Wow, now that is a cast.

 

This reminds me of G1 in a sense with this kind of cast  

 

Pretty interesting human bios

 

interested in how this turns out

 

Interesting. Can we expect more humans in this story based on the bios you've given us?

 

Nice cast !

 

I love this season two cast so much words cannot explain it. again can't wait to see how this all works out.

 

Wow a lot of new characters. Hopefully we'll get enough story time with all of them. That's the only thing I'm worried about but I'm sure you'll handle it well.

 

If you were threatened by the Fallen already, here is is official appearance in Enslavement.

The perfect mix of his G1 and Prime counterpart, and all credit goes to Barricade24.

 

Man Fallen looks sweet here.  

 

The color difference with the torso is actually starting to grow on me.

 

impressive

 

Now that's what one of the thirteen should look like.

 

Awesome  

 

I like it.

 

I thought it important to credit the sources of my images.

Credits:

Cliffjumper Image from Depthwave's Prime Screen Captures

Long Haul image acquirred from capcomki's Flickr images.

Mirage gun acquired from Moy's Mirage image.

Fog Swamp Image Landscape photos | landscapes with a soul

Space Photo hdwallphotos.com

Street Image - seattle.gov

Sideways image from animevice.com

Ground bridge image from Depthwave's screencaps.

Fallen Images from TFwiki

Grimlock image from polygon.com

Straight Jacket image from raerei.com

Waspinator from transformerswiki by Jipivotz

 

Dear Primus. Seeing Terradive in a strait jacket is just...scary.

 

Well good news everyone. I have finished all of my summer-school work. Now full fledged progress on Enslavement starts tomorrow! Let's get this party started!

 

Well the wait is over folks. Here is part 1: School Tools

Hundreds of millions of years ago before the war for Cybertron, there was a time when there was peace. This period of time was called The Golden Age. At this point in history, Cybertron’s technological and social advances were beyond their wildest dreams, but Cybertron’s ultimate destiny is nothing but shattered dreams. There were many crucial factors that played in the part of Cybertron’s current war, but for right now we will tease the very first event that would lead to a chain reaction that led to the great war.

We now go to Cybertron in The Golden Age, and the win suns are beginning to set. All is calm and peaceful, until we see a glimmer in the sky. The glimmer gets bigger until it comes right on screen. It is an ancient looking jet, with an appearance as old as time itself. The jet flies to one of Cybertron’s moons and begins to slow down. The jet begins to slowly transform, until we now see the the full might of the individual. He is none other than Megatronus Prime, now known only by his new name; The Fallen. His appearance is a mix between his Dreamwave and Prime design. The top of his head-piece is his Prime design, while the eyes and mouth plate are from his Dreamwave design. He is a mix between silver and grey with his Prime incarnation’s arms and legs. His chest is very Dreamwave esque, but redesigned to look less blocky and more sinisterly sleek. He has several vents around his body that that glow, giving him the look of a living furnace of hate and evil.

The Fallen looks at his right hand, and then makes it into a fist. His eyes flare up with flames for a brief moment, and then he just stares at Cybertron with sheer determination. All of a sudden there is the roaring of other engines as two more glimmers appear behind them. They pick up speed until they transform and land to the left and right of The Fallen. The camera blurs them out so we can’t see who or what they are. But noticeable features that can be seen are the one on his right has a single eye. The other appears to have a visor over his eyes, along with something strange on his head. The Fallen walks forward and scans Cybertron. After he does this, the schematics of a lone structure appears on a hologram. It isn’t very big, so it must be a house. But why a house? What would a demigod want with a house? Megatronus gestures with his hand to command the two mystery figures to come with him. Together they transform to Cybertron, with malicious intent. It is now officially night time, perfect for them to slink around in the darkness. They arrive at a tall building, and then he teleports, and comes in jet form to a small neighborhood. He spirals upside down until he lands with one knee and hand on the ground. He moves his head up slowly he he sees the house that he was looking for. The other two come down to join him, but that’s when The Fallen does something strange. He reaches back with his left hand, and pulls out a grey sword that glows with fire. He then uses his right hand to make a stopping motion while he has his back turned to them.

“No, you must stay here and watch. (sinister) He’s mine.”

The pair exchange a confused look together, but agree by nodding their heads in response. The Fallen walks ominously towards the house, and then time begins to accelerate. The main reason for this is because what happens next will be revealed near the end of the story. But what happened in the end is that a great ball of white light gets sent up into the sky, and goes in lightspeed to parts unknown. The ball of light lands on an extremely distant planet. A stone structure emerges from the ground and traps the light inside. The stones continue to move until it creates a very strange structure. As the camera goes higher and higher we see that this is no ordinary planet… it’s Earth. Then the screen goes black as the words Transformers: Enslavement appears next to some rusty chains. The chains and logo continue to rust until it dissipates into several pieces….

