Transformers: Comic

Discussion in 'Transformers Funnies' started by Chief Gage, Dec 12, 2014.

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  1. Transformers: Earths Own Autobots

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  3. Transformers: United Forces

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  1. Chief Gage

    Chief Gage Well-Known Member

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    Hey all this is the first comic on this site that i am releasing that i have done on my own please bare with me for I have drawn these when i was younger like 2 years ago younger so my drawing arent as good as they are today i will be realeasing characters as i go no bios for them just pictures!!

    I hope you enjoy and please help me find a name for this comic by voteing on the pole!!

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  2. Stonecrusher

    Stonecrusher Just another Edgelord

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    This seems more like an art thread then a comic thread...
     
  3. Chief Gage

    Chief Gage Well-Known Member

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    Ya see i cant do computer comics so I drew the comic instead those are just some of the characters that will be in the comic should I make a seperat thread for that? its my first time?
     
  4. mandiprime97

    mandiprime97 Junkion

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    Uhh...okay then.
     
  5. Stonecrusher

    Stonecrusher Just another Edgelord

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    Yeah, in the art forum. Also, do you have a scanner?
     
  6. Chief Gage

    Chief Gage Well-Known Member

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    .........no... I have laptop thats about it besides my phone
     
  7. Autobus Prime

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    The lineart looks good. Looking forward to this comic. Good luck!
     
  8. Stonecrusher

    Stonecrusher Just another Edgelord

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    Well, that's fine, I guess. Your comic will find its footing soon enough.
     
  9. Chief Gage

    Chief Gage Well-Known Member

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    okay thanks stone crusher and when i start releasing it keep in mind i made this like 2 years ago to the art work isnt that good as my current ones
     
  10. Chief Gage

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    thanks bro!!!
     
  11. Zetaprime

    Zetaprime Lordofdecepticonmonkeys

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    awesome job
     
  12. Chief Gage

    Chief Gage Well-Known Member

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    Okay I have this weird way of speech bubbles As you can see I have labled the bubbles that you read in order please let me know if you cannot understand this way I do I will Rewrite the speech bubles to a way that you find in normal comics but ya here is page 1,2,3


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  13. Stonecrusher

    Stonecrusher Just another Edgelord

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    Does your computer have a photo-editing program?
     
  14. Autobus Prime

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    ^Stoney - I know what you're thinking, but I'd almost hate to see this comic touched by photoediting! It's so cool the way it is. It feels like a true classic fancomic experience, the way it is all drawn on paper and then simply presented as photos in a binder, with minimal intrusion by technology. Reading this, I don't feel like I'm on the Internet at all. I feel like I'm picking up a handcrafted 'zine at the comic shop and just flipping through it. And yet the comic quickly and effectively creates its setting, and draws you right in.

    There are truly so many ways to make comic art.

    Gage - Your human character designs are so 80s and I love them to pieces. Especially Optimus Prime and Mirage. Ironhide is great too. It's just right. You really put a lot of visual interest into those.

    The only thing I had trouble with is the word balloons being so jump-aroundy. I know they're numbered, but I end up scanning around a lot. This is something that gets easier to plan with practice. Would it help to write out the dialogue on another sheet of paper, then transfer it back to the main sheet? This might help you allot space so the bubbles can be in order.

    I hope you continue with this!
     
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    Ømnidrive Stop.....think......fart.....and keep on going

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    This holds great promise hard to read at times but cool job I await more
     
  16. Chief Gage

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    @autobus Prime
    Thanks bro!!!
    And i figured the bubbles may be an issue thank you for telling me I will rewrite the bubbles in a more easyer to read order for future posts

    And yay i was aimng for that king of style thank you very much!!!
     
  17. Chief Gage

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    uh i have a resizer and a really cheap crappy editor that i hate useing because its crap
     
  18. Chief Gage

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    thanks road!!!
     
  19. Stonecrusher

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    This has potential.
     
  20. Chief Gage

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    thanks stonecrusher!!!!