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Old 11-22-2010, 01:33 AM   #1
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The Transformers/Marvel Continuty

Hey Guys. Im not sure if Whatever or not you guys haev seen my Stop Motions on youtube. But i Decided to make this Thread for Put the Scripts for mah Series. Because none of my actors Have recorded liens for some of my planned series (despite i have sent them the lines). and i want to share my Plots to you guys.

so i thought to make this thread for share my scripts. has the title says it is named the The Transformers/Marvel Continuty, why u may ask? is well i have plans for make marvel stop motions that takes place within my tfs continuty but im not sure if im allowed to add marvel scripts but if i can tell me.

first of all Most of my stroys are original storys, But Some are my version of an already existing Story (like im planning to do an rotf adaptation), just in case u ask

hope u guys enjoy my storys and tell me if im allowed to add my marvel plots since they are part of my tf continuty

and no this is not for promote my vids, i just want to share my storys with u guys

Notes: Some parts will be written by other users from this site, as they will help me in writting my stop motion series, and i will post their works here, but i will give credit to them when i post parts they wrote
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Old 12-01-2010, 08:21 PM   #2
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The story's good, but what I really like is how it's written, like a play script. Well done so far.
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Old 12-23-2010, 10:37 PM   #3
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Nice job! The parts I liked the most were probably Sam's frustration in trying to convince his parents that he really did have two giant robots with him, and Simmons being swung around.
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Old 12-23-2010, 10:51 PM   #4
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Nice job! The parts I liked the most were probably Sam's frustration in trying to convince his parents that he really did have two giant robots with him, and Simmons being swung around.
thanks and what ya mean with swung?
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Old 03-18-2011, 09:24 PM   #5
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There's a lot here that I do like, such as Starscream's banter with some of the other bots. One thing I'd fix though, is Soundwave. He seems a bit to emotionally charged to me.
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Old 03-18-2011, 09:29 PM   #6
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One thing I'd fix though, is Soundwave. He seems a bit to emotionally charged to me.
What???????
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Old 01-11-2012, 09:10 PM   #7
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i am jsut going to inform that i deleted EVERY Post, here why?, well its cause most of my scripts are early versions of the scripts i will use, but scripts and lines can change during the making of the actual stop motions because i get new ideas for future series and it will not fit with a scene from teh script, thus i erase it, but i am Lazy to edit EVERY Single post i made, so instead of changing the scripts i will instead post every SCRIPT in timeline order cause in that way i know what i will do for sure now that i have a plot i will not change on my head and thus no contradicitons and plto holes okay (thats why the fallen storyline stayed cause it takes place way before any other stories, so for nwow and on i will post eveyr story in timeline order)
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Old 01-12-2012, 09:31 AM   #8
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Old 01-30-2012, 05:20 PM   #9
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I changed to my mind, i decided to simply post the stories in the order they were written, also if they fanfic is based on a stop motion already released it wil lbe posted right away, but if they are from a stop motion not released, they will be posted alongside they stop motion and comic counterparts

Phase 1: Transformers Prologue

(Poster was made by legolas grof)
Date: December 20, 2009
Location: Cybertron


Decepticon Incinerator transformers and lands on Cybertron. he raises from his feet. and prepares to send a message

Incinerator:
Decepticons of the Planet Cybertron, Optimus Prime left Cybertron for find the Allspark, Which may be on planet earth, but it is yet unknown

Incinerator stops messaging and looks around and sees Thundercracker walking by.

Incinerator:
Ah, Thundercracker. Starscream clone
Thundercracker have been called Starscream clone by fellow Decepticons, due to his similarities to the air commander

Thundercracker:
Yes, Incinerator

Incinerator:
Optimus Prime left cybertron, let me inform Lord Megatron, said Incinerator as he prepared to leave

Thundercracker:
Sorry to inform but Megatron was sent in stasis lock by Bumblebee, years ago!

this surprises Incinerator

Incinerator:
What?, then who leads us now?

Thundercracker nerviously replies

Thundercracker:
Starscream...he leads us now.

Incinerator is angered, but thundercracker tries to calm him down

Thundercracker:
For calm you down, why not we hunt some Autobots?

Incinerator angrily looks down on the left, but then looks at thundercracker

Incinerator:
Fine!
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Old 01-30-2012, 05:37 PM   #10
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Nearby a Cybertronian Cave, 3 Autobots are passing by, they then Transform

Knock Out:
What are we going to do?

Sideswipe looks at him and replies

Sideswipe:
There have been recent rumors and sightings of a Cybertronian relic with a Decepticon symbol being in this cave, so we are going to see if its true

Prowl puts his hand on KnockOut shoulder

Prowl:
We need you to guard here, in case a Decepticon is after it as well

Knock Out looks at prowl

Knock Out:
Okay

Sideswipe and Prowl then prepare to enter the save, but Sideswipe stops and looks at Knock Out

Sideswipe:
Dont go to sleep mode!

Knock Out:
I wont, Sideswipe, i am not lazy!

Sideswipe and Prowl enter the save. some hours later, Knock Out went to Sleep mode, but then a small Earthquake wakes him up, he gets up and looks behind him, its Incinerator and Thundercracker

Knock Out:
Holy scrap, Decepti

but before Knock Out finishes talking, Incinerator punches him with a brutal force

Knock Out:
What you want? decepticons

Incinerator looks at the autobot

Incinerator:
We wanted to kill you, but we were contacted by the Constructicons to capture some autobots for some sort of experiment

Incinerator punches him again, and sends him to stasis for a while, thundercracker looks at Incinerator

Thundercracker:
You killed him?

Incinerator annoyed looks at thundercracker

Incinerator:
No, he's in stasis.

Incinerator contacts the constructicons

Incinerator:
The Green autobot known as Knock Out have been captured. Should we send him to you right away? or send him with Galvatron until you guys are ready to make the experiments?

Mixmaster:
Send him to Galvatron, we want Sideswipe on our base first before the other autobots

Incinerator:
Fine!
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