Prime: “Billions of years ago after the creation of the universe there was the 12, who would later become the 13. They were the first Primes, and the greatest warriors in the universe. But there was one who took a path to darkness, and his name was Megatronus. Nobody knows why he chose this path. Many things were stricken from the records of the 13, but last time anyone had ever heard of him, he was banished from Cybertron because of his actions, and he has never been heard from since.”

Carly: “Wow cool story Optimus!”

Spike: “Tell it again!”

Chip: “No, tell us a different story!”

Prime: (scratching his head) “Well I suppose I could…”

Agent Fowler comes in to greet everyone and calls for Optimus’s attention.

Fowler: “Hey kids, I need to speak to Prime for a bit.”

Carly: -sigh- “Fine.”

Spike: “So who’s going to be our party bus this time Chip?”

Chip examines a calendar that has been pinned to the all of The Ark, and there is a name in red on today’s date.

Chip: “Hmm, looks like it’s Ironhide this time.”

Ironhide hears this and groans. Longarm comes into the base to give him a tease.

Longarm: (teasing) “Oh how the mighty have fallen. I’m just glad It’s not my turn.”

Ironhide: “You can only fit two people.”

Longarm: (proudly) “And that’s why I picked a tow truck for my alternate mode.”

Wheel: “Will you keep it down? Some of us are trying to work?”

?: “Oh yes please, I don’t mean to be rude, but Wheeljack and I are on the brink of success.”

The camera goes to Wheeljack, and we are now introduced to a new Autobot colored in red and black. His name is Perceptor, and he is the Autobot’s leading scientist. not to mention one of the politest individuals one could ever meet.

Longarm: “My apologies guys, just having some fun messing with Ironhide.”

Perce: (sincere) “Oh no no, I want you to have fun. I’m just so caught up in these equations.”

Wheel: “I think what he’s trying to say is he forgives you.”

Cliffjumper comes walking in with a big grin on his face. Knowing him he is up to no good. He approaches the lab of Perceptor and Wheeljack and begins the usual Cliffjumper routine.

Cliff: (leaning on the table) “Hey guys, how are you?”

Wheel: (rolling his eyes) “Swell.”

Perce: (smiling) “Oh just wonderful!”

Cliff: “That’s good to hear. You know what I like having? A mouth.”

Wheel: ‘Rea smooth Cliffjumper.”

Cliff: “Want to join the people with mouths club Perceptor?”

Perce: (gleefully) “Oh I’ve never been part of a club before!”

Wheeljack facepalms as Cliffjumper changes the subject of the conversation.

Cliff: “So what are you guys working on?”

Wheel: “We’re trying to work on some new weapons to help aid Optimus and the rest of us.”

Cliff: “Are those Decepticon parts I see you tinkering with?”

Wheel: “Correct, I want to reverse-engineer their weapons and use them for our benefit.”

Cliff: (bluntly) “Or are you building an army so you can be a successful traitor?”

Wheel: “This again?”

Cliff: “Hey, I gotta stay on my toes, especially with all these new people around.”

Wheel: “I never see you accuse Perceptor.”

Cliff: ‘That’s because I know he isn’t a backstabber. I know that Perceptor, Optimus, Sideways, and Ratchet are so not traitor material.”

Wheel: “But why me?”

Cliff: “Look flat head, if you weren't such a shady character, then I wouldn’t have to keep an eye on you.”

Wheeljack groans as it gets closer to nighttime. At this point it’s time for the kids to go on their night adventures.

Carly: (snapping her fingers) “Well what are you waiting for party bus? Transform!”

Ironhide grumbles a few words to himself and transforms. The kids enter the truck and he drives off to take them on a tour through the city.

Carly: “Let’s get some tunes up in this place!”

Carly cranks on the radio and turns the volume up to its maximum setting. Chip and Spike cover their ears desperately while Ironhide moans in silence. Ironhide stops at a stoplight when a rusty and damaged car comes next to them in the left lane. Normally things like that are common on the road, but it’s the people in the car that are noteworthy. Inside are two people that the kids know all too well.

Carly: (annoyed) “Ugh, it’s Misha and Kicker.”

Misha: “Hey look babe, it’s those three losers

Kicker: (douchy) “Looks like Spike grew some balls haha!”

Carly: (infuriated) “Screw you!”

The two drive off as Carly is still in a huff.

Carly: “I hate them so much.”

