Transformers: Reawakening

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  1. God Ginrai

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    Greetings, TFW2005! After reading some comics around here I decided I wanted to join in on the fun! And now I present to you...TRANSFORMERS: REAWAKENING!

    The Story So Far:
    50 years have passed since the end of the Great War. In the final battle, Optimus Prime finally slayed his mortal enemy, Megatron, and afterwards, almost all of the major Decepticons- including Starscream, Soundwave, and Shockwave- dissappeared. Cybertron has enjoyed an era of peace and prosperity. But that era...might be about to end.

    CHAPTER 1: THE MEETING

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  2. God Ginrai

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    Any comments or criticism is greatly appreciated! I'm just starting out with this and I'd love to know how I can improve.

    I already know one thing I can fix. I noticed I used '...' a bit too much.
     
  3. Stonecrusher

    Stonecrusher Just another Edgelord

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    This looks like it could be fun...
     
  4. Olymprix

    Olymprix Moonwalkin' on the Ceiling

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    Looking good! Can't wait for the next update!

    Also, I love elipses too... So you're good! ;) 
     
  5. God Ginrai

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    Yay! My first compliment!

    I'll do Chapter 2 tomorrow or over the weekend. I think I'm gonna shoot for 1-2 updates per week.
     
  6. bumblebeej8

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    Wow, another amazing comic! I feel like this comic making process people are starting to do is getting better and better.
     
  7. DOTM Bumblebee

    DOTM Bumblebee Funny Little Man

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    This could be interesting... Is this taking place in the G1 cartoon continuity, or some alternate G1 continuity?
     
  8. God Ginrai

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    It's an alternate G1 continuity that I'm making up as I go along.
     
  9. nobleboivin

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    looks fun
     
  10. God Ginrai

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    In the next update Straxus might reveal his plan (I haven't decided on what it actually is yet) and we'll also see what the Autobots are up to.
     
  11. bumblebeej8

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    Ok.
     
  12. Wars

    Wars I ate the WHOLE plate

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    Seems interesting so far. I'll follow it

    Also, Bugbite could be "Small guy" :p 
     
  13. Autovolt 127

    Autovolt 127 Get In The Titan, Prime!

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    Starscream You know who he is. :lol 
     
  14. Lock Cade

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    Pretty interesting start here.

    My only recommendation is to resize your comic images. They're too large, and we do have a rule in place regarding the size of comic images:

    Generally, 800x600 is the ideal size for comic images. If you could resize the images from the first comic update, as well as the images for future comic updates, to at least 800x600 that would be terrific.

    Other than that, I think you're off to a good start and I can't wait to read the next update. *Whips out :popcorn *
     
  15. God Ginrai

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    Can do.

    Also glad to see my comic is popcorn-worthy.
     
  16. God Ginrai

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    Good idea...I never thought of that. Although the '?' is intended to imply something mysterious about him...

    EDIT: Aaaaand image size is fixed!
     
  17. Lock Cade

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    Thanks, I just didn't want you to get in trouble for having comic images that were too large. :thumb 

    Your comic is definitely popcorn-worthy in my book. :) 
     
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    Rattrap Primal Geek Overlord, Botbot Collector

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    Nice
     
  19. God Ginrai

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    I apologize for there not being an update this weekend like I said there would be. Things like 'playing Gmod with my friends', 'reading MTMTE with my friends', and 'having a killer headache for the past few hours' have kept me occupied. I'll try and shoot an update tomorrow.

    No guarantees.

    Oh, and if anyone wants to make suggestions for characters, feel free to do so. I especially want more Decepticons, since so far Straxus's team consists of literally all my Decepticons except for FOC Soundwave, BH Shockwave, and Classics Megatron (I have Generations Jhiaxus on the way and he will appear in the comic).
     
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    Waspinator? Generations 2013 Bumblebee? Whirl? Anyone else?