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Old 11-21-2006, 05:19 PM   #1
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Grimlock_13's Attempt at Funnies

Let me start out saying I make no guarantees you will laugh. The strips are quite stupid, but hopefully a little amusing to more than just me.

Also, I'm faily computer-retarded, so the first couple strips have some major issues, so give me feedback and if you can't read the words PLEASE let me know and I'll post them. I finally figured out a better way to do things after I read a mini tutorial in Cataclizm1's awesome funnies thread...so by strip 3, it's MUCH better.





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Old 11-21-2006, 05:21 PM   #2
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Here's #2






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Old 11-21-2006, 05:27 PM   #3
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And, #3 (This is where I stopped being a dumbass figgured out how to do it better)















As a final note...Armada Hot Shot's dialogue will be easier to read in the future, I promise. I'm still working the kinks out...

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Old 11-21-2006, 05:59 PM   #4
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Armada Hot Shot's retarded. Not bad for a first start!

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Old 11-21-2006, 06:03 PM   #5
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Thanks man, the first stips I have are pretty slow...and yup Hot Shot's definitely retarded
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Old 11-21-2006, 06:07 PM   #6
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I like 'em all, but the last one is the best. "Why shouldn't I let your insubornination slide again and again?"

My only real critique: pics are a little big. Other than that, they seem fairly clear and readable. I enjoyed the comics.
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Old 11-21-2006, 06:09 PM   #7
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Thanks I still have a lot to practice, especially getting the sizes right.
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Old 11-21-2006, 06:09 PM   #8
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Old 11-21-2006, 06:19 PM   #9
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Thanks! (and thanks for your inadvertant help with your tutorial!)
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Old 11-21-2006, 06:30 PM   #10
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Welcome to the beast, you're off to a good start. "you ate paint chips as a kid"


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