Transformers: DBA Forever

Discussion in 'Transformers Fan Fiction' started by deltaprime, May 31, 2010.

  1. Crazymadman

    Crazymadman Dewbot leader

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    Good update.

    Delta, can you send me the pictures you want me to put in my sig?
     
  2. Robticon

    Robticon Out of the Game

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    Somehow I think that is exactly how I'd act in a situation like that. :lolol 

    Awesome.

    BTW, don't forget to include the mud-block.

    (AKA, an Umbrella.)
     
  3. deltaprime

    deltaprime The Christian Transfan

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    All right, glad you guys all seemed to like that one. CMM, I will get onto finding/sending you some pics ASAP as possible.

    Also, expect another update later today. As you could probably tell, I gave up on the whole "only Wednesdays and Fridays" bit. I'm going back to the old system!
     
  4. jetfire4321

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    woohoo
     
  5. deltaprime

    deltaprime The Christian Transfan

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    Chapter 5​

    Sage was growing impatient. For whatever reason, YO14 hadn't joined them yet. Auto was trying to calm him down, but he pointed out to her that Overlord had just nuked an entire city. Jetfire4321 offered to go see what was taking so long, being YO14's assisstant and all. Sage thought it was a good idea, and rushed him along. ​

    Jetfire4321 stood outside the door to his and YO14's lab, cautious to go in. He knew that his mentor didn't like to be disturbed when working on his projects, no matter what else was going on in the world. He knew how much this new battle armor meant to his friend, and for all he knew, YO14 was just putting on some finishing touches. He tried knocking on the lab door, but all he heard was....the sound of monkeys?​

    "Hey man, we gotta go, like now."​

    No response.​

    "Dude, unlock the door and get out here! That Overlord guy isn't just gonna wait for us!"​

    He put his ear up to the door, to hear a little bit of what was going on at the other side. Of course, he couldn't hear everything, just little snippets.​

    .....Roger......friends.....miss....not mud.....​

    What was going on in there?!​

    "YO14, if you don't come out, I'm getting Cyberblast to bust down this door!"​

    The door opened slowly, and, to Robticon's surpise YO14 emerged from the room with his suit of armor, which appeared to have come to life. Even more strangely, a herd of spider monkeys followed out behind them!​

    "Oh, hi J4. This is Robticon and his monkey swarm. Have the two of you met?"
     
  6. jetfire4321

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    yup
     
  7. cybertron2006

    cybertron2006 Fly By Clockwork Pictures

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    N-nevermind. I'm not ready to update.
     
  8. Young Optimus14

    Young Optimus14 MTMTE Theorist

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    Thats exactly what i would say
     
  9. deltaprime

    deltaprime The Christian Transfan

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    Violent update time.

    Chapter 6

    Overlord was on an absolute rampage. Tanks seemed to be lined up just to be smashed by the menace. Jets and helicopters were set ablaze, military personel started to run in fear, and the casualties mounted at an insane rate.

    "YOU OWE ME! I AM RIGHTFUL LEADER OF THE DECEPTICONS! RISE AND FIGHT ME!"

    He smashed building after building, showing no mercy what so ever. Then a giant nuke emerged from a hidden cavity in his back. He aimed it at the city and was set to fire when he saw something that distracted him. A group of strange vehicles, monkeys, mechs, and more were rushing right for him!

    "DBA, attack!" shouted Crazymadman, brandishing a not-lightsaber.

    Robticon operated the giant suit of armor, while YO14 was content to be using his usual blender gun and burrito-zooka. ROTF Sideswipe, flanked by Cyberblast and Rogue, made the initial strike on Overlord, bombarding him with a series of lasers and missiles. Still, Overlord stood.

    "IS THIS WHAT MEGATRON BRINGS TO FIGHT ME?! I'M INSULTED!"

    I was rather frustrated with him at this point, because he was causing all this chaos over someone who had died years ago. Frantically, I tried to get his attention. I even used YO14's megaphone gun, but the bot just didn't hear me.

    "Need a lift?" asked Robticon. "This thing has a jetpack you know!"

    "Sure, bring me up to his eye level."

    "Aren't you bringing a gun?"

    "No, I'm gonna try to reason with him."

    Robticon doubted that reasoning would work, but he flew me up to Overlord's head anyways. Finally we got his attention.

    "Dude, how long have you been offline?"

    "WHAT DO YOU MEAN, SMALL FOOL?"

    "I mean, Megatron's been dead for years and years. Seriously, did you sleep through the whole Unicron conflict?"

    "WHO IS UNICRON? Oh forget it. So you're telling me that Megatron is....dead?!"

    "Uh...yeah."

