Beast wars future

Beast War Future: BWF
First off for those of you who do not know about Beast Wars Future let me give you some context, the idea was that “what if the Axalon and Darksyde had arrived on earth 200million years in the future.” The animals that the Maximals and Predicons eventually took the form of came from the special The Future is Wild which aired on The Discovery Channel. Some of the main points of the original show will still be prominent in the writing, such as the golden discs and the Vox , but other things that just wouldn’t make any sense chronologically have been edited out.
Heres a list of the characters names and their TV show equivalents for those of you at home.
(Predicons)
Megatoran – Megatron (called Megatron until he gets his beast mode )
Terrasuar – Terrasoar
Spindulas – Tarantuals
Retrax – Retrax
Injector – Injector
Dinobot – Dynobot
Scorpanok – Scrofanok
(Maximals)
Optimus Prime - CryoPrime
Poggletrap - RatTrap
Jubator - Cheetor
Rattleox - Rhinox

Chapter One: The Beast Wars Begin
On the Darksyde

Spindulas: The co-ordinates have been entered into the transwarparp drive Megatron.

Megatoran: With this disc, I will finally be able to destroy those insufferable Maximals. Then I can fulfill my name sake and rightful place as the ruler of the Predicons and all of Cybertron!

::The Darksyde is hit::

Megatoran: WHa?! NO, how did they find us. Spindulas engage the transwarp drive.NOW!

:: Two more hits (Transwarp Drive damaged) ::

Megatoran: Fire Back!

__On the Axalon__

Poggletrap: This isn’t good, this is an exploration ship not a battle cruiser, we can’t take many more hits like that.

Jubator: Shields at 10% Optimus!

:: Another Hit::

Both the Axalon and Darksyde travel through the Transwarp portal.

Rattleox: Brace yourselves we’re going down!

Primal: Get the stasis pods into safe orbit.

::Both ships crash land on the planet::

Primal: Is everyone alright?

Poggletrap: Yeah, Im okay, but I can’t say the same for Jubator’s landing ability.

Rattleox: Were just lucky to be alive.

Sentinel: Warning massive amounts of energon detected. Suitable native life forms needed to prevent stasis lock. Beginning scan.

:: Back on the Darksyde::

Megatoran: Computer, is this the right planet?

Computer: Although the readings indicate this is earth, the transwarp drive sustained critical damage. It is unknown if the year is 1981. Although raw energon levels are dangerously high stasis lock immanent. Performing scan for suitable alt modes. …..Scan Complete.

Megatoran: Although we may not be in the right time theres is enough raw energon to fuel a Predicon army that cannot be stopped!

__Carakiller is walking out of the Darksyde__

Dynobot: You incompetent fool! We are the reinforcements where is the army!? We stole those discs for nothing!

Scorpfanok: No one talks to Lord Megatroran like that!

Megatoran: Scrofanok please. Not for nothing my brash Dynobot. These discs hold the location for rich energon deposits throughout this planet.

Dynobot: Do not try to mitigate the mistakes you’ve made! If it weren’t for you lack of leadership and decisive action we would not have been in this situation. I challenge you Megatoran, to a battle. The winner shall lead the Predicons, the loser….shall be destroyed….DYNOBOT TERRORIZE!

:: Megatoran turns his back to Dynobot and begins walking away::

Megatoran:Oh Dynobot, you are quit brave but more goes into being leader than just courage. You must be charismatic, strategic, and most importantly smarter than those you command.

:: Megatoran steps aside and Retrax is standing there and attacks Dynobot. Dynobot clearly holds the upper hand in the fight. Noticing this Megatoran signals to Terrorsoar who’s flying above the battle, he transforms lands and delivers a knockout blow to the back of Dynobot::

Terrorsoar: Shall I eliminate his spark?

Megatoran: Now wheres the fun in that?

_Axalon_

Poggletrap: Chasin Preds through the galaxy, that’s not what I signed up for.

Primal: We were the only ship that could track Megatoran and his crew through the transwarp portal. We had no other choice.

