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Old 01-07-2013, 07:01 PM   #1
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The cautionary tale of X-86

I got this idea for a fic featuring a vehicon from Prime, narrated by his POV, so Iīm gonna try and aim for a little sniped and see how it goes.

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"So, this is how it ends..ugh. They always said the life of a Vehicon under Megatronīs orders were short. The others always warned me about it."

Pain goes through his circuits as X-86 feels his insides shutting down one by one and his spark growing weaker by the minute. not event he greatest or brightest could save him now. He was a goner and he knew it. But that was not what made him sad. It was whom he was making sad that torn him apart.

"Is he gonna make it?" A purple haired female asks, tears filling her eyes.

The other cybertronians lowered their heads. The largest of them all, a red and white ambulance who went by the name of "Optimus Prime" replied.

"I am sorry, but X-86 sustained too much damage." He pauses. ."..there is nothing I can do but ease his passing."

"Heh, who would imagine it? Me a vehicon, surrounded by Autobots and a human in the last seconds of my life? Primus has a sense of irony hasnīt he? But I donīt regret none of it..But Iīm getting of track arenīt I? I bet most of you want to find out how this all started..Well, I have en ought time for a small tale..This is the cautionary tale of Vehicon X-86."

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Small little first chapter, to test the story around, but I might carry on with it.
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"How could I not have seen it? Michael Bay is just like Maximus, giving us all the explosions, T&A, guns, and fast cars we wanted, but in a horrible way, and then spitting on us. And it's all in an attempt to make us look at ourselves and examine what we've become! He's a genius!"- SMOG
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Old 01-07-2013, 07:22 PM   #2
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I found it interesting, I would like to see more!
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Old 01-09-2013, 11:38 PM   #3
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Cool idea; it is written well, glad to see vehicons getting some fan fic light, and starting at the end made for a real nice hook.

Is him calling Ratchet just a mistake; or do you mean more with that?
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The trick to watching the G1 cartoon is to do so whilst drunk. It's not a cartoon that should be taken even remotely seriously, but it's a laugh if you just accept its constant silliness.
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Old 01-10-2013, 04:19 PM   #4
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Hmm...intriguing.
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Old 01-22-2013, 07:09 PM   #5
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Cool idea; it is written well, glad to see vehicons getting some fan fic light, and starting at the end made for a real nice hook.

Is him calling Ratchet just a mistake; or do you mean more with that?
Sorry I meant Ratchet who is monitoring him.
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"How could I not have seen it? Michael Bay is just like Maximus, giving us all the explosions, T&A, guns, and fast cars we wanted, but in a horrible way, and then spitting on us. And it's all in an attempt to make us look at ourselves and examine what we've become! He's a genius!"- SMOG
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