Revenge of the Fallen - My version

I know that some hated this movie, and others, including myself, loved it. I liked it, but I believe it could have been much better. Here, I'll try writing the events of the movie, but with some touches from myself, and a modified plot based on the ROTF Game.

With that said, let's begin!

-Narration by Optimus Prime-

An early human attacks a cheetah, and more humans follow him.


As the humans chase the cheetah, they look at the horizon, and clearly see giant mechanical beings building a machine. Thirteen others seemingly of the same race, who looked more royal, seemed to lead them.


The humans come closer to the mechanical beings. One of the royal ones notices them, and quickly proceeds to grab their leader. As he examines him, the mechanical king growls angrily.

'Prima.' He says, enraged. 'Why should we cease our attempt to save our race because of these pests? Look at them! They are too weak! The strong should live further, not them.'

Another mechanical being, similar to the first one, answers calmly but alarmed.

'Megatronus, you know we cannot murder a race to save our own. Although energon, our life-force, is in low amounts, that is no excuse to destroy the sun of an inhabited planet.' He said, his blue optics looking into Megatronus' red ones. 'Although they are lesser life-forms, they have great potential. Do not underestimate them, brother.'

Megatronus growled angrily again. 'As you say, brother.' He proceeded to drop the human, and walked away from his brothers.

'My brothers are betraying their race. They do not realize that we, Cybertronians, cannot let ourselves perish. We have to survive. Especially the Primes... like me.' Megatronus Prime thought to himself, as rage filled his thoughts. 'The sun harvesting machine that our workers have built needs the Matrix for activation... which I will soon acquire.' As he thought this, some small armor plates on his forehead transform... forming the first Decepticon insignia to ever be seen.

In an airplane, Major Lennox and some other soldiers are preparing their weapons.

'Welcome to Shanghai, gentlemen.' One of the soldiers said warmly as he loaded his rifle.

'Guys, listen up! We have two Decepticon contacts here. The only way to kill them is to target either their heads or their sparks within their chests! Those spark things are like hearts to them, pumping the energon in their bodies!' Said Major Lennox, informing his team. 'The cover for this is toxic spill, everyone's been evacuated. We're clear to proceed.'

The plane landed, and the soldiers got out of there, and so did a black truck.

'He's here, Ironhide... get ready.' Lennox said, patting Ironhide's hood. Ironhide quickly transformed, and looked at a large excavator, which was moving its shovel.

'It's Demolisher.' He said angrily as he prepared his cannons. 'This guy killed my brother.'

N.E.S.T. helicopters quickly surrounded the Decepticon.

'Decepticon, you're surrounded! Surrender now!' Said one of the helicopter pilots, with his weapons ready.

The Decepticon quickly transformed. His robot mode was very large, and had a giant wheel above his head and another instead of feet. He mercilessly crushed the helicopters with his shovel hands and destroyed countless cars as he moved with his giant wheel. As he was rolling on the highway, Ironhide transformed into his truck mode and pursued him as fast as he could. He couldn't let that murderer get away.

Meanwhile, an Audi R8 came out of hiding and transformed, revealing itself to be a Decepticon aswell. He quickly transformed his forearm into a sniper rifle and proceeded to shoot down some of the N.E.S.T. helicopters before transforming and speeding away.

'We've got a second Decepticon!' Said one of the soldiers, alarmed. 'Twins, Arcee! Target coming your way!'

An ice cream truck began following the Decepticon. An Autobot insignia could be seen on its hood.

'Yeah, I've got them!' Said the ice cream truck as it pursued the Decepticon.

'He better get ready for some serious damage!' Said another voice, full of enthusiasm, coming from the same vehicle.

Three motorcycles also chased the Decepticon down. They were faster than the truck, and got near him quickly. They transformed into their robot modes, which appeared to be female, and shot the Decepticon with their arm-mounted cannons. In response, the Decepticon transformed aswell and began shooting the small Autobots with his rifle, before transforming his other forearm into a chainsaw and stabbing one of them. He shot them again, transformed, and sped toward the highway where Demolisher was located.

'I've got him!' Said the Autobot whose alt mode was an ice cream truck, chasing the Decepticon. Suddenly, the truck transformed into two separate Autobots that started shooting the Decepticon. Both of them had one arm that was bigger, and another that was smaller. On the bigger arms, they had a mounted cannon which they used against the taller Decepticon, who transformed to shoot both of them before speeding his way out again.

'Is that guy fast...' Said one of the ice cream Autobots, with sadness in his voice.

