Transformers: Enslavement

Discussion in 'Transformers Fan Fiction' started by Shadowwavepool7, Jul 11, 2014.

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    Wow didnt see the dino in that very cool!! And what happened to mirage?
     
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    No f****** way this can happen!! Not prime something has too happen!
     
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    DAMN!! optimus kicked aft I thought for sure that he was going too finish off shockwave!! and the fallen he seems unstoppable!! it seems also that the dinos are a big help! and damn soundwave opening up those bridges shame on him!!
     
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    cliffy and longarm what the hell!! why can't some of the cons die!! and wasn't it the fallen who killed prima?
     
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    I've read 9 and 10 both are writing/typed well. =)
     
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    I read up to part 14. Brimstone seems to be the real top character in those parts. good writing/typing. =)
     
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    not sure if i read part 35 so i re-read it! man the fallen is ruthless! and his brothers linking up is not good! was hoping that optimus would take out shocky but it didn't happen!
     
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    DAMN longarm and cliff both SCRAP!! at least sky is dead but two autobots!! i hope snarl is ok!
     
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    i had a feeling that that power that mindwipe had would not work!! optimus is the man! but having too fight his friends i was worried for a bit. also i thought bee and sides where going too finish off sideways but no deal. i'm just glad they survived!
     
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    poor cliff and longarm sniff sniff!! but optimus will kick some major aft with his fallen warriors parts!! at least now optimus knows the truth!
     
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    Wow what an epic fight!! AWESOME!! Man I was hoping that optimus would finish off the fallen!! And megs coming back jeez!! Wanna see megs off-line screamer real bad!!
     
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    Oh scrap not CW sh**!! Poor weazel I thought for a minute that silas was going too use his body as an experiment!! They would let him rest in peace!! And the autobots so many lost!!
     
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    Awesome ending and post credit!! Fear and terra?!! Well maybe they become autobots!! This one was incredible very much looking forward too the next one!! Once again incredible job!!
     
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    Damn shadow epic!! I'm going too work now but hopefully I'll read some tonite!
     
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    I read both 13 and 14 under the same page #20
    Operation Breakout. I appreciated the amount of narration between most of the characters lines. Totally helps to under stand the story.

    Good day Shadowwavepool7 :thumb