Transformers 3 (Rewrite)

Stiles · 11-02-2009, 08:02 PM

Chapter 10

Optimus is seen heading towards the Nemesis. Ratchet had combined a F-22 with Optimus to let him fly. Shockwave has the Decepticons ready. He sends them after Optimus. Optimus is ready to die to protect earth. The Decepticons hit him at full force. They're unleashing attackes 360. optimus is holding his own until the image of Unicron is in view. Optimus blasts the Decepticons away and advances toward Unicron. Shockwave attacks Optimus from behind. Shockwave has the advantage. Unicron aids his servant by teleporting him around Optimus. Optimus is having the slg beat out of him when Unicron intervens.
Unicron: " Enough. The Prime's spark is fading. We will not have to worry any longer."

Shockwave: " Yesss!"

Megatron is flying along side Omega and Cindy when he is attacked by some stray drones.

Megatron: " You go on! I'll take care of these little shits!"

Cindy: " Omega you go ahead!"

Megatron: " I told you to go!"

Cindy: " I'm not leaving you!"

Cindy takes out her cannons and blasts several drones away. Megatron takes care of the rest.

Cindy: " Come on we have to help Optimus!"

The Autobots have reached Unicron and ready their weapons. Ironhide is ready for the onslaught. Nova is furious and wants to kill Shockwave. The others are ready for the end of a war.

Nova: " We do this for Cybertron! And for Optimus!"

Autobots: " For Optimus!"

Megatron: " Let's go kick some Decepticon skidplate!"

The Autobots charge the drones and Decepticons. Half are taken out by Omega and Grimlock. Cindy and Nova have gone to look for the Matrix, Optimus, and Shockwave. They find all three.

Shockwave: " Looking for someone?"

He kicks Optimus in front of Nova. Nova kneels down to his father. Optimus looks up at his son. Ironhide, Galvatron and Megatron barge in. Cindy is standing there looking at the Matrix then to Megatron. She nodds. Megatron attacks Shockwave. Galvatron follows close behind. Cindy has gone to retrieve the Matrix.

Cindy: " Nova! Get Optimus out of here!"

Nova: " Dad you're going to be okay. I promise."

Optimus: " I know."

Megatron and Galvatron are handing Shockwave his skidplate when Unicron nears a planet. Cindy looks to see Mars be engulfed.

Cindy: " Megatron! Galvatron! Get the Autobots out of here now!"

Megatron: " We aren't going to leave you!"

Cindy: " That's an order! Now do it!"

Stiles · 11-02-2009, 08:32 PM

Chapter 11

Nova has taken on Shockwave. Shockwave still ahs the teleportation but Nova still dodegs his hits.

Shockwave: " Only if your father was more agile he wouldn't be dying. Of course maybe if he was dead then Unicron wouldn't be killed and I would rule the universe. You know what I might as well kill him now."

Nova:" You leave alone or I'll..."

Shockwave: " You'll what cry to the human."

Shockwave aims his cannon at Optimus when Nova slams into him.

Nova: " You leave him alone!"

Cindy is on the ship watching from a hole in the roof. Optimus is lying by her.

Cindy: " Optimus please get up! We need you!"

Optimus: " I can't my spark is fading. I have no more to live for. I would rather die then see Unicron destroy earth."

Cindy: " Optimus don't say that. You have Nova to live for. You have Megatron and Galvatron. ironhide. Bumblebee. Ratchet. Sam. And you have me, and I need you know than ever. Please get up!"

Optimus's head sinks down to the floor and his optics flicker.

Cindy: " Optimus! Please! Please don't leave me! Not you! It can't be you! Please! Nova needs you! OPTIMUS!"

It was no use he had not heard her. She began to cry when Nova landed next to her.

Cindy: " He's gone. He's gone."

Nova: " No. No! NO! NO, NO, NO! This can't be happening! Dad please, not you! I still need you!"

Cindy looks down at the Matrix. She picks it up. She looks at Nova. She relizes it wasn't Optimus who was supposed to open the Matrix it was Nova.

Cindy: " Nova! Take the Matrix!"

Nova: " What!? No I can't..."

Cindy: " Nova listen to me! Take the Matrix! You need to open it! If you don't, Optimus would have done this in vain! Go! Open the Matrix!"

Nova leaves Cindy and Optimus.

Stiles · 11-02-2009, 09:25 PM

Chapter 12

Megatron: " Optimus."

Galvatron: " What happened?"

Cindy: " Shockwave."

Megatron: " Where's Nova?"

Cindy points toward Unicron. Nova can be seen fighting off Shockwave. Megatron goes to help him.

Galvatron: " Cindy."

Cindy looks up.

Galvatron: " You need to take out my spark."

Cindy: " What? Why? I can't!"

Galvatron: " I am just a clone. Optimus is more important than me. Now please!"

Cindy: " How?"

Ratchet and Ironhide followed Megatron and Galvatron back to the Nemesis. They overheard Galvatron.

Ratchet: " Galvatron are you sure you want to do that?"

Galvatron: " Yes."

Galvatron rips out his spark and lands in front of Cindy.

Ratchet: " Ironhide help me."

Ironhide: " Right."