'More like, is that guy a coward!' Said the other Autobot, before punching the other one with his bigger fist.

'He's getting away!' Said one of the soldiers said. 'Bring in Sideswipe!'

A silver sport car began following the Decepticon fastly. The car transformed, jumped, and shot the Decepticon in mid-air using a missle launcher before extending long, sharp swords from his forearms, and cutting the Decepticon in half using them.

'Sideswipe 1, Decepticons 0!' Said the Autobot, retracting his swords and speeding away, using the wheel-feet.

Meanwhile, the soldiers were overwhelmed by the titanic Decepticon's strength. Demolisher was definitely too strong to be taken down with human weaponry, due to the thickness of his armor. They called for a nearby airplane, asking them to deliver the truck.

Above the battle, a truck is launched from a jet. The truck transforms in mid-air, revealing himself to be none other than the Autobot leader himself, Optimus Prime. He activated his parachutes, which he quickly cut with his swords when he neared ground.

'Autobots, I'm in pursuit!' He said, as he transformed back to his vehicle mode, pursuing Demolisher along with Ironhide. The two transformed, Ironhide attacking his lower wheel, while Optimus shot his head repeatedly.

'Pull over!' Demanded Optimus, shooting the Decepticon's head. Soon, Ironhide destroys the Decepticon's lower wheel, and he falls off the highway. He is no longer a threat.

Optimus and Ironhide walk towards him, Optimus holding his ion blaster.

'Decepticon punk.' Said Ironhide, glaring at the damaged enemy.

'Do you wish to surrender?' Said Optimus, pointing his blaster at the Decepticon's head.

'Hahah... Optimus... I enjoyed killing Ultra Magnus and his squad... especially Brawn... wasn't he your brother, Ironhide?' Demolisher taunted, laughing darkly although he was defeated.

Ironhide growled and prepared to leap towards the Decepticon, but Optimus held them back.

'I'll take that as a 'no'. Any last words?' Said Optimus, charging his blaster.

'This is... not your planet to rule. The Fallen shall rise again... and you all will fall... suffering!' Said the Decepticon, still laughing.

'Not today.' Said Optimus, determined, and then shot Demolisher through the head. Optimus shook his head reluctantly, and he seemed saddened.

'What is it, Prime? You just avenged our comrades.' Said Ironhide, congratulating his leader.

'A part of me still hopes to change the Decepticons' mind, not extinguish their sparks, old friend. Enough lives have been lost in this war.' He said, and sadness could be felt in his voice. 'We are not here for vengeance. We are here to protect the humans. Let's head back to base.' Said Optimus, as he, Ironhide and the soldiers prepared to leave Shanghai.

so far. Your Optimus actually has a soul ! I like !

Glad you liked that! I actually took that quote from TF: Prime, like I did with the Fallen's name, Megatronus.

I'll make the Fallen and Devastator more awesome than how they were in the movie, just to let you know.

I'm liking this so far already sounds better then the real one

Good taste, you. I'm liking your future writings already !

Chapter 2

Location: Sam's house

Sam was packing his luggage, preparing to go to college. He was however interrupted by his parents.

'Look what I found...' Said Sam's mother, as he showed him a little yellow toy car. 'You used to love this one.'

'Mom, I'm busy here.' He said as he packed his stuff.

'I can't believe he's going to college. First Witwicky to do so.' Said his father proudly. 'Did you tell Mikaela you're leaving today?'

'I'll phone her later.' Said Sam, still packing. When he finished, he went upstairs to his room to get his clothes. As he was looking through them, he came upon a ripped apart jacket. It was the jacket he wore when he used the Allspark against Megatron two years ago.

'I'm definitely taking this with me.' He thought to himself as he reached for it. When he touched it however, a small, metallic shard fell. Surprised, Sam lifts it from the ground and looks at it. As he was looking at it, everything became blank and he started seeing symbols and hearing things.

'No! Megatronus, no! No! Arghhhahh!' A Cybertronian voice said, shocked and panicked, just before dying.

Sam saw an alien-looking item. It was sharp at its sides, and had a blue core in its center, which was pulsing.

'It is mine!' A dark, evil voice said, and Sam could see the face of the one who said this. A mechanical being with a dark expression, and a Decepticon symbol on his forehead.

Suddenly, Sam was back into his room, with the shard still in his hand. Sam was scared by the horrors he heard and saw. He figured out that what he had picked up was a shard of the Allspark Cube, which he thought was destroyed.

