"the outback" not the outback your thinking of..

Discussion in 'Transformers Funnies' started by primeout, Jun 5, 2015.

  1. primeout, Jun 5, 2015
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    yeah so here it is, its not that funny but you just wait...

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  2. Ømnidrive, Jun 5, 2015
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    Ømnidrive Stop.....think......fart.....and keep on going

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  3. Olymprix, Jun 5, 2015
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    Copy an image URL by right-clicking a picture on Photobucket. Then click on the icon that looks like a picture of mountains in the "post-message" box here on TFW. Finally, paste the URL into the pop-up dialogue box.
     
  4. primeout, Jun 5, 2015
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    ep 1 tackticts

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  5. Olymprix, Jun 5, 2015
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    Olymprix Moonwalkin' on the Ceiling

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    Are you copying the images or the image URLs?
     
  6. primeout, Jun 5, 2015
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    yup thats was my brain there :/ thank you!
     
  7. bumblebeej8, Jun 5, 2015
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    Huh. Good job.
     
  8. nobleboivin, Jun 6, 2015
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    Interesting.
     
  9. Lock Cade, Jun 6, 2015
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    Hmm, not a bad start. Love the outdoor shots. Will keep an eye on this comic and see where it goes.
     
  10. Ømnidrive, Jun 6, 2015
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    Ømnidrive Stop.....think......fart.....and keep on going

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  11. StarFire_MK2, Jun 6, 2015
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    Nice outdoor shots. Too few comic use them IMO. I'd suggest proper sentence structure, proper spelling and a bit of work on fitting text into the speech balloons. Errors such as those tend to pull readers out of the story, and you want your readers to be immersed in the story.
     
  12. Autobot1000, Jun 6, 2015
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    interesting. and shot outside. looking good. you have a reader
     
  13. Autovolt 127, Jun 6, 2015
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    Autovolt 127 Get In The Titan, Prime!

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    I'll say its cool you shot outside. :popcorn