Grimlock_13's Attempt at Funnies

Grimlock_13 · 11-21-2006, 05:19 PM

Let me start out saying I make no guarantees you will laugh. The strips are quite stupid, but hopefully a little amusing to more than just me.

Also, I'm faily computer-retarded, so the first couple strips have some major issues, so give me feedback and if you can't read the words PLEASE let me know and I'll post them. I finally figured out a better way to do things after I read a mini tutorial in Cataclizm1's awesome funnies thread...so by strip 3, it's MUCH better.

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Grimlock_13 · 11-21-2006, 05:21 PM

Here's #2

Grimlock_13 · 11-21-2006, 05:27 PM

And, #3 (This is where I stopped being a dumbass figgured out how to do it better)

As a final note...Armada Hot Shot's dialogue will be easier to read in the future, I promise. I'm still working the kinks out...

Hope you enjoy.

Eric · 11-21-2006, 05:59 PM

Armada Hot Shot's retarded.

Not bad for a first start!

Grimlock_13 · 11-21-2006, 06:03 PM

Thanks man, the first stips I have are pretty slow...and yup Hot Shot's definitely retarded

Andersonh1 · 11-21-2006, 06:07 PM

I like 'em all, but the last one is the best. "Why shouldn't I let your insubornination slide again and again?"

My only real critique: pics are a little big. Other than that, they seem fairly clear and readable. I enjoyed the comics.

Grimlock_13 · 11-21-2006, 06:09 PM

Thanks

I still have a lot to practice, especially getting the sizes right.

Gears · 11-21-2006, 06:09 PM

Great job!

Grimlock_13 · 11-21-2006, 06:19 PM

Thanks! (and thanks for your inadvertant help with your tutorial!)

CdnShockwave · 11-21-2006, 06:30 PM

Welcome to the beast, you're off to a good start. "you ate paint chips as a kid"

11-21-2006, 05:19 PM	#1
Grimlock_13 facebook.com/SlowRicky Join Date: Dec 2002 Posts: 20,745 Location: Boise,ID Collection Count: Just over 2,000 News Credits: 2	Grimlock_13's Attempt at Funnies Let me start out saying I make no guarantees you will laugh. The strips are quite stupid, but hopefully a little amusing to more than just me. Also, I'm faily computer-retarded, so the first couple strips have some major issues, so give me feedback and if you can't read the words PLEASE let me know and I'll post them. I finally figured out a better way to do things after I read a mini tutorial in Cataclizm1's awesome funnies thread...so by strip 3, it's MUCH better. URL=http://imageshack.us][/URL] www.facebook.com/SlowRicky Check out Grimlock_13's Attempt at Funnies if you dare! (Updated 05/24/13 with Comic 1,210!!!)

11-21-2006, 05:59 PM	#4
Eric Uchuu Keiji! GAVAN! Join Date: May 2003 Posts: 21,854 Location: Dublin, OH News Credits: 11	Armada Hot Shot's retarded. Not bad for a first start! PSN ID: Eric32289 / Steam ID: nintendoranger / Pokemon Black 2 Friend Code: 5415 7752 9708

11-21-2006, 06:03 PM	#5
Grimlock_13 facebook.com/SlowRicky Join Date: Dec 2002 Posts: 20,745 Location: Boise,ID Collection Count: Just over 2,000 News Credits: 2	Thanks man, the first stips I have are pretty slow...and yup Hot Shot's definitely retarded www.facebook.com/SlowRicky Check out Grimlock_13's Attempt at Funnies if you dare! (Updated 05/24/13 with Comic 1,210!!!)

11-21-2006, 06:09 PM	#7
Grimlock_13 facebook.com/SlowRicky Join Date: Dec 2002 Posts: 20,745 Location: Boise,ID Collection Count: Just over 2,000 News Credits: 2	Thanks I still have a lot to practice, especially getting the sizes right. www.facebook.com/SlowRicky Check out Grimlock_13's Attempt at Funnies if you dare! (Updated 05/24/13 with Comic 1,210!!!)

11-21-2006, 06:09 PM	#8
Gears buh-buh-body ya Join Date: Dec 2004 Posts: 24,214 Location: Killa Kali Los Angeles home of tha scandalous Collection Count: A gazillion. News Credits: 12	Great job! Read "Gears' Comedy Explosion!!!" How awesome is Gears?

11-21-2006, 05:21 PM	#2
Grimlock_13 facebook.com/SlowRicky Join Date: Dec 2002 Posts: 20,745 Location: Boise,ID Collection Count: Just over 2,000 News Credits: 2	Here's #2 www.facebook.com/SlowRicky Check out Grimlock_13's Attempt at Funnies if you dare! (Updated 05/24/13 with Comic 1,210!!!)

11-21-2006, 05:27 PM	#3
Grimlock_13 facebook.com/SlowRicky Join Date: Dec 2002 Posts: 20,745 Location: Boise,ID Collection Count: Just over 2,000 News Credits: 2	And, #3 (This is where I stopped being a dumbass figgured out how to do it better) As a final note...Armada Hot Shot's dialogue will be easier to read in the future, I promise. I'm still working the kinks out... Hope you enjoy. www.facebook.com/SlowRicky Check out Grimlock_13's Attempt at Funnies if you dare! (Updated 05/24/13 with Comic 1,210!!!)

11-21-2006, 06:07 PM	#6
Andersonh1 2005 Veteran Join Date: Aug 2002 Posts: 10,327 Location: Greenville, SC Collection Count: 320+	I like 'em all, but the last one is the best. "Why shouldn't I let your insubornination slide again and again?" My only real critique: pics are a little big. Other than that, they seem fairly clear and readable. I enjoyed the comics.

11-21-2006, 06:19 PM	#9
Grimlock_13 facebook.com/SlowRicky Join Date: Dec 2002 Posts: 20,745 Location: Boise,ID Collection Count: Just over 2,000 News Credits: 2	Thanks! (and thanks for your inadvertant help with your tutorial!) www.facebook.com/SlowRicky Check out Grimlock_13's Attempt at Funnies if you dare! (Updated 05/24/13 with Comic 1,210!!!)