Grimlock_13's Attempt at Funnies

Grimlock_13 · 11-21-2006, 06:19 PM

Let me start out saying I make no guarantees you will laugh. The strips are quite stupid, but hopefully a little amusing to more than just me.

Also, I'm faily computer-retarded, so the first couple strips have some major issues, so give me feedback and if you can't read the words PLEASE let me know and I'll post them. I finally figured out a better way to do things after I read a mini tutorial in Cataclizm1's awesome funnies thread...so by strip 3, it's MUCH better.

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Grimlock_13 · 11-21-2006, 06:21 PM

Here's #2

Grimlock_13 · 11-21-2006, 06:27 PM

And, #3 (This is where I stopped being a dumbass figgured out how to do it better)

As a final note...Armada Hot Shot's dialogue will be easier to read in the future, I promise. I'm still working the kinks out...

Hope you enjoy.

Eric · 11-21-2006, 06:59 PM

Armada Hot Shot's retarded.

Not bad for a first start!

Grimlock_13 · 11-21-2006, 07:03 PM

Thanks man, the first stips I have are pretty slow...and yup Hot Shot's definitely retarded

Shane Anderson · 11-21-2006, 07:07 PM

I like 'em all, but the last one is the best. "Why shouldn't I let your insubornination slide again and again?"

My only real critique: pics are a little big. Other than that, they seem fairly clear and readable. I enjoyed the comics.

Grimlock_13 · 11-21-2006, 07:09 PM

Thanks

I still have a lot to practice, especially getting the sizes right.

Gears · 11-21-2006, 07:09 PM

Great job!

Grimlock_13 · 11-21-2006, 07:19 PM

Thanks! (and thanks for your inadvertant help with your tutorial!)

CdnShockwave · 11-21-2006, 07:30 PM

Welcome to the beast, you're off to a good start. "you ate paint chips as a kid"