So, recently I've begun updating my funnies again. But I've always wanted to try my hand at the more serious writing tones that won't appear much in my funnies. So, I thought I'd make a serious comic that I will update when I can. It won't be as frequent as my funnies, but a good amount every month. So without further ado, I introduce you to

Broken; A Transformers Comic​

So, I know it's not my best writing but it's just the intro comic, so bear with me. But whatcha guys think? Should I continue to update this or just stick with the funnies?

 

  Just use a white background for the speech though. It's kind of hard to see what Megatron says. Other than that looks good.

 

Looks fine, just do what nobleboivin said and you should be fine.

 

Uh, no, not me, Megatron, sir. Not me.

 

Good start, can't wait to see what happens next!  

 

Intriguing start. I'm getting started on your other comic, by the way.  

 

that's certainly an attention grabbing start. nice

 

Well that Coronation was some bad comedy.  

 

Hey, Classics Megatron…………most Megatron's nowadays are either Movie Line, Stealth, WFC, or MP

 

Gotcha, I shall do that.

Glad to hear!  

Yeah, I thought a little change was long overdue.

I'm so glad everyone seems to be liking the beginning so far! The first like 5-6 comics are just gonna be establishing ones focusing on like 2-3 main characters from each faction. Then all the major story will start. I'd rather get exposition out of the way now and then jump right in to some good ole fashion Transformers craziness.

 

Broken #2

Here's comic number 2. It focuses on Optimus Prime.










So, yeah. Optimus going to therapy. Not my weirdest idea, but still XD

 

Optimus in therapy....interesting development.

 

Optimus in therapy, like that.

 

Optimus in therapy. Interesting

 

Nothing like checking in to the Psych Ward to piece your shattered psyche back together and take off your ego load. Sure, there's this whole thing called "destiny", but what's the point in being a glory hog? After all, this ain't a one mech show... sometimes, you get to be hero - other times, you let your friends be heroes...

 

I see what you did there, the therapist is MINDset, very clever. Yeah this is a neat idea, Prime struggling with the defeat of Megatron not by his own hand. Keep up the great work!

 

  Interesting...

 

That's a really cool idea for prime, kudos.  

 

So, right now I'm away from home and can't shoot the next update. But before I do I wanted to mention the next 4 characters I'll be introducing in their own sort of "Spotlight" comics you could say. And I wanted to know who you guys think I should do next.

• Bumblebee
• Kup
• Shockwave
• Blitzwing

Just comment on which one you think I should for the next spotlight thing. See ya at the next update!

 

Bumblebee! Bumblebee! Bumblebee! +3*244