Spike seems to be particularly angry for some reason. His eye is twitching rabidly as he says something way out of character.

Spike: (eerily) “Maybe they should get should get stabbed and take a bath in acid!”

Chip: (confused) “You ok man? That was way out of character.”

Carly: “Yeah that was kinda creepy.”

Ironhide: “It even scared me!”

Spike: (coming out of it) “Sorry guys, I don’t know what came over me.”

Chip: “It’s alright.”

Carly: “God those two get on my nerves.”

Chip: “Yeesh Spike what did you ever see in Misha?”

Carly: “What?”

Spike: (panicking) “Nothing nothing at all!”

Chip: “You never told her?”

Carly: “Told me what?”

Spike: “Not a word Chip!”

Carly: (demanding) “Tell me!”

Chip: “Sorry Carly, but bro code comes first.”

Carly: “Tell me or I’ll have Ironhide transform and launch you out.”

Ironhide: “An opportunity to have one less child sit in me? Count me in!”

Chip: -sigh- “Fine. You see before you came along he liked Misha. It seemed like a good idea at the time, but she was very mean and dismissive towards him. She was a horrible human being. It got even worse once she hooked up with Kicker, and now you’re here.”

Carly looks over at the nervous Spike with a very unique look on her face.

Carly: “Seriously?”

Spike; (surprised) “You aren’t mad?”

Carly: “No. I was going to say you have awful taste, but then what does that make me?”

Spike: “Ok then.”

Carly: You poor thing, I’m glad I came along and made everything better.”

Chip: “Yet I’m still single.”

Carly: “Shut up Chip, nobody likes a third wheel.”

Chip frowns as Carly remembers his accident back in the battle of San Francisco.

Carly: “Wow that was really insensitive of me.”

Chip: “No kidding, I thought bad Carly was gone.”

Carly: “She tends to come around whenever Misha and Kicker show up.”

Ironhide: “What about my problems?”

Spike: “You have problems?”

Ironhide: “A legendary badass warrior from Cybertron is reduced to nothing more than a party bus for children.”

Spike: “Look on the bright side, this is nothing compared to what we did with Sideswipe.”

Ironhide: “I see, but I must confess it isn’t the bus thing that has me worked up.”

Spike: “Then what is it Ironhide?”

Ironhide: “It’s the Decepticons, we haven’t had many attacks lately. I’m getting concerned.”

Carly: “You’re concerned about Starscream?”

Ironhide: “Starscream may be crafty, but it isn’t him I’m worried about. It’s Soundwave. Something tells me he has something terrible planned for us, I just know it.”

Chip: “You’ll beat him again.”

Ironhide: “Remember it took of of us to beat him and Megatron, and he’s just as smart.”

Spike: “As long as Optimus is around we will always be safe.”

Ironhide: “I sure hope so, now how about we listen to some country?”

Kids: “No!”

The next morning the kids come to school in different vehicles. First to arrive is Spike being driven by Ron.

Ron: “Well son, I hope you have good day.”

Spike: “Me too, but I wish Bumblebee was here.”

Ron: “You don’t even want to have your old man drive you, that hurts.”

Spike: (desperate) “No no no! I didn’t mean it like that. I meant he could have driven us.”

Ron: (teasing) “I know, I’m just messing with you.”

At this moment a limousine comes slinking into the parking lot. The door opens and out comes Carly with a very shiny red lipstick and wearing shades. In addition to her attire she has a some sort velvet scarf around her neck. Guys all around turn their heads to see the beauty before them.

Ron: “You girlfriend sure knows how to show off.”

Spike: “No kidding.”

Ron: “Better defend your territory, it’s beginning to be open season out there.”

Spike: “No worries, I saved her from a psychotic alien bike, she owes me.”

After Spike leaves the car after saying that sentence, he feels a jolt of pain hit him. The strange part is it disappears as quickly as it happens. Spike goes over to Carly, and expresses his concern.

Spike: “You look troubled. I know when you dress so over-the-top it means you’re upset about something.”

Carly: -sigh- “You know me too well.”

Spike: “Is it the Misha thing?”

Carly: “No it’s not that, it’s my dad. We had a fight over you.”

Spike: “Over me?”

Carly: “Even though he hasn’t met you he thinks you aren’t good enough for me.”

Spike: “When exactly am I going to meet him?”

Carly: “I don’t know if that’s a good idea, he’s quite eccentric”

Spike: “So are the Autobots.”

Carly: “I guess you’re right.”

An Acura NSX Roadster (Tony Stark’s car at the end of The Avengers) drives up and parks in one of the spaces. The door opens in a way that reveals it’s been modified at the owner’s request. Out wheels Chip, and everyone looks in amazement at his incredible ride.