They open Optimus's spark chamber and take out his spark. Ratchet places Galvatron's spark and connects the cables. Nothing happened. Cindy looks one more time at Nova. He amde to Unicron and is about ready to open the Matrix when Shockwave blasts a hole in the Nemesis. Cindy is knocked to the ground. She falls unconscious. Cindy has a vision of Nova opening the Matrix then sees the Seven Prime's. They tell Cindy, that when Nova opens the Matrix, Optimus's life will be restored and Shockwave will be dead. Cindy wakes up and sees Nova. She opens a comlink to tell Nova. Nova gets the news and faces Unicron. Before Nova opens the Matrix, Unicron shots something out that hits Megatron.

Unicron: " You are rewarded for your trechery."

Nova: " Megatron!"

Megatron: " Open the Matrix!"

Nova looks at Megatron then at Unicron. Cindy, Ratchet, and Ironhide are watching.

Cindy: " Please let this work."

Nova: " I light our darkest hour! 'Til the day all are one!"

Nova opens the Matrix. A surge of light engulfs everything. The light stops. Unicron is gone. The light dissentegrated him. Nova looks at a black orb in front of him it is the saprk on Unicron. Nova reaches out and crushes it. The remaining dust is sucked into the Matrix. Nova looks at it for a moment and turns to Megatron. He helps Megatron out of a black sticky substance.

Megatron: " Thanks, kid. Optimus would be proud of you."

Nova: " Dad!'

Nova and Megatron rush over to the now destroyed Nemesis. Shockwave is lying on the ground his spark gone. Nova looks around and sees Galvatron.

Nova: " He gave his life up for Optimus."

Megatron: " Oh, Galvatron. You were my best. I will not forget you."

Nova looks at Megatron and then to Cindy.

Cindy: " You did it!"

Nova: " Yeah."

Optimus steps out from the shadows and embraces his son.

Nova: " I thought I lost you, like mom."

Optimus: " Nova, I'm so proud."

Nova: " Thank you"

Optimus looks at his son then to Megatron.

Optimus: " Thank you."

Meagtron: " For what?"

Optimus: " For coming back."

Megatron: " I had to..."

Optimus: " Not to the Nemesis. To the cause. The war is over and you are no longer a Decepticon."

Megatron: " I'm sorry. For everything I have done to earth, Cybertron, your troops, and you."

Ironhide: " The war is finally over we can be in peace now."

Optimus: " Unicron is defeated and earth is safe."

Cindy: " Let's go home."

Omega followed Ironhide and waited for them.

Omega: " Sir? What happens now?"

Optimus: " We go back to earth. We are there to stay."

Stiles · 11-02-2009, 09:28 PM

Hey please feel free to leave comments. Good or bad. I don't care.

Stiles · 11-02-2009, 10:12 PM

Hey this is my last chapter. Please leave comments

Chapter 13
They arrive at New York where Megatron and Galvatron lead them and the Autobots just go crazy. The Twins are harassing Leo. Blurr and Prowl are racing in circles out of excitment. The Dinobots are bugging Wheeljack about puppies. Lennox is trying to get Simmons from Swoop. Sam is looking around for Cindy and Optimus. Sunstreaker and Sideswipe are trying to find Ironhide. And Drake and Derek are looking for Cindy. A news crew shows up and starts to ask a bunch of questions. Cindy finds Lennox and runs up to him. She jumps to hug him.

Cindy: " Thank you for letting me be apart of N.E.S.T."

Lennox: " Your welcome."

Cindy spots Sam and just tackles him. She lets him up.

Cindy: " Hi."

Sam: " I thought I lost both of you. I can't believe it."

Cindy: " Niether can I."

Sam: " So are you going back to Billings."

Cindy: " I don't know. I might stick around so that you guys don't get into anymore trouble."

Sam: " Trouble? Who said there was trouble?"

Cindy: " I'm definitley staying."

Sam: " Really? Then maybe you want to be my friend?"

Cindy: " Sam Witwicky. Are you saying you want me to be your girlfriend?"

Sam kneels down.

Sam: " I want you to be more than my friend or girlfriend. I know I'll have to wait but...

Cindy: " You have to wait two years but yes."

Sam: " Yes!"

The Autobots head back to base. Later that night. Optimus is standing on the bay when Cindy, Sam, and Nova join him.

Cindy: " So Optimus? If Nova were to just, I don't know, push you into the bay what would you do?"

Optimus: " Why?"

Nova pushes Optimus into the water. Optimus gets back up and looks at his son.

Cindy: " O my God. Nova run!"

Optimus tackles Nova and both mechs nearly crush the two humans.

Sam: " Hey watch where you're going."

Nova: " Sorry, Sam."

They look up to the sky.

Optimus(closing naration): " With Unicron gone and peace restored to the Universe, I can't help but wonder. What will happen in our futures on this planet. The humans have sacrifced their lives to help us. Many have sacrificed themselves to end the war. But we still need each other. I have seen courage in the youngest Autobots and humans. Our freedom has been granted. I am Optimus Prime, and I send this message to anyone willing to listen. We are home and we are not leaving."

*Linkin Park song*

*End credits*

Shadow25 · 11-02-2009, 11:05 PM

I like what I've read, but I think it would benefit from more descriptions. Right away you begin with dialogue and its a bit unclear what is actually happening. I like the characterization of Megatron, as well as the four TF1 Autobots. Good job overall.

Stiles · 11-02-2009, 11:29 PM

Thank you?