My Version of 2010 Transformers Cartoon

This is my idea for the next Transformers cartoon series rumored to come out in 2010.

In this cartoon, I plan to include as many Transformers characters as I can. Many will have one time cameos and may not even say anything but they will be seen. Beast Wars characters..... not so much but any other ones expect to see them.

Think of the new theme song to go with this as a rock/alternative/little tiny bit of metal version of the G1 song. It won't be too insane because this will be targeted for somewhat young audiences (mainly towards 9-12 year olds I guess).

This first episode would be the hour long intro episode. And yes, I did edit this intro part a bit.
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Scene fades in to outer space. Music is obviously playing but it is something slow and low key. Out of nowhere comes a rumbling, then a cluster of blue glowing cubes go flying past followed by a few more clusters.

The screen cuts to another view of space and hundreds of glowing cube clusters fly past making an alarmingly large fleet.

Again, cut to another part of space, but there is a planet covered with grass and dirt making a green and brown pattern. The screen fade jumps in slowly to zoom into the planet and it gets close enough to see a large high tech looking building. Inside we see an alien (flesh alien not a robot) hitting the ground as if he was thrown down. He looks very old and has blue skin (naturally) and a long white mustache/beard combo. The screen cuts, then pans up to see a towering gray and black robot with red eyes that brighten then dim in a flash. The robot stoops down to face the trembling alien an says in a sinister voice:

"Now... enlighten me to where all of the energon went"

"Pl-please Lord Megatron! We swear to you that we didn't see anything even close to energon flying by here!" says the alien.

"That I find difficult to believe," growls Megatron. The screen shifts upwards as Megatron lifts his head to look at a very high tech looking observatory with flashing computer panels, telescopes, and screens.

"Now, fleshling. I will give you one last chance to tell me what direction the energon is headed, or you and your planet will suffer the consequences," an angry Megatron growled.

"If I knew for sure, I would tell you, but we never actually could tell where it was headed it jus-" The alien realized that he had said too much. Megatron's scowl deepens and he raises a hand and it begins to glow orange.

"Wait! Mighty Megatron, hear me!" the alien desperately cries. Megatron's arm cannon starts to charge up with light as well. "M-M-Megatron we can help you figure it out... jus-" The glow gets almost to blinding levels. "STOOOOOOOOP!!!!! DEAR PRIMUS STOP!" screams the alien. Other have gathered around behind to watch in horror.

The screen jump cuts out to the exterior of the observatory and the windows glow bright orange. Then an enormous shock wave comes blasting out and starts a chain reaction of explosions. The whole planet is seen getting engulfed in plasma explosions and a stream of fire comes off of the surface like a comet. The screen cuts to Megatron surrounded by fire blasting away from the planet unharmed with an angry scowl on his face. His eye twitches a little along with his lower jaw. The screen slowly zooms into his face until only his eyes are visible. They do the glow-dim thing again.

Cut to Mars and energon zooming past it. More is seen off in the distance approaching an asteroid cluster. Cut to a side view of the asteroids- many are seen blowing past them and a few burn through some asteroids, dragging bits of it along behind. Another cut to the moon and some colliding into the surface of the dark side and some skimming the top. At last a wide shot of Earth with clusters coming down in all kinds of spots on the planet. Many are seen zooming past it but just as many are seen hitting the surface. The screen begins to rise up until the top of Earth is seen and the sun peeking over it and the title comes up with an epic slower remix on the theme song playing in the background louder and louder.

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I have not come up with a title yet. Next update I will introduce all of the other TF's we are all familiar with... Autobots and Decepticons alike. I will post names at the end of each time that I intro a new character so you know that it is that character (not all names will be mentioned but all will be described.) Hope you like this intro. The end of each update will be a commercial break for the hour long specials like this one. All episodes will be one post and I will try to get one out a week, no promises. I have my comic that I am doing at the same time so bear with the updates. If one isn't being updated much, go to the other and check out what's new on that one. Thanks :cool

Awesome so far!

