The cautionary tale of X-86

I got this idea for a fic featuring a vehicon from Prime, narrated by his POV, so I´m gonna try and aim for a little sniped and see how it goes.

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"So, this is how it ends..ugh. They always said the life of a Vehicon under Megatron´s orders were short. The others always warned me about it."

Pain goes through his circuits as X-86 feels his insides shutting down one by one and his spark growing weaker by the minute. not event he greatest or brightest could save him now. He was a goner and he knew it. But that was not what made him sad. It was whom he was making sad that torn him apart.

"Is he gonna make it?" A purple haired female asks, tears filling her eyes.

The other cybertronians lowered their heads. The largest of them all, a red and white ambulance who went by the name of "Optimus Prime" replied.

"I am sorry, but X-86 sustained too much damage." He pauses. ."..there is nothing I can do but ease his passing."

"Heh, who would imagine it? Me a vehicon, surrounded by Autobots and a human in the last seconds of my life? Primus has a sense of irony hasn´t he? But I don´t regret none of it..But I´m getting of track aren´t I? I bet most of you want to find out how this all started..Well, I have en ought time for a small tale..This is the cautionary tale of Vehicon X-86."

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Small little first chapter, to test the story around, but I might carry on with it.

I found it interesting, I would like to see more!

Cool idea; it is written well, glad to see vehicons getting some fan fic light, and starting at the end made for a real nice hook.

Is him calling Ratchet just a mistake; or do you mean more with that?

Originally Posted by Autovolt 127 Megatron Growls So he can hopefully lower Optimus's attack stage by one point. However Optimus has the special ability Hyper Cutter which negates Growl.

Hmm...intriguing.

Sorry I meant Ratchet who is monitoring him.