Carly: “How are you able to afford that?”

Chip: -shrugging- “Oh you know, stock. So are we going inside or what?”

The three go inside the school and are immediately seeing Kicker and Misha doing their daily make-out session on peoples’ lockers. One freshman in particular is having a ton of difficulty getting his materials out because the pair keep shifting from locker to locker, squishing him in the process.

Chip: “Poor Raph, he never stood a chance.”

Spike: “What does she see in him?”

Carly: “She’s desperate for attention, nothing more.”

Spike: “How did you know that?”

Carly: “Because that’s how I was before you came along, I turned away a lot of good things in my life, and I’ve been given a second chance by being with you.”

The bell rings and they all go in to the class. It’s Algebra 2, and the teacher is handing out the test scores. Spike gets an 82%, Carly a 91%, Raph a 99, and Chip 100% Carly sticks her tongue out at Chip in jealousy as the teacher hands the tests to Misha and Kicker. Misha gets a 68% while Kicker gets a giant Q from a big red marker on the test.

Misha: “Yes I passed!”

Teacher: “What ever happened Misha? You were one of my top students.”

Misha: “Oh you know, thing happen.”

Kicker: “Why do I have a big Q on my test. I totally know quails have the letter Q in it.”

Teacher: (sarcastically) “Very good Mr. Jones, I’m glad you know at least something. If you must know you have been left back so many times I had to create a new grade special for you.”

Kicker: “So like what does the Q stand more?”

Teacher: “Quit wasting the school’s time.”

Kicker: “Pfft, what evs, I’ll be in the NFL anyway.”

Teacher: (rolling eyes) “I’m sure you will.”

Misha: “My baby is gonna be a star.”

Chip: (to Spike and Carly) “If I had a dollar every time some big shot said he was going to be in the NFL, I could buy out Google Maps.”

Spike and Chip do a gesture that implies both Kicker and Misha are crazy, which makes Carly giggle. Back at The Ark, Fowler is talking with Optimus while Perceptor and Wheeljack are tinkering in the lab.

Fowler: “So here is what I’ve been thinking, we’ve been focusing on our domestic issues too much, we need to start going out and secure our protection from foreign threats.”

Prime: “Agent Fowler, I don’t know if we should meddle in your planet’s affairs.”

Fowler: “My country’s first president George Washington told us to never get involved with foreign affairs.”

Prime: “He sounded like a very intelligent man.”

Fowler: “He was, but did we listen? No. You’re here now, so you might as well get to see more of your new home’s environments.”

Prime: “I suppose you’re right.”

Ace walks in and greets the scientists and comes over to Optimus and Fowler.

Ace: “Hey guys, have you seen Tyrone anywhere?”

Fowler: “Yeah, he’s on that couch. I’ve been trying to wake him for over an hour, but no luck.”

Tyrone is slumped over a couch and is snoring incredibly loud. He seems to be in a very peaceful state of mind though.

Ace: “Did you try having Optimus blow his horn?”

Prime: “Yes.”

Ace: “No worries, I know what to do.”

Ace walks over and gently puts his hand across the top of his head. Tyrone immediately wakes up and jumps off of the couch.

Tyrone: (annoyed) “I don’t wake your ass up when you’re asleep!”

Ace: “Sorry man, but it’ business before nap time.”

Tyrone: For me business IS nap time.”

Teletran-1 begins to ping as Perceptor looks at the data.

Perce: “Prime, we have Decepticons located near an abandoned factory in Japan!”

Prime: “Put the video up Perceptor.”

Perceptor puts up the footage, and it’s two Decepticons everyone knows all too well.

Prime: “Starscream and Terradive. We have a level red threat, call in the support team Perceptor.”

Ace goes through the groundbridge to get to his jet while Tyrone gears up in a jeep with some soldiers. Perceptor puts on a headset to contact a team of Autobots.

Perce: “Hello Bumblebee, Optimus requires you and your team’s assistance. We are most grateful for your efforts. (hangs up) They will be deployed shortly.”

Prime: “Excellent Perceptor, alright troops, let’s roll out.”

Optimus transforms as Wheeljack activates the groundbridge and he and some troops drive in to combat the Decepticon menace, and the portal closes as they all go through the stream.

 

Looking good. I'm already interested to see where this story goes. I kind of recorded my comments as I went so...

It will be quite interesting to see who those characters with Fallen turn out to be. I also really like how you incorporated the logo into the story. I'm already liking Perceptor. Ron's line to Spike about him driving was funny. The teacher thing with the "Q" was funny as well.