Transformers: SG-1 ON HIATUS!!

This is my first comic so stay with me here. I hope you enjoy much as I do and any problem's or criticism, just post on here thank you and enjoy the comic series. I will try to do one every friday sometimes it might be later or I might do an extra during the middle of the week as well sometimes. On hiatus due to past pictures not loading and when i redo them there broken still.

Episode 1: Down with the sickness​

 

Good start!

 

An interesting and somewhat amusing premise. Let's see where this leads.

 

I'm interested, good start.

 

Rodimus, Knockout and Mami Tomoe....a nice motley crew.

 

Thank you.

Thank you I think you will like were it leads to.

Thank you.

Thank you I wanted my main group to be random and in a few weeks we should be seeing one of there new members (order hasn't come in yet but that is fine by me).

 

Also looking through my first episode I noticed a few things. Wow Hot Rod has almost no elbows at all and Silverbolt has no knee caps. Also if your wondering why I had Silverbolt on his knees playing on the 3D's and not sitting its because when I have him sitting down hes at an odd angle because of his back plane kibble. Oh and I don't know why the quality of the last picture is a bit odd for it must off happened when I uploaded to imgur as well. It also looks like they cut some of it as well. Here ill put it as an attachment so you can see how I shot it.

 

Liking how it's starting so far.   The letters would work better if they were white so they can appear a little more clear but still it's a cool start.

 

Thank you and I might do that the green I use for Knock Out can be hard to read. But I tried using multiple color so you can tell who's saying that line. But I just might go all white soon because its a pain for me to see the green.

 

nice start

 

Thank you very much its my first time doing a comic. I don't know why it double posted for.

 

Thank you very much its my first time doing a comic.

 

My advice. Reply to the posts in one post that also contains the next comic. It saves space and makes things feel less cluttered. You can gander around and view some of the other comics to see how others do this.

Great start though. Anything that has the word hentai in it's first post definetly has my attention.  

 

I know but i only update once a week (I might do it more often then though). Thank you lol I would do the next one but Hot Rod order hasn't come in yet.

 

I see Silverbolt too

 

Alright I had to change the story a bit because Hot Rod order has been delayed (well mine really but still). But here is the next chapter I used black text for some parts so it was more readable.

Episode 2: The CCBSing​

 

 

I did find the text hard to read. I think you should put it in a text box

 

  agree about the text.

 

I concur with Nobleboivon and Bumblebeej8 on the text issue. Still a funny comic, though.  

 

... And THAT, boils and gargoyles, is why you shouldn't let a gambler, cosmetics-conscious Decepticon sportscar with the garish purple-green paintjob pick the LEGO Constraction Figure themes. Next thing you know, the Multiverse will be thinking you have... issues. And laughing long and hard about it. CHI Laval, on the other hand, will be the right choice for the new member, knowing the Lion Prince's gone through a lot himself too. I hope.

Ms. Mami, by the way, is a veteran magical girl by my reckoning - I mean she's been the Model Altruistic Magical HeroIne (MAMI) fighting for truth, justice and the Japanese way and giving her attacks names while she's at it since Day One - so she should be giving Hot Rod and team some combat tips and wisdom, just to make sure the Autobot Cavalier doesn't pull breakneck stunts like he did back in '86. Hopefully, she won't get her head bitten off on Team TFSG-1's first mission.

Hopefully.

Oh, and Astrocreep: there's this wonder thing invented for comics, old-fashioned and web alike. It's called THE SPEECH BUBBLE! And do it in unique styles and fonts while you're at it!