Originally Posted by Optimus Prime You'll never stop at one... I'll take you all on!

Interesting start. I'll be looking forward to seeing where it goes.

Sorry it's been so long for an update, I don't have regular access to a computer (I use my PSP to use the site normally). Lets move on with the first intro episode.

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Clusters of Energon fall through Earth's atmosphere. Many of them catch fire as they fall. We see a city with clouds over it and the sky is pulsating with blue and orange. Energon shoots through these clouds and make impact with the ground. We see people's startled reactions and them fleeing screaming as buildings and other things catch fire.

Similar things happen in the ocean, in smaller towns, in military bases, in museums, in scientific observatories, and on a space station right above Earth.

After some energon is seen coming down in a field, a small fenced in dirt area is seen with a few old cars. Only four of them seem operational: a red and blue semi truck, an old burgandy pickup truck, a Voltswagon Beetle like car, and a grey and white police cruiser.

Blue light flashes like a strobe light inside of the windows of the cars. Then doors, windows, hoods, and trunks begin to slide and shift and the semi rises up first. A part of the semi truck rises up then melts and morphs into a head and the "eyes" flicker on blue.


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Sorry it was so short. More sometime later.

What the bleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep?

Is this good or bad? Sorry about the boring intro, once the factions settle and the main characters are introduced.

Um, I like it so far. Don't know what peaughjr2 means with that. You have to take time to set up the story, even if its boring (though I didn't find yours to be boring), because that will make the good stuff even good-er.

~ Commercial Break ~

The semi truck stands staring blankly. The pickup, Beetle, and police cruiser go through similar transformations. They exchange equally confused glances. The semi suddenly turns his head and his eyes glows.

Semi: Whatever has happened to us, it must be for a reason," says the semi looking up towards the clear, starry sky.

Beetle: Well, at least we're more like those things that used to drive us around now. And maybe that will make them want us again!" says the Voltswagon cheerfully in a young sounding voice.

Pickup: Doubt it. Those "people" want good looking, loud, fast moving cars and trucks. Nothing even close to us," grunts the old pickup grumpily.

Beetle: Hey! Speak for yourself about the good looking part you old rust bucket!" says the Beetle.

As they argue some more, the screen is focused on a camera sitting on the fence. It flashes suddenly (like it took a picture) and falls off of the fence post into some very tall grass. Three smaller robots made up of three parts of the camera itself come out. They look very confused and make little gargly and gibberish like noises.

Pickup: And who knows if we even can roll anymore. Maybe we are permanently this way.

Beetle: Oh really? Well watch this.

With that, the Beetle shifts down into a Voltswagon Beetle again. The pickup truck morphs down into the truck again too and says "Oh."

The semi is focused on again and he still has the deep-in-thought look. he glances up and the background shows a city on fire. As if in a trance, the semi starts walking towards it, crushing the wire gate containing the car lot as he walks on it. The other cars transform back into robots. The pickup truck robot steps forward.

Pickup: Hey where ya goin'?

The semi doesn't answer. He transforms and drives toward the city. The screen looks back at the pickup truck robot shaking his head and the three camera robots stumbling around. The flash function robot runs into the pickup's foot and falls over stupidly.
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Obviously, the 5 robots introduced are as follows:

- Optimus Prime (Semi truck)
- Bumblebee (Voltswagon Beetle)
- Ironhide (Old Pickup Truck)
- Prowl (Police Cruiser)
- Reflector (Digital Camera)

They won't go by their TF names until they are officially "named" by the human characters. Another thing, the factions won't come into play for a while but for now all TFs are neutral towards each other but some of the Decepticons will be somewhat easy to pick out based on how they interact with humans.

Middle Eastern Military Base

A lot of commotion has been caused.

There are troops running around everywhere carrying weapons and water buckets. Some were hauling things away from the destruction and others were inspecting what hit the base.

Inside a war room there are a bunch of stressed out people talking about what just happened. A general tries to calm everyone down humorously. They speculate about an attack and the general assures them nothing to be excited or worried about. Someone runs into the room and says something like "Sir, you've got to see this."