Poggletrap: Yeah, yeah but what I dont get is why it has to be my neck being stuck out there. And if Megs was looking to reinforce the Decepticons he missed his mark by about a couple million years.

Rattleox: 200 million years If sentinels correct.

Poggletrap: So why don’t we fix up the ol’ ship and head outta here?

Primal: It’s not that simple, Earth use to have huge amounts of energon on it, but after the Great War the energon was depleted.It could have recharged enough that if Megatron was able to harvest it he could power his own Predicon army. We cant let him do that!

Jubator: Don’t sweat it Prime. That’s not ganna happen , not with us here.

Primal: For Cybertron’s sake, Jubator, I hope youre right.

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Darksyde

Megatoran: Retrax, Injector scout the area for the Maximal base and report back to me. Terrorsoar you bring the traitor into the ship.

Scrofanok: What shall I do?

Megatoran: Find the spider and scan for the nearest energon deposit

__Megatoran and Terrorsoar enter a prison holding and Terrorsoar drops

Dynobot into a cell__

Megatoran: Keep guard. When he wakes, be sure to alert me.

Terrorsaor: My talents could best be utilized on the battlefield. Not guarding an unconscious usurper.

Megatoran: I will give the commands Terroroar. You will do well to remember that, so that you do not end up like him (Dynobot)

__Megs turns and walks out__

Terrorsaur: And you would do well not to forget who put him there.
_____________________________________________________________________________________Scrofonok:

Scrofanok to Spindulas do you read me? <sccchhh> Spindulas?

Spindulas: Yes yes, what is it?

Scrofanok: Megatoran has ordered us to find energon.

Spindulas: I don’t have time for that now! There are more important things to be done!

Scrofanok: Nothing is more important that what Megatoran orders!

Spindulas : You’re a fool scrofanok!

Scrofanok: What?! Why you useless Arch… <scccchhhh> Spindulas?

Spindulas? ….At least I can claim all the glory when I do find the energon deposit for Megatoran!

__Retrax and Injector are on an open beach area looking for the Maximal shuttle the Axalon__

Retrax: I could have beaten Dynobot, if it weren’t for that show off Terrorsaur.

Injector: HAH! I could beat Megatoran! And become the leader of the Predicon!!

Retrax: You could barely beat a maintenance bot, let alone Megatoran.

__As they continue to bickering amongst themselves Jubator watches them in beast form__

Jubator: Talking animals? That can only mean one thing, Preds. Jubator to

Optimus Ive spotted a couple of nasty Preds.

Primal: Jubator, you are not to engage, report back to base.

Jubator: Cool your jets Optimus this cat can handle these two.

Poggletrap: Ah to be young and stupid

Primal: Jubator, hang on we are sending back up.

Poggletrap: Who’s the backup?

Rattleox: We are.

Poggletrap: Nu uh, Hey if he wants to go and play hero and get himself scrapped that’s all fine and good, but there’s no way I am going out there.

Primal: *Ahhhh* Fine you stay here and guard the ship. Rattleox and I will go give Jubator the back up.

__Rattlerox gives Poggletrap a look__

Poggletrap: Hey I am no coward, but you and Primal can take that heroic attitude right into the line of fire of the Predicons.

__Primal and Rattleox exit the ship__

Is this the story behind the designs of Beast Wars: Future that were circling round the Fan Art section quite some while ago? If so, I'll certainly be following this, I've been waiting for that story as I made some drawings for that thread myself, but they weren't as good as the mroe professional drawers i'm glad someone could use them to get inspired. I'll read trough this later, I've got no time for it now, but you may be certain, I'll be following this every day

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It is good eye! The thread has been resurrected here . Its always a pleasure to have new contributions to the cause, so if you want you can re-post your designs on that thread. And as far as not being as good as the other artists, they are all really cool people who can give you pointers without making you feel like you're below them...trust me look at my art compared to theirs heh heh. Well enjoy the read irregardless!

thanks!

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I've read it through. Not a bad start, but could you give your writings a double check before you post them? There are some minor mistakes that can be easily prevented. It's a bit confusing sometimes, but for the rest a very good start. Let's all hope this can be continued

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