Excellent update. I really love the character dynamics/relationships you have in play here, it really shows you've put a lot of effort in making them realistic.
Oh boy, looks like there is trouble coming. Seeing Wheeljack and Ratchet together makes me want to see a “Stand by me” gag just once. I also hope somebody puts Prowl in his place soon.
I already commented, I know, but I just noticed Wheeljack's awkward little wave in the "No buts, Prowl!" panel. Very nice touch, there.
Nope! Thanks, as I mentioned, I worked on this for a looooong time, so I'm hoping that comes out in the updates. Thank you! I really do try to go for dynamic relationships whenever I can. Ohhhhhh myyyyyyyyy! Well, the series is still young, so a few Out of the Box references might pop up here and there. No, it's fine, I was wondering if any one would catch that. Alright guys, as promised this weeks update is longer, but just letting you know, next weeks is a little short. After that though everything should be back to a normal length. Enjoy! Issue 6:
Well Prowl isn't trusted. I hope Ironhide will be okay. Also what gun did you use for Bumblebee? I really like the look of it!
RTS Bumblebee, huh? Not gonna lie, I was expecting Goldbug, but it is nice to see you still have that figure. Wish I did, too, really. :grin And I'll jump on the Prowl is a jerk bandwagon, here. PROWL YOU MOTHERFRAGGING SPAWN OF A GLITCH!!! IRONHIDE DIDN'T DESERVE THAT! YOU BACKSTABBING, SLAG-SPOUTING SPAWN OF UNICRON!!! Whoo! Rant over.
I noticed that there is a “slight” mistake made in a few panels. Hey, it’s Phil. That’s it! Somebody get a Whirl out here pronto. It’s time Prowl gets taken down a peg. Alright. I might point any that I see. Feel free to ignore them.
Prowl how dare you! May Megatron rip your head off and stick it on a pike. Hell Optimus might let Megatron do it
I hear Roger C Carmel when reading Cyclonus' lines……since this seems to be the competent Cyclonus who was at times the closest things the Season 3 Decepticons had to a rational/ sane leader in light of Galvatron's insanity. Or is Cyclonus a Brigade Commander? Maybe even having Smolder as his underling…...
Sheesh, I thought you were supposed to have the minimum amount of integrity. Yeah, you prolly are thinking "Oh my plan will work and Ratchet can't call me out on anything because of that. And thus I should remain in charge even if we got this Prime online. Why aren't you kissing my skidplate as I am speaking?"
PROWL YA AFT! Though odds are, someone on the Autobots team probably saw that turret activate. Prowls gonna be in a heap of trouble!