Comic 2: TV Time! I film this like a week ago, Before the Mythbusters Holiday Special was over on Science (Channel), It was on Friday January 2nd. Not to be Confused of what there sitting... And here's the Song that Me and Jazz are listening too, Na Na Na (I found a Diamond) a Minecraft Original Song by J Rice.
Not bad, needs work on grammar and spelling though. If you think I'm being a Grammar Nazi blame my English 112 teacher.
Our heroes! Sitting on couches! Eating snack sticks! ...That's it. Sorry, we'll try to come up with something juicier next week.
Hmmm, this comic is kinda interesting. Though, I got a couple things that I can't help but be very nitpicky about: 1) I had to squint to read what Landmine and Jazz were saying because you used very light color text with white speech bubbles -- I recommend you don't use such light colors for text and instead go with something darker and more readable. 2) Spelling and grammar, like Gauntletblade said, needs work; for instance, it should be "we're" instead of "where." My recommendation is to use a word processor to type out the comic's dialogue, use the spell-check to see if it picks up any misspelled words or bad grammar, and then copy/paste the dialogue into whatever program you use for adding speech bubbles to your comic images. Other than that, I think you're off to a good start. And I'll stay tuned to see where this comic goes, see if this comic will continue to keep me interested or not.