The general walks outside followed by everyone who was in the war room and they all stare in awe and terror.

A whole squad of planes were standing before them. They looked down curiously.

Plane #1: Wellllllll, if it isn't general loud-mouth and his band of control freaks. Quite interesting how you "oh so great and powerful" commanders order around someone as mighty and majestic as I am. Well NO MORE! Now that this mysterious happening granted me the ability to actually communicate with you fools, I wish to rule you!

Plane #2: Uh, I thought you said we all was gunna rule them an' stuff

Plane #3: Yeah, yeah! And how we're like superior beings or somethin' who together hold the key to-

Plane #1: SHUT UP! SHUT! UP! you.....idiots...... I am speaking, and as your leader, I command you to be quiet!

Plane #4: Hey! Who says you're the boss of us?

Plane #2: Yeah man, what a jip!

Plane #1: SILENCE! I haven't finished my speech to the flesh beings yet! For pity's sake....

Plane #3: 'Ey! Youse said we don't have pity for nobody here.

Plane #1: WHY ARE YOU NOT LISTENING TO ME!?!?!?!?

The exchange goes on as a general's advisor whispers to him "Should we ready the heavy artillery?"

General Munk: No. Let's back off and get out of here before they start talking to us again and we'll regroup with Bravo Team at Rally Point Alpha.

Advisor: Uhhh sir. They are in just about the same situation as we are.....

General Munk: Blast! (To Everyone) Run for it boys!

The humans scatter in every direction while the jets bicker. One of them: an orange, yellow and white one sees the humans escaping and tries to tell Plane #1 (he is white with red and blue on different decorations). He tells him off and jumps back into an arguement and the yellow orange and white plane stands shaking his head at the escaping humans.
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As you can tell, these are Decepticons-to-be. And not just any Decepticons. They are the Seekers

- Starscream (Plane #1)
- Thundercracker (Plane #2)
- Skywarp (Plane #3)
- Acid Storm (Plane #4)
- Sunstorm (Yellow, Orange, and white plane)

The ones referenced as at the Bravo base are Bludgeon, Blitzwing, Breakaway, Blackout, and Blades. Those guys will come into play a bit later.

Hope you guys are enjoying this. I am trying to get better as more updates come.

~Commercial Break~

A montage begins that will show a lot more Transformers that have been "born"

Energon comes down into an ocean from space. We see it hit the water and make a massive wave. A light blue shockwave goes out and hits a naval fleet. Right then and there a few of the heaviest hit boats morph into humanoid shapes and exchange looks. They zoom off away from the other ships and a few planes are seen taking off from an aircraft carrier. Then the aircraft carrier transforms and an artillery gun climbs up to its shoulder and nods at it.

In space, a cluster of energon breezes a sattelite and it transforms almost instantly. It says in a robotic and at the same time musical and monotone voice "Tracking data".

A scientific observatory is seen and energon hits the building. A van there transforms, so does a microscope on a desk.

In the woods, a jeep is seen flicker blue on the inside and it transforms. It looks off into the distance, smirks and transforms back and drives off with a family in a campsite runs out after it in complete shock.

A news report is seen on a TV in an old couples house and the female reporter reports on electronic devices everywhere are turning into humanoid, intelligent robots and havoc has ensued around the world. The wife calls out to the husband to stop watching so much sci fi television it isn't good for him and he acts like "ehhh whatever". Out in their driveway, a truck is seen driving out of it.

The montage goes at a faster pace showing only energon hitting and electronics lighting up with the same blue glow. It ends with the semi truck seen in the beginning's headlights as it races to the burning city.
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A lot was seen here but....

- Tidal Wave
- Shockwave
- Seaspray
- Depthcharge
- Hound
- Soundwave
- Perceptor
- Scattorshot
- Huffer

Among others were shown but not named or even introduced fully. Things are picking up whether I am showing that they are or not, but the energon has stopped falling just so you know