? hmm?

 

I'd had that blanket for years, and since I'm pretty lazy, I figured it'd make a good space backdrop for Unicron AND add to the humor.

Hey, I only have so much time in one day to spend reading comics (@#$%^&! school...). Anyway, have you seen how long some of these threads are? Shane has 200+ freakin' pages fer cryin' out loud! I'm working my way around, and I'm sure I'll get to yours.

 

Nice star sheets, and great start by the way  

 

For once, Grimlock makes someone else the fool, nice 

 

Yeah, I'm a big fan of Grimlock, so it was kinda nice to flip things around. I wanted to insult Unicron (really, why couldn't they have made both hands all glowy?) and figured Grimlock would be the perfect one to do it. He's so...infuriating   Anyway, thanks for all your kind words (or smilies), I appreciate it. I'll try and put up some more, as I have plenty of ideas, but good ol' school has a tendency to load me up with homework on the days I actually want to get up and do something.  

 

I like your comic, keep up the good work. d-(^o^)-b