The shard started to burn Sam's fingers. He dropped it, and it fell through the floor, reaching the kitchen. When the shard touched the ground, it created a shockwave that went all over the kitchen. Suddenly, all the kitchen appliances that were in the room... transformed.

One of them took the shard and looked at it, happily.

'Mine! I, Ejector am strongest!' He declared, as he led the small transformers toward Sam's room. When they reached it, Ejector knocked.

Sam opened the door, thinking it was his parents, but saw no one. He however looked down to see the now transformed kitchen appliances with their weapons pointed at him, laughing darkly with their high-pitched voices.

'Surprise!' One of them said, and they began shooting as Sam quickly ran away, screaming in panic. He reached the window and was on the roof of his house.

'Bumblebee! Bumblebee!' He screamed, frightened.

Hearing his friend's cry for help, the Autobot sped his way from the garage and transformed, charging his plasma cannon. He proceeded to blast the small transformers, and quickly terminated them. However, in the process, Sam's house was destroyed. His mother ran out of it, with his father following.

'Calm down, calm down...' Said Sam's father, attempting to calm his wife down while also remaining calm himself.

'I can't live with a psychopathic trigger-happy alien in my garage!' Screamed Sam's mother angrily. 'You're taking it with you to college, mister!' She shouted, pointing at Sam.

Sam, in response glared at both of them, then looked down.

'He just saved your lives, and that's how you thank him.'

Hearing this coming from their son, both were stunned. Bumblebee motioned with his hand that it didn't bother him, but Sam was saddened anyway. Bumblebee transformed and rolled back into the garage, with Sam following.

When Sam entered the garage, he took his phone, and called Mikaela. She quickly answered.

'Hi Sam!' He said.

'Listen. Today I'm going to college.'

'That's cool.' She replied.

'Wait, that's not all. Remember the Cube? The Allspark?' He asked.

'Yes, of course.' Mikaela replied.

'I just found a shard of it. I'm seeing symbols, I'm seeing transformers killing eachother, it's crazy! I need you to take this shard and put it safely.'

'I'm coming in a minute.' She said, and then ended the conversation.

Bumblebee transformed and looked at Sam, seeming surprised.

'Bee, this is big. I saw this. No joke.' Said Sam completely serious.

'I'll follow you wherever you go, captain.' Said Bumblebee through the radio, reassuring Sam of his friendship.

'I can't take you to college with me.' He said, sadly. In response, Bee looked away and started crying, motioning with his hand for Sam to leave him alone.

'Freshmen aren't allowed to have cars. Sorry. But...'

Hearing Sam, Bumblebee looked at him again, with hope in his wide-open, blue optics.

'...You can stick around a bit. Just... you won't be my car for a while.' Said Sam, but Bumblebee was still sad.

'It will never be the same, sailor.' Bumblebee moaned through his radio.

'Listen, Bee, you'll always be my first car.' Said Sam looking into Bee's optics. As he was looking at Bee, Mikaela entered the garage.

'Hi.' She greeted both of them. 'Bee, nice to see Ratchet's fixed your legs.'

'Thank you, you're wonderful!' Bumblebee replied using the radio.

'Does he still have that voice problem?' Mikaela asked, wondering how Bee is doing.

'No. He just likes using that radio for some reason.' Replied Sam. 'Do you have a safe place to store the shard?'

'Yes, I have a safe, you know you can trust me.' Said Mikaela, as Sam took a little box out of his pocket where the shard was stored.

'Don't let any Decepticon see you.' Said Sam, concerned, giving her the shard.

'Don't worry, I'll be fine.' Replied Mikaela, trying to calm him down as she put the shard in a little tube.

They said good bye to eachother, and Sam went in his father's car, heading for college, with Bumblebee following from a distance in vehicle mode, while Mikaela went home. However, she felt as if she was being watched.

Location: Earth's orbit

Meanwhile, a mysterious alien jet approaches Earth's orbit, and stops near a sattelite. The jet's panels shifted and moved, transforming into what seemed like a Cybertronian sattelite. However, this sattelite had a head, with red optics and a visor covering them, and having a Decepticon insignia just above his visor. He extended some circuitry that blended with the sattelite's and intercepted Sam's conversation on the phone.

'Decepticons, a shard of the Allspark has remained. We have located it.' His dark voice transmitted, as the massive Decepticon launched a very small comet towards Earth.

Extremely Promising
Keep up the good work

Thanks for the positive comments! By the way, in the last chapter, the toy Sam's mother showed him was a G1 Bumblebee in car mode.

G1 refrences FTW

I realized I forgot the Sideways fight. I edited the first chapter, you can read it just before Optimus enters.