Transformers: DBA Forever

Discussion in 'Transformers Fan Fiction' started by deltaprime, May 31, 2010.

  1. Lock Cade

    Lock Cade Tarn Fangirl

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    "Hey look a quarter!" "FOCUS!"
     
  2. cybertron2006

    cybertron2006 Fly By Clockwork Pictures

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    "Woah, you have Iron Man armor?"
    "No."
    "But, I can see them..."
    "No, you can't."

    Lol!
     
  3. John_Force

    John_Force 16xNHRA Funny Car Champ

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    Too good, YO.
    Hopefully should be able to start my section in about a week.
     
  4. deltaprime

    deltaprime The Christian Transfan

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    :lol  Very nicely done YO14. You don't dissapoint. :thumb 
     
  5. Crazymadman

    Crazymadman Dewbot leader

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    Very good job at updating, YO14. :lol 
     
  6. ROTF Sideswipe

    ROTF Sideswipe Well-Known Member

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    That was Awesome!
     
  7. jetfire4321

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    cool by the way
     
  8. deltaprime

    deltaprime The Christian Transfan

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    Chapter 5​

    "Idiots! Both of you are idiots!"

    Victor was storming around his lab, furious at Sunstorm and Dirgegun for escaping. Dirgegun was beginning to wish he had stayed offline. It definately sounded better to him than being bossed around by a tiny human. He didn't want to get on Victor's bad side any more than he already was though. If he planted a detonator inside Sunstorm, couldn't he have done the same to him?

    "Listen human, you may have planted a bomb in my chest, but it won't do you much good if--"

    "Are you threatening me Sunstorm? Because you know what'll happen if you threaten me. Now then, I think it's time we got down to business. I need your help taking down those DBA operatives."

    "Why didn't you just let us finish the job earlier?" Sunstorm argued.

    "Look, I've been watching these guys for a long time. You can't underestimate them-they're very unpredictable. Sure, you may have temporarily taken Delta down, but those guys, those rotten little--"

    Sunstorm started to seizure a bit, causing Victor to stop mid sentence. He was a very unstable Decepticon, in every sense of the word. Because Victor wasn't able to completely restore Sunstorm from his battle with Delta* there were several glitches in Sunstorm's programing. One of these glitches was an every changing personality. At random he would switch from buttkissing synchophant to egotistical maniac to cocky tough guy over and over again.

    "See, this is why you shouldn't have escaped, you fool. Now I can't even come close enough to you to fix you up!"

    "Dude, chill. I'll be perfectly fine. Just let me loose on those DBA dudes already! I'm getting bored here!"

    You could probably guess what personality Sunstorm was in now.


    Meanwhile, at the DBA headquarters:

    "ROTF Sideswipe, I think your upgrade is almost complete."

    Young Optimus14 directed him to a collection of vehicles. ROTF Sideswipe was excited to be in a brand new body. He felt so big, so fast, so powerful!

    "Pick which one you want to be your vehicle mode. Well go on. I don't have all day! I still have to make a new drill for Prime13!"

    ROTF Sideswipe looked over all the cars, but only one of them truly stuck out to him. It was the Corvette Stingray. It was sleek, fast, and very very shiny. He scanned the vehicle with great excitement, and quickly he transformed for the first time.

    "It's alive! ALIVE!" YO14 cackled maniacally.

    Sage came down to YO14's work room with a message in his hand.

    "Guys, remember that guy we met before who decided to take away those two Decepticons? Well, he sent us a message. Take a look"


    *Acidstorm, Dirgegun, and Sunstorm all had a previous encouter with Delta in which they were all made to go offline. This was before Delta and I ever joined the DBA.
     
  9. Young Optimus14

    Young Optimus14 MTMTE Theorist

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    I now give myself a new title. The DBA's Weapon Expet/ Mad Scientist.
     
  10. deltaprime

    deltaprime The Christian Transfan

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    So you caught what I was trying to do then, eh?
     
  11. Lock Cade

    Lock Cade Tarn Fangirl

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    I wonder what the message they receive says...
     
  12. jetfire4321

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    aww.. i was supposed to be mad scientist
     
  13. ROTF Sideswipe

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    Another great chapter.

    And if you ever do an audio book out of this, I can do Sideswipe. I am known for being able to do Sideswipe.
     
  14. Crazymadman

    Crazymadman Dewbot leader

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    Really? You would voice your own character? Weird. :p 
     
  15. deltaprime

    deltaprime The Christian Transfan

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    I dunno dude. I can do a pretty good Tyler if I do say so myself. :p  But in all seriousness, an audiobook sounds cool, but I'm not sure it'll happen. Oh, and don't worry Jetfire4321, you'll be a mad scientist type dude too. :thumb 
     
  16. Crazymadman

    Crazymadman Dewbot leader

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    That gives me an idea... I'm gonna make a DBA stop-motion video for Youtube! But not for a long time, that is. Like around Winter or Fall.
     
  17. ROTF Sideswipe

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    Well.

    It's not that I could voice my own character so much as I am really good at super deep voices.
     
  18. Crazymadman

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    Chapter 6

    "What does that letter say, Sage?" Asked YO14.

    Sage opens the letter. He then begins to read it.

    "Wait Sage, let me go get the rest of the members."

    YO14 then comes back with the rest of the members.

    "Sage, read on."

    "Alright, let me see... Dear Dewbot/Bacontronian Alliance members, some of you may know me, some of you may not, either way I encourage you to surrender. If you do not surrender, I will tear your Alliance apart and destroy you. It may seem to you that I'm just an average enemy, but trust me, I am your strongest enemy yet. So Crazymadman, Sage o' G-fruit, and Autobot-Girl, I'd choose your path wisely. Yours truly, Victor Darth."

    "Hmm, what should we do about this, Sage?" Asked CMM.

    "We shou-oh wait, there's one more thing in the letter. P.S. I'm serious about this."

    "Wow, I guess he's serious about this." Joked Prime13.

    "Well I know one thing for sure: THE. DBA. NEVER. SURRENDERS."

    "You're right Sage!!!!! We shall fight this Victor Darth guy until he surrenders to us!!!!!!!!!!" Said Auto, who was very hyper on Mountain Dew at the moment.

    "Alright people, but before we start a war with Victor Darth, we're gonna need lots of weapons and upgrades." CMM then looks at YO14.

    "YES! This is gonna be awesome!"

    Clearly, YO14 is excited. :p 
     
  19. deltaprime

    deltaprime The Christian Transfan

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    Not bad, not bad. So now I have to write about the epic "battle preparation" montage then, eh?
     
  20. Crazymadman

    Crazymadman Dewbot leader

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    With epic 80's music, that is. :p