    "THIS IS UNACCEPTABLE! IF I CANNOT SLAUGHTER MEGATRON, I'LL SLAUGHTER YOU INSTEAD!"

    With a huge swipe of his hand, Overlord knocked Robticon and me out of the air, sending us flying. At least the suit of armor Robticon was wearing had a force field. I had nothing to break my fall. I crashed into the side of a building, and I landed in a pair of large, metallic arms.

    "Gnnnn....who....what just.....ouch."

    "Woah, take it easy, small human. What's going on over there?"

    I was in a bit of a daze, and I had no idea who was holding me. I assumed it was Cyberblast or Rogue, but his voice.....I just couldn't place it.

    "Human? What's going on?"

    "Forget about the human, Delta. We have to find Eleorca!"

    "Del.......ta?"
     
  10. Lock Cade

    Lock Cade Tarn Fangirl

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    :popcorn 
     
  11. jetfire4321

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    :popcorn 
     
  12. Young Optimus14

    Young Optimus14 MTMTE Theorist

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    This is getting good
     
  13. deltaprime

    deltaprime The Christian Transfan

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    Side note, some of this story my veer a little bit off course to make it coincide better with a multiversal fanfic I'm also currently working on. Eleorca (along with Drancron and Ratatus) are my poorly Romanized names for the three Blendtrons who serve, well, you know. :thumb 
     
  14. Young Optimus14

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    Yay! We get Robert
     
  15. jetfire4321

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    the epps guy?
     
  16. Sunstorm202

    Sunstorm202 TF2er

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    where am i?
     
  17. deltaprime

    deltaprime The Christian Transfan

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    You haven't been introduced into the story yet. Actually, there are a few people who every now and then I regrettably forget to include. I'm trying to get all of you guys in here, but I don't want character overload! :p 
     
  18. Sunstorm202

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    thanks fanfics awesome
     
  19. cybertron2006

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    Okay, due to writer's block, I will be unable to update with Cybertron2006's parts for quite some time.

    Thank you,
    That guy who introduced cybertron2006, Cyberblast, and Rogue Prime.
     
  20. deltaprime

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    Chapter 7
    Overlord was relentless in his path of destruction. The Cheesicons tried to hold him back long enough for YO14 to repair Robticon's power suit, but it was no use. Overlord transformed into his two separate alternate modes-a jet and a tank, and started attacking the city on multiple fronts. Things were getting out of hand, and Crazymadman knew it.

    "Guys, this is bad, like real bad," he said miserably.

    "No duh," replied Prime13. "Hey, who the heck is that?"

    "What?"

    The DBA turned to see a massive beast resembling an elephant and an orca whale. It grabbed the jet portion of Overlord, which promptly broke from and combined with its tank counterpart.

    "IS THIS WHAT YOU BRING TO ME AS A CHALLENGE, DBA?!" shouted Overlord.

    "I know not of this DBA. You, however, might be an appropriate sacrifice to the Great One."

    "WHO ARE YOU?"

    "I am Eleorca, servant of Unicron and destroyer of worlds. Do not make this more difficult than it has to be."

    Now, Swiftcat had matured a lot, getting used to seeing crazy sights. What she beheld though, was enough to shake her foundation to the core. Here were two massive Decepticon warriors, one who already showed formidable power, and the other looking grotesque and hideous. Both could kill the DBA without much effort at all.

    "Eleorca, stand down!"

    Swifcat turned to see me, standing along side three large mechs. One of them resembled Delta, another looked like a hybrid lionfish and bee, and the other seemed like a winged lizard.

    "Why do you still serve him?" hissed the lizard mech.

    "Unicron's will is supreme, Drancron. You chose to betray him, and for that you will pay."

    Overlord didn't get what was going on, but he was growing annoyed. He took a step towards Eleorca, but he monster saw him coming and grabbed him by the throat.

    "Listen you," he threatened. "You are in over your head. I thought you'd be a decent sacrifice, but I see that you are a fool, and Unicron will not accept a fool. Goodbye."

    Eleorca waved his other hand, and Overlord shattered into pieces.

    "This has gone on far enough. You're coming with me, Blentron scum!" shouted the strange Delta look alike..

    "I think not."

    The beast vanished into thin air. Delta and his mysterious friends also disappeared shortly after, taking me with them!

    "Well, what now?" asked Autobot Girl.

    "Well, Overlord's gone. That's a...good thing...right?" said a puzzled. ROTF Sideswipe

    "That guy," mused Sage. "That guy said he served Unicron. Didn't he, you know, die a while back?"

    "I don't know anymore man," said Robticon with a smile. "But man is it good to be home!"​