Transformers- Splintered

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  1. BBJazz

    BBJazz Well-Endowed Member

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    So for a while now I've wanted to make a web comic, I finally made this pilot today. I know the picture aren't too great, and as of yet I don't know how far I'm gonna take this series, but for now feed back is welcome. This comic is meant to take a more serious tone, but hopefully there will be some funny stuff too, I admit I'm not great at writing. Also, some of the pictures I used don't belong to me, and I don't take credit for them. Anyways, without further ado, I give you the intro to Transformers- Splintered.

    I'm not sure I posted this in the right place, so, apologies if I didn't.

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  2. Stonecrusher

    Stonecrusher Just another Edgelord

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    While it should be prudent for you to actually insert your attatchments as images, I have to say this is some nice work.
     
  3. BBJazz

    BBJazz Well-Endowed Member

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    Thanks!, I don't have a problem doing that, but I don't know how to
     
  4. King Waspinator

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    This looks like a nice start. I look forward to see how this goes
     
  5. Stonecrusher

    Stonecrusher Just another Edgelord

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    Step 1: Click on Attachment Link, making sure you open it in another tab.

    Step 2: Copy the image's url, then go back to the post and paste it.

    Step 3: Add [​IMG] to the ends of said url

    Step 4: Move on to the next attachment, repeat as necessary

    Step 5: When you run out of attachments, you're done.
     
  6. Autovolt 127

    Autovolt 127 Get In The Titan, Prime!

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    Cosmos's stupid question. :lol 

    This is an interesting premise so far. :popcorn 
     
  7. BBJazz

    BBJazz Well-Endowed Member

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    So when you say to put [​IMG] on the ends of the url, could you maybe give me an example of that? I've tried it a few different ways and I just get the url underneath my text.
     
  8. megatronski

    megatronski Flamewar's strongest soldier

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    This looks interesting
     
  10. BBJazz

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    Alright guys, I got the images right I think.
     
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    megatronski Flamewar's strongest soldier

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    Yup, looks much better.

    This certainly has promise, you've got a reader for sure.
     
  12. BBJazz

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    Glad to hear it!
     
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    Transformers: Splintered, Chapter 2

    I got a lot of great feed back on my first chapter :) , thanks everyone who posted! Chapter two focuses on the autobots that were on board the other half of the Axalon, and are separated from the ones in chapter one.
    Also it seems like I put Huffer's name twice for the roll call... oops
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    so I wonder who the Decepticons are (odds are Megatron, Starscream, Soundwave, Thundercracker, Skywarp, the Stunticons, maybe the Constructicons)
     
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    There will be a decepticon in chapter 3
     
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    nice
     
  17. BBJazz

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    Transformers Splintered Chapter 3

    I'm having issues uploading this one. Anyways, this focuses on Ratchet, and where he ended up.

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    The story's getting to be interesting so far especially the newest one with Ratchet and Astrotrain.
     
  19. Autovolt 127

    Autovolt 127 Get In The Titan, Prime!

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    Interesting how the Autobot forces have all split up.

    Ratchet's with Astrotrain...:popcorn 
     
  20. nobleboivin

